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Forum: Scripts 06-12-2016, 07:16 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 2,839
Posted By MaliciousFriday
Giving this a little bump

Giving this a little bump
Forum: Scripts 06-02-2016, 06:26 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 2,839
Posted By MaliciousFriday
Yeah, I wasn't really too sure about that part...

Yeah, I wasn't really too sure about that part myself. I feel like I needed some type of filler so I could pace the story a little better.
Forum: Scripts 05-29-2016, 03:27 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 2,839
Posted By MaliciousFriday
Are you talking about when they tried going back...

Are you talking about when they tried going back to the cave?
Forum: Scripts 05-28-2016, 01:42 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 2,839
Posted By MaliciousFriday
Anybody mind reviewing my script?

So sometime in the future, I want to own my own television show and this is a plot-heavy cartoon show that I want to have produced. It's gonna either be called "Eyes Wide Shut" or "The Hoi Polloi". I...
Forum: Fiction 06-20-2015, 09:20 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 768
Posted By MaliciousFriday
He's shot because he spoke out against the...

He's shot because he spoke out against the government. Saying "I hate this world" led them to believe he is having free speech when it is actually illegal. They execute him because of that. And...
Forum: Fiction 06-07-2015, 06:26 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 768
Posted By MaliciousFriday
Short Story-"809"-1600 words

I'm sorry if 1600 words is too much to post on here. But tell me what you think if you do read it.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 04-15-2015, 01:14 PM
Replies: 52
Views: 3,112
Posted By MaliciousFriday
I created a religion in my book and it has its...

I created a religion in my book and it has its own language...also made by me.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 04-08-2015, 07:24 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,830
Posted By MaliciousFriday
^That is...sadistic. And I like it.

^That is...sadistic. And I like it.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 04-06-2015, 07:17 AM
Replies: 33
Views: 2,487
Posted By MaliciousFriday
I have several of my first book in different...

I have several of my first book in different files and I don't know what to do with them.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 04-06-2015, 07:15 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,830
Posted By MaliciousFriday
Love Interests

How do you guys feel about putting a love interest in a story and reading one, especially when it has nothing to do with the plot?

To be honest, I never saw the point of having one if it doesn't...
Forum: Fiction 03-12-2015, 12:45 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,458
Posted By MaliciousFriday
It's not unreality though. He's just having...

It's not unreality though. He's just having dreams and he's writing them down.
Forum: Fiction 03-01-2015, 01:26 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,458
Posted By MaliciousFriday
I'm doing it more on a narration style since it...

I'm doing it more on a narration style since it is a diary story.

Here's an example:
Forum: Fiction 02-24-2015, 11:06 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,458
Posted By MaliciousFriday
Thanks for pointing that out. I didn't really...

Thanks for pointing that out. I didn't really know what they do in asylums, but I knew something was off. I'm currently changing it.
Forum: Fiction 02-22-2015, 11:09 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 641
Posted By MaliciousFriday
Sorry, typo there. And disregard that first...

Sorry, typo there. And disregard that first question. I get it. I tend to just skim things a lot.

Number 2 sounds better to me. It just flows well.
Forum: Fiction 02-22-2015, 10:28 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 641
Posted By MaliciousFriday
Where are you trying to with this is my question?

Where are you trying to with this is my question?
Forum: Fiction 02-22-2015, 09:04 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,458
Posted By MaliciousFriday
I'm probably going to leave the questioning of...

I'm probably going to leave the questioning of the dreams to the reader and have them fight over it.

Contrary to popular belief, schizophrenics aren't as crazy or mentally unstable as people...
Forum: Tips & Advice 02-22-2015, 08:20 PM
Replies: 38
Views: 9,250
Posted By MaliciousFriday
I don't know how to stay motivated. Usually I...

I don't know how to stay motivated. Usually I have peaks of motivation here and there to write a good few chapters. Other than that, I let my files rot in my computer until I feel like writing them...
Forum: Fiction 02-22-2015, 11:29 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,127
Posted By MaliciousFriday
Your students have potential. Real potential.

Your students have potential. Real potential.
Forum: Fiction 02-22-2015, 11:24 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,458
Posted By MaliciousFriday
Thanks for the compliments! I'm really excited...

Thanks for the compliments! I'm really excited for this story and I'm am willing to put in the work for it :D
Forum: Fiction 02-21-2015, 08:57 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,458
Posted By MaliciousFriday
Question: would my story work?

I went to a party last night and I was drunk and high as I don't know what. I didn't remember anything from the night before, but apparently I wrote this on my computer before falling asleep and I...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 02-08-2015, 11:32 AM
Replies: 37
Views: 5,357
Posted By MaliciousFriday
The Day My Butt Went Psycho by Andy Griffith ...

The Day My Butt Went Psycho by Andy Griffith

I was like...in 1st or 2nd grade.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 02-08-2015, 11:31 AM
Replies: 35
Views: 5,068
Posted By MaliciousFriday
I didn't know you had to make a new paragraph...

I didn't know you had to make a new paragraph every time someone talked. I didn't have a good grasp as to how people communicate with each other. I had major grammar problems, spelling errors, and I...
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 02-06-2015, 02:24 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 2,047
Posted By MaliciousFriday
Ending my series

I have a 6-7 book series planned called The Four Worlds and I have the ending. But my problem is that it ends with a cliffhanger, something like this: "Vincenzo, I cannot do this myself. I am no...
Forum: Fiction 11-16-2014, 02:01 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 624
Posted By MaliciousFriday
I have not actually. I might go look it up.

I have not actually. I might go look it up.
Forum: Fiction 11-15-2014, 04:00 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 624
Posted By MaliciousFriday
The Miracle Magician

This is literally my first, completed short story from back when I was a freshman in high school. It's called The Miracle Magician.
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