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Forum: Writers' Cafe 08-31-2007, 08:26 AM
Replies: 7,466
Please Read: The Coffee Shop
Views: 247,380
Posted By tarakan
*Slumps into a corner chair* "It's really...

*Slumps into a corner chair*

"It's really gone down hill since Mr B last visited. No latte, no icebergs...what's a caffeine, choco ice cream 'holic to do?"

"Hey! Let's write stories on the...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 08-31-2007, 06:32 AM
Replies: 7,466
Please Read: The Coffee Shop
Views: 247,380
Posted By tarakan
And one for me to! Latte with a white chocolate...

And one for me to! Latte with a white chocolate iceberg please. *carefully steps over poets lining the floor*

"Is this some sort of dead poets society or are you just sleeping?"
Forum: Writers' Cafe 08-28-2007, 06:50 AM
Replies: 7,466
Please Read: The Coffee Shop
Views: 247,380
Posted By tarakan
Thanks, but I have my eye on the crusting, dollop...

Thanks, but I have my eye on the crusting, dollop of jam just above the picture of Starpanda, and below Mr Baatard's framed boxing gloves, but I recall it being there last month so it might be a tad...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 08-28-2007, 04:30 AM
Replies: 7,466
Please Read: The Coffee Shop
Views: 247,380
Posted By tarakan
Thankis for asking...fine, just going through a...

Thankis for asking...fine, just going through a wobble in the middle bit of the Tarquin Jenkins novel, hopefully be through it soon!

Will post a short piece in the VIP members area soon.
...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 08-27-2007, 10:28 PM
Replies: 7,466
Please Read: The Coffee Shop
Views: 247,380
Posted By tarakan
Hi Brittany, Please excuse the group of...

Hi Brittany,

Please excuse the group of people standing in the coffee shop discussing poems...if they don'y buy something soon, I'll call Mr Baatard to remove them...

Latte iceberg with a...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 08-06-2007, 05:11 AM
Replies: 7,466
Please Read: The Coffee Shop
Views: 247,380
Posted By tarakan
Ha ha ha ha.......sorry, just saw the...

Ha ha ha ha.......sorry, just saw the quote.....need a latte.....ha ha ha ha
Forum: Fiction 08-03-2007, 09:25 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 847
Posted By tarakan
Very good, didn't get the conclusion until the...

Very good, didn't get the conclusion until the end. One suggestion; Why not show the label on the page, rather than 'the label read'. You can then play around with names of the water makers, and give...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 07-30-2007, 06:07 AM
Replies: 7,466
Please Read: The Coffee Shop
Views: 247,380
Posted By tarakan
"Your wish is my command, oh liege..." Turns...

"Your wish is my command, oh liege..."

Turns to bar. "Two frappe lattes with Belgium icebergs...treat yourself SP!"
Forum: Writers' Cafe 07-30-2007, 04:24 AM
Replies: 7,466
Please Read: The Coffee Shop
Views: 247,380
Posted By tarakan
All hail the Panda! *goes down in...

All hail the Panda!

*goes down in supplication on bended knee*
Forum: The Notice Board 07-30-2007, 12:43 AM
Replies: 55
Views: 4,930
Posted By tarakan
Membership...

Lay it on me baby!
Forum: Inkster Incorporated 07-16-2007, 02:19 AM
Replies: 28
Views: 2,399
Posted By tarakan
I think we all can learn from others. Even a...

I think we all can learn from others. Even a negative Starrwriter is a fascinating beast we can take something from!

For me, I will happily go the extra couple of thousand words, or comment on...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 07-10-2007, 02:59 AM
Replies: 7,466
Please Read: The Coffee Shop
Views: 247,380
Posted By tarakan
No time travelling chairs, I have a patent on...

No time travelling chairs, I have a patent on them.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 07-10-2007, 02:12 AM
Replies: 7,466
Please Read: The Coffee Shop
Views: 247,380
Posted By tarakan
I think you're right, a Griddleback would be no...

