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Forum: Previous Contests 12-27-2012, 02:26 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 6,274
Posted By Mystick10
BLUE FULL MOON REFLECTIONS: "A little girl...

BLUE FULL MOON REFLECTIONS:

"A little girl was walking through the border between reality and a mirror. Her legs were trembling and her steps unstable, and part of her was awfully scared, but her...
Forum: Free Writing 12-21-2012, 08:57 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 822
Posted By Mystick10
Wait, what? I'm pretty sure I read the word...

Wait, what? I'm pretty sure I read the word 'stupid' somewhere! Well, I guess I'm lazy like that. It would be pointless to discuss with you anyway, generalizing the young generation stating we will...
Forum: Free Writing 12-21-2012, 07:46 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 822
Posted By Mystick10
EDIT (because it's necessary): My sincere...

EDIT (because it's necessary):

My sincere apologize to both of you guys. To Gritsy, for (kind of) ruining a beautiful post. To Domenic, for unfairly stating you criticized the younger generation....
Forum: Previous Contests 12-02-2012, 01:52 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 5,896
Posted By Mystick10
I gazed upon my reflection... and found an...

I gazed
upon my reflection...
and found
an evolution.
What's your reflection? ~




(lazy entry is lazy.)
Forum: Free Writing 11-21-2012, 04:18 PM
Replies: 301
Views: 67,100
Posted By Mystick10
I think I never wrote about a couple before....

I think I never wrote about a couple before. ANYWAYS, here's something I wrote in about 10 minutes. Read it, if you want, I can't guarantee it's good =)


"Liz glanced at Malcolm, surprised. Her...
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 11-20-2012, 05:56 PM
Replies: 64
Views: 5,785
Posted By Mystick10
"I thought FIN meant End in French." Fin is 'the...

"I thought FIN meant End in French." Fin is 'the end' in Spanish (maybe in another language too). Learn your Spanish guys!! (you know, it's easy to say that when it's the language you speak every...
Forum: Poetry 11-04-2012, 07:32 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 346
Posted By Mystick10
*Poesía, no poesia. Learn your Spanish!! ...

*Poesía, no poesia. Learn your Spanish!!

Nice work =)
The word 'free' on the third line doesn't seem right. Don't you mean 'freedom'?
Forum: Poetry 11-02-2012, 04:24 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 436
Posted By Mystick10
Dangit! You discovered my secret =(

Dangit! You discovered my secret =(
Forum: Poetry 11-01-2012, 06:53 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 436
Posted By Mystick10
Six words! Too short for fiction

But history tends to repeat...
Fuck!
Forum: Fiction 10-26-2012, 04:38 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 2,261
Posted By Mystick10
Nice second part to the story! :D It seems like...

Nice second part to the story! :D
It seems like it's some kind of draft, though. I, as a reader, feel like you want to tell us there is some kind of internal fight within Holiday, between his...
Forum: Fiction 10-22-2012, 03:37 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 638
Posted By Mystick10
Chrismart: thanks! =) redrobin62: you mean...

Chrismart: thanks! =)

redrobin62: you mean enclosing the story with quotation marks?
Forum: Fiction 10-21-2012, 05:28 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,754
Posted By Mystick10
This 'beginning of a' story was good enough to...

This 'beginning of a' story was good enough to make me keep reading it, despite being that long. I'm not usually interested in reading such long things, but this one I read without regrets. Good job!...
Forum: Fiction 10-21-2012, 03:56 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 638
Posted By Mystick10
Thank you! =D I don't really know what a...

Thank you! =D

I don't really know what a 'hand-me-down story' is, so you can tell I created it. Nice to know you consider it a pleasant story- I thought everyone was going to HATE it!
Forum: Fiction 10-21-2012, 11:15 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 638
Posted By Mystick10
Sleepy Sabrina and the Menacing Death (537 words)

Finally got around to 'traduce' this text in my oh-so-horrible English! =D
I wrote the story about two weeks ago, but only spent time 'traducing' it today. I've never written anything like this - it...
Forum: Fiction 10-21-2012, 07:36 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 598
Posted By Mystick10
It IS a short story! I like it, but feel the...

It IS a short story!

I like it, but feel the second paragraph isn't as good as the first one. I won't tell you to correct anything, but I feel the second paragraph is kind of 'rushed' - telling...
Forum: Board Games 10-18-2012, 05:56 PM
Replies: 96
Views: 4,926
Posted By Mystick10
cool Bieber

cool Bieber
Forum: The Library 10-17-2012, 05:16 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 2,165
Posted By Mystick10
Metamorphosis was... new, refreshing maybe. I...

Metamorphosis was... new, refreshing maybe. I don't think I appreciated it a lot back when I read it (I think I was 12), and if I read it today (three years later) I suppose I'd have the same...
Forum: Fiction 09-25-2012, 01:13 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 546
Posted By Mystick10
Nice - short and sweet (I hope I got the...

Nice - short and sweet (I hope I got the expression right). By the way, is Akshdeep really a name? xD
Forum: Free Writing 09-21-2012, 06:39 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 985
Posted By Mystick10
Very good, very good. As Shelly said, the...

Very good, very good. As Shelly said, the sentence "Education ain't worth a dime" is pretty nice.
Forum: Poetry 09-21-2012, 06:23 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 433
Posted By Mystick10
Interesting take on the original 'nursery rhyme'....

Interesting take on the original 'nursery rhyme'. The boiling part made me think of Hansel & Gretel.

The structure of the poem reminds me of the song Maggie M'Gill. Ever listened to it? It's a...
Forum: Classifieds 08-17-2012, 09:04 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,004
Posted By Mystick10
Being a fan of video games, I must say - I love...

Being a fan of video games, I must say - I love the idea of the game!! It's pretty original, and I'll gladly contribute with my own idea for a story.

Ok, so... while reading the post, I came...
Forum: Poetry 08-14-2012, 12:37 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 337
Posted By Mystick10
Thanks! =D Although, from what I know, there...

Thanks! =D

Although, from what I know, there is more than one pattern of haiku: 5-7-5, 5-6-5, 5-6-7, etc.
Forum: Poetry 08-14-2012, 11:30 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 337
Posted By Mystick10
Cosmic Love

I wrote a haiku! (in English) =)
It is a first one for me.
Its structure is of 5-6-5, and it doesn't include any season, reason as to why it technically isn't a haiku.

Anyway, enjoy! =D
...
Forum: Poetry 08-13-2012, 02:21 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 850
Posted By Mystick10
You didn't miss much ;) Just a silly question at...

You didn't miss much ;) Just a silly question at the end, and the addition of 'snuggle up' at the beginning of the poem.

As for the last stanza... the poem is meant to talk about time and to scale...
Forum: Poetry 08-08-2012, 03:27 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 850
Posted By Mystick10
Brilliant! =D Your take on the poem is loveable,...

Brilliant! =D Your take on the poem is loveable, Drew! I think I'll take the idea (unless you don't want me to!) =)

Thanks!
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