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Nacia 05-07-2018 12:52 PM

love is
 
love easy
slightly cheesy

love clever
is endeavour

but love true
is for those
that needs it
the most
and that's you
but
only with a view
that to treat right
is the new

life is a little eloquent
correct and collect
or it is delinquent.

fleamailman 05-08-2018 06:11 AM

(of course the goblin loved the poem, but more to the point he loved seeing Nacia returned here too, saying "...her honeymoon perhaps, maternity leave then, or just prison as usual, naah please don't dampen my imagination here with such inconveniences as the truth now, instead say nothing and leave me just wondering which one it was then...", and with that the goblin's sunny day was made, somehow the goblin knew women should always be mysterious where men should be dependable)

Nacia 05-08-2018 10:19 AM

hello fleamailman nice to see you here.:p
loving your feedback and yes women may be mysterious but men more curious
investigative which makes it all the worth a while.
I was just taking a break and oh I did correct the piece but it was not quite right
it is now I think it reads better
see you around again :)

Prodigalson 05-08-2018 10:53 PM

Yes, good to see you back, Nacia.

Nacia 05-10-2018 02:15 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Prodigalson (Post 744699)
Yes, good to see you back, Nacia.

Prodigalson thank you nice to be back :winkiss:

PickleBottom 05-11-2018 12:10 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Nacia (Post 744656)
love easy
slightly cheesy

love clever
is endeavour

but love true
is for those
that needs it
the most
and that's you
but
only with a view
that to treat right
is the new
because
without eloquence
life is a little delinquent.

Love is seeing Nacia back!

Nacia 05-11-2018 02:35 AM

PickleBottom thank you and it is very nice for you to say that :)


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