I think you're right, a Griddleback would be no match for a rampant Panda and a menacing Josie...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 07-10-2007, 12:14 AM
Replies: 7,466
Please Read: The Coffee Shop
Views: 247,380
Posted By tarakan
Gross! Latte with a Blegium iceberg...

Gross!

Latte with a Blegium iceberg please...haven't seen the Panda lately, or Josie? Waats up?
Forum: Free Writing 07-03-2007, 10:24 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 845
Posted By tarakan
This is good, rough admittedly, but it would make...

This is good, rough admittedly, but it would make the start of a novel. I'd want to read more because it is so quirky. Don't ditch it, get writing, let's see some more!

Space travelling ice cream...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 07-03-2007, 10:18 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,957
Posted By tarakan
I always thought of giraffes as cold blooded...

I always thought of giraffes as cold blooded killers, but you wouldn't get many on a plane, and anyway, passengers would notice. It would be a very short film

"Hey! There's a killer giraffe!"
...
Forum: Fiction 06-29-2007, 02:40 AM
Replies: 28
Views: 1,958
Posted By tarakan
self-confidence and self belief takes time, but...

self-confidence and self belief takes time, but the more you post the more WB members can comment and the more you will grow.

T
Forum: Fiction 06-28-2007, 09:21 PM
Replies: 28
Views: 1,958
Posted By tarakan
Absolutely spot on Sarcazmo! Also try:...

Absolutely spot on Sarcazmo!

Also try: www.chronicles-network.com for science fiction and fantasy.

Tarakan
Forum: Writers' Cafe 06-28-2007, 05:37 AM
Replies: 7,466
Please Read: The Coffee Shop
Views: 247,380
Posted By tarakan
Iam Here! Working hard on my novel just like old...

Iam Here! Working hard on my novel just like old J K. *Looks around* oh, hadn't noticed the lights had gone out? Mr Baatard was here an hour ago, Panda too.

Hey, let's help ourselves!

Two...
Forum: Fiction 06-27-2007, 02:00 AM
Replies: 28
Views: 1,958
Posted By tarakan
You shouldn't stop writing, just be flexible and...

You shouldn't stop writing, just be flexible and let you imagination flow. Somethings will work and others won't. That is where WB comes in. If people know your work and are wedded to it, they will...
Forum: Fiction 06-27-2007, 01:25 AM
Replies: 28
Views: 1,958
Posted By tarakan
Right, take this with a pinch of salt, but I...

Right, take this with a pinch of salt, but I really think you need to hear this!

I trawl through the WB fiction and SS Club, and rarely do I come across such an original piece.

Put this away...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 06-26-2007, 01:53 AM
Replies: 7,466
Please Read: The Coffee Shop
Views: 247,380
Posted By tarakan
*Walks in and sees the Panda being battered with...

*Walks in and sees the Panda being battered with ideas*

Oi! leave the Panada alone!

I fancy a mocca chocca...hi Mr B, how's it hangin'?
Forum: Fiction 06-26-2007, 01:26 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 881
Posted By tarakan
Hi Cuchulain, I enjoyed the piece, but you...

Hi Cuchulain,

I enjoyed the piece, but you will need to take a hard long look at your style and clarity in writing. I started looking at the beginning, my thoughts below;

Jilten picked his...
Forum: Fiction 06-25-2007, 07:27 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 763
Posted By tarakan
Dear Invisigirl, I haven’t critiqued for a...

Dear Invisigirl,

I haven’t critiqued for a while so if this is cumbersome I apologise. Take my redraft with a pinch of salt, but I do hope you find something worthwhile.

Tarakan

Fantasy-...
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 06-25-2007, 01:52 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 2,078
Posted By tarakan
I can thoroughly recommend bouncing ideas off...

I can thoroughly recommend bouncing ideas off Panda (now there's a picture!).

All I can add is stay open to your new ideas and be prepared to throw everything in the air and rejig it. You may...
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