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Forum: Board Games 12-06-2016, 03:26 AM
Replies: 56
Views: 14,693
Posted By SavannaPeterson
The Dallas Cowboys are kicking some ass. ...

The Dallas Cowboys are kicking some ass.

You know it's Tuesday...
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 02-07-2016, 01:35 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 3,317
Posted By SavannaPeterson
People forget that rape is about power, violence...

People forget that rape is about power, violence and control, not sexual gratification.
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 02-05-2016, 01:29 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 2,834
Posted By SavannaPeterson
Just shooting from the hip here as I've never...

Just shooting from the hip here as I've never actually been in a gang, but ordering someone to kill someone is conspiracy to commit murder. If I was running a gang I think I'd start smaller until I...
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 02-05-2016, 05:15 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 2,834
Posted By SavannaPeterson
Tana French wrote a pretty cool novel about an...

Tana French wrote a pretty cool novel about an undercover assignment called The Likeness. It's been years since I've read it but it stands out in my mind as being quite a different take on the...
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 02-05-2016, 04:27 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 2,834
Posted By SavannaPeterson
Is their reasons why an undercover cop would work alone in this case?

Years of cop shows and police procedurals have taught me the difference in a sting operation and going undercover. In a sting operation the sting is relatively short and cop is generally wired and...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 02-03-2016, 10:25 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,198
Posted By SavannaPeterson
My husband snoring. It's comforting. And rain...

My husband snoring. It's comforting. And rain rain rain.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 02-03-2016, 10:20 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 636
Posted By SavannaPeterson
I love to cook and never tire of trying new...

I love to cook and never tire of trying new cuisines, but my very favorite, my comfort food, my last meal should I ever become a hardened criminal and wind up on death row, is a grilled cheese...
Forum: Introductions 08-20-2015, 10:31 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 643
Posted By SavannaPeterson
Barely

Barely
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 07-25-2015, 09:03 PM
Replies: 68
Views: 7,357
Posted By SavannaPeterson
Did you write it?

Did you write it?
Forum: Writers' Cafe 07-23-2015, 03:41 AM
Replies: 43
Views: 3,462
Posted By SavannaPeterson
I didn't think you were going to eat it.

I didn't think you were going to eat it.
Forum: Free Writing 07-16-2015, 03:13 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 3,012
Posted By SavannaPeterson
It's in your emoticons on the last page of the...

It's in your emoticons on the last page of the nature and weather tab. 717
Forum: Free Writing 07-16-2015, 03:36 AM
Replies: 20
Views: 3,012
Posted By SavannaPeterson
Please do. Can you ever have too many crazy...

Please do. Can you ever have too many crazy relatives? 🌀
Forum: Writers' Cafe 07-16-2015, 03:14 AM
Replies: 166
Views: 8,401
Posted By SavannaPeterson
...How the civil war started...

I know Brian in real life, and consider him to be a good friend. He's a lot of things, but dumb is not one of them. He's a hardworking, loving, caring husband and father who's overcome so much shit...
Forum: Free Writing 07-15-2015, 07:47 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 3,012
Posted By SavannaPeterson
It's precisely for those family members who don't...

It's precisely for those family members who don't recognize sarcasm or misunderstand what is being said and get angry that the Sarclamation Point was adopted. It works like a charm. The rest of us...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 07-14-2015, 10:50 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,016
Posted By SavannaPeterson
Says the guy in Crocks with socks. ;-)

Says the guy in Crocks with socks. ;-)
Forum: Lyrics 07-14-2015, 10:46 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,151
Posted By SavannaPeterson
Minimalist

A fun and trendy topic. I like the sound you've created. 2 places that didn't flow quite right for me were the repeat of the word three and the lines about dating young women. As soon as you said...
Forum: Free Writing 07-14-2015, 10:36 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 3,012
Posted By SavannaPeterson
All of my extended family uses what we call a...

All of my extended family uses what we call a 'sarclamation point'. It's this emoticon 🌀 after a sarcastic sentence. You might laugh, but it's saved us a lot of misunderstandings and while it was...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 07-14-2015, 10:28 PM
Replies: 30
Views: 2,116
Posted By SavannaPeterson
I'm anxious to read it, whether or not it's...

I'm anxious to read it, whether or not it's edited or offensive or just plain bad, I think it will offer insight into the writing process.
I read an article stating that Truman Capote said in a...
Forum: Free Writing 05-28-2015, 06:18 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 3,041
Posted By SavannaPeterson
The problem with my diagram is that it's linear,...

The problem with my diagram is that it's linear, it should be a sphere, think of a fireworks show where at the reactive moment, the explosions happen one inside of the other expanding out out out in...
Forum: Non-Fiction 05-27-2015, 09:29 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 3,139
Posted By SavannaPeterson
This is a truly inspiring story and would easily...

This is a truly inspiring story and would easily be published. I'm going to read it with my kids tomorrow. Thank you for sharing.
Forum: Free Writing 05-27-2015, 09:06 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 3,041
Posted By SavannaPeterson
You've just described reproduction. Only, what if...

You've just described reproduction. Only, what if we did not assume that time was linear? What if we assumed instead that the probability wave was finite, but that the process was circular or...
Forum: Poetry 05-25-2015, 09:06 AM
Replies: 23
Views: 2,316
Posted By SavannaPeterson
LeWriter, this is beautiful. Really lovely. I...

LeWriter, this is beautiful. Really lovely. I admit I had to read it several times before the symbolism of the rain that parallels life and relationships made sense, but you were able to capture it...
Forum: Fiction 05-24-2015, 09:28 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 770
Posted By SavannaPeterson
I can tell you've put a lot of thought into this,...

I can tell you've put a lot of thought into this, but I'm terribly confused. If you asked me how many characters were in this piece I would not be able to tell you. If pressed to guess, I'd guess at...
Forum: Writing Markets 05-24-2015, 08:30 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 2,708
Posted By SavannaPeterson
I'm confused as to the nature of your concept....

I'm confused as to the nature of your concept. Your first post said you are creating a community of businesses. Your last post said the platform you create will look after the writer's interests. ...
Forum: Poetry 05-23-2015, 05:56 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 598
Posted By SavannaPeterson
I'm confused on which version/rewrite is what,...

I'm confused on which version/rewrite is what, but this is the best in my opinion. I'd only change the first sentence of the last verse to

A wave of wisdom washes over me
that I can only dimly...
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