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Forum: Poetry 03-22-2018, 07:03 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 917
Posted By Let Me Up
Those cryptic questionable black diamonds... I...

Those cryptic questionable black diamonds... I don't remember what they translate too... It's was 6am
Forum: Poetry 03-22-2018, 02:23 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 917
Posted By Let Me Up
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Forum: Poetry 09-11-2016, 02:03 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 962
Posted By Let Me Up
that is exactly what im guilty of nice to see...

that is exactly what im guilty of
nice to see you to. I dont always know where you are going in some poems. But the ones that do resonate do so deeply.
Forum: Poetry 09-11-2016, 01:35 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 962
Posted By Let Me Up
a relapse from expressing?

a relapse from expressing?
Forum: Poetry 09-11-2016, 11:46 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 816
Posted By Let Me Up
crafted inspiration

crafted inspiration
Forum: Poetry 09-11-2016, 11:26 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 736
Posted By Let Me Up
A September day

The winds, they whipped
as leaves were ripped
from their companions
whom bent backwards
and flexed their strength,
offering a different shade of green
against an ocean of blue sky,
and an...
Forum: Poetry 08-27-2016, 03:29 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 421
Posted By Let Me Up
When the critique contains more skill than the...

When the critique contains more skill than the poem.. "frilly nickers with a threadbare gusset." :D haha

In all seriousness I completely agree, my meaning was lost in the process of writing....
Forum: Poetry 08-25-2016, 01:59 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 421
Posted By Let Me Up
Flesh

My love is flesh...

Primordial lust, my love.

It has led us here,

to this construct.

This awe inspiring arrangment of flesh.
Forum: Poetry 08-20-2016, 07:54 PM
Replies: 31
Views: 3,274
Posted By Let Me Up
Gives a new definition to chicken pox

Gives a new definition to chicken pox
Forum: Poetry 08-01-2016, 08:01 AM
Replies: 37
Views: 2,373
Posted By Let Me Up
Wow Binx, you have such an original non bias...

Wow Binx, you have such an original non bias thought process. Your morally sound character is really something to behold. Its as if you have some how surpassed us all and truly hold the light this...
Forum: Poetry 07-27-2016, 11:56 AM
Replies: 37
Views: 2,373
Posted By Let Me Up
Thank you, Tor.

Thank you, Tor.
Forum: Poetry 07-27-2016, 08:41 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 498
Posted By Let Me Up
We are but men

We are but men
Forum: Poetry 07-27-2016, 08:35 AM
Replies: 37
Views: 2,373
Posted By Let Me Up
You expect a man to spit a perfect speech To...

You expect a man
to spit a perfect speech
To enter every ear
and provide delight for each

But men are just men
Apes with swinging canes
A whole lot of chemistry
infesting their brains
Forum: Poetry 03-17-2016, 02:06 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 692
Posted By Let Me Up
Short and Sweet

My heart - a fort,

her love - the siege.

Her spoils of war

take after me.
Forum: Poetry 03-15-2016, 11:37 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 943
Posted By Let Me Up
im so lost right now chatbot, help me out, where...

im so lost right now chatbot, help me out, where are you from?
Forum: Poetry 11-11-2015, 03:35 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 403
Posted By Let Me Up
Thanks for the read, Tor. I'm not one to offer...

Thanks for the read, Tor. I'm not one to offer much in the realm of constructive critiques. I just wanted to comment and say the poem captures well the sortve selfish petulance we as humans seem to...
Forum: Poetry 11-06-2015, 03:17 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 601
Posted By Let Me Up
What shall we do with these wings?

What shall we do with these wings?
Forum: Poetry 06-02-2015, 04:47 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 720
Posted By Let Me Up
The base of the poem will be about when a child...

The base of the poem will be about when a child is first exposed to the horrors and atrocities of the world, and the reaction and impact it can play on a developing observers mind.
Forum: Poetry 06-02-2015, 04:43 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 720
Posted By Let Me Up
Thnx for the input, and I fully agree, I will...

Thnx for the input, and I fully agree, I will post my revision soon, and hopefully can complete and convey my thoughts,
Forum: Poetry 06-01-2015, 05:02 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 720
Posted By Let Me Up
Yea Oh well, buhb.

Yea Oh well, buhb.
Forum: Poetry 06-01-2015, 04:55 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 720
Posted By Let Me Up
I'm not requesting that this be taken apart and...

I'm not requesting that this be taken apart and rearranged for me, I hold dearly my original art, but I like to see how other poets operate, and this is my only poetry median. Maybe this belongs in 9...
Forum: Poetry 06-01-2015, 04:53 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 720
Posted By Let Me Up
It's apparent enough that it could be related to,...

It's apparent enough that it could be related to, and applied to a less than general sense.
Forum: Poetry 06-01-2015, 04:39 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 720
Posted By Let Me Up
I'd have to agree aside from the effort part. The...

I'd have to agree aside from the effort part. The message is there, I understand if you find the piece incoherent.
Forum: Poetry 06-01-2015, 04:18 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 720
Posted By Let Me Up
I dunno joe, I guess I fucked up big time, eh?

I dunno joe, I guess I fucked up big time, eh?
Forum: Poetry 06-01-2015, 04:04 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 720
Posted By Let Me Up
Yea just cuz Its nothing yet really No I make...

Yea just cuz
Its nothing yet really
No I make shook into an adverb.
I know its not a word but I like it.
Yes I meant shone... Thank you!
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