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Forum: Free Writing Yesterday, 05:06 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 197
Posted By Nick Pierce
Ah, but John was not an average teenager. He had...

Ah, but John was not an average teenager. He had seen his father defend the family from a road rager. He knew that the result, along with ensuring their safety, could be penalization.

And when his...
Forum: Free Writing Yesterday, 04:51 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 197
Posted By Nick Pierce
Yeah, I saw the weakness of clear interpretation...

Yeah, I saw the weakness of clear interpretation with my modified from original idea text.

Needs work so almost no misinterpretation can occur.


Mr. Omble's intent was to immobilize the...
Forum: Free Writing Yesterday, 03:10 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 197
Posted By Nick Pierce
I found the book where this info comes from,...

I found the book where this info comes from, Palindrome. It gives it's reference.

If you like I will post the supporting info.
Forum: Free Writing Yesterday, 03:08 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 197
Posted By Nick Pierce
You worked out the action from the original text?

You worked out the action from the original text?
Forum: Free Writing Yesterday, 02:56 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 197
Posted By Nick Pierce
Similar thing happened to me at that time when I...

Similar thing happened to me at that time when I thought it was midnight at your place and it turned out it was noon.


So I can relate.
Forum: Free Writing Yesterday, 03:31 AM
Replies: 22
Views: 197
Posted By Nick Pierce
I'm thinkin' you intended to write: Don't you...

I'm thinkin' you intended to write:
Don't you think it's a bit backwards to see the kid with the pencil as the 'crazy' one?
Forum: Free Writing Yesterday, 03:08 AM
Replies: 22
Views: 197
Posted By Nick Pierce
Yeah. I stay alert over here. And enjoy being...

Yeah. I stay alert over here.
And enjoy being in my castle as often as possible.

If one aspect of writing is to help a reader experience the piece than I say thank you for showing me I have done...
Forum: Free Writing 02-21-2018, 06:28 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 197
Posted By Nick Pierce
Thanks for checkin' this out and givin' me your...

Thanks for checkin' this out and givin' me your suggestions, daes.

I spent the morning thinkin' about the piece and scribbled it out during the half hour of lunch.

Posted it when I got home.
...
Forum: Free Writing 02-21-2018, 04:17 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 197
Posted By Nick Pierce
In the thoroughly researched book about the...

In the thoroughly researched book about the Mumbai Terrorist Attack Mr. Omble was witnessed holding the muzzle to his chest. This action prevented Kasab from injuring anyone else or committing...
Forum: Free Writing 02-21-2018, 04:09 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 197
Posted By Nick Pierce
I'm asking because in the original vision I saw...

I'm asking because in the original vision I saw John moving along the wall that the door was in. This gave him the ability to be at the doorway (because he started as soon as the muzzle breached) as...
Forum: Free Writing 02-21-2018, 03:16 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 197
Posted By Nick Pierce
Tukaram Omble

Tukaram Omble
Forum: Free Writing 02-21-2018, 02:50 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 197
Posted By Nick Pierce
Would you please quote the part that you infer as...

Would you please quote the part that you infer as showing John walking into a gun-barrel with a pencil?
Forum: Free Writing 02-21-2018, 02:46 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 197
Posted By Nick Pierce
Oh, Dom, Dom, Dom ... where do I start? ...

Oh, Dom, Dom, Dom ... where do I start?

America is, at times, a very violent place. We gained our independence not with a coin toss but through force of arms. Some say ain't much changed but the...
Forum: Free Writing 02-21-2018, 11:01 AM
Replies: 22
Views: 197
Posted By Nick Pierce
WickEd

He was the new kid in High School.

No one knew much about him.

He had transferred in from out of state.

Was quiet.

Did his assignments.
Forum: Free Writing 02-21-2018, 03:06 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 205
Posted By Nick Pierce
author is Jean M. Auel not boring not...

author is Jean M. Auel

not boring
not purple
I simply don't read big chunks of anything
Forum: Poetry 02-20-2018, 02:58 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,224
Posted By Nick Pierce
Okay.

Okay.
Forum: Fiction 02-19-2018, 05:28 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 272
Posted By Nick Pierce
Sorry, the question was how do I feel about...

Sorry, the question was how do I feel about Kaylee.

I do think her name is overused.

Aw, that still ain't answerin' direct.

Sorry.
Maybe bein' over 30 years (twice) handicaps my ability to...
Forum: Fiction 02-19-2018, 05:22 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 272
Posted By Nick Pierce
The piece comes across with the value of a Swiss...

The piece comes across with the value of a Swiss Army Knife