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stellarworld 10-16-2010 12:30 PM

A Soaring Few - Metaphor
 
A Soaring Few

If writings are a feather's wisp
to beat against the sky.
Then we together craft in this
a wing with which to fly.

This forum as a mother's coo
challenges us for more.
Each lesson like a higher view
inspires us to soar.

inzombniac 01-31-2011 11:26 PM

I hate birds. But I don't think this could have been conveyed any better. Well written and it imbues a sense of attachment to the forums. Thank you for sharing!

Angie 02-06-2011 06:12 AM

Oh, I think they should make this a sticky in the main part of the forum or something, like a poetic introduction. Very nice.

doriswullf 08-31-2017 06:27 AM

Very nice))

Chinspinner 09-02-2017 12:22 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by stellarworld (Post 358692)
A Soaring Few

If writings are a feather's wisp
to beat against the sky.
Then we together craft in this
a wing with which to fly.

This forum as a mother's coo
challenges us for more.
Each lesson like a higher view
inspires us to soar.

the eagle's wing,
the angel sing's
The rest of this is a waste of time...


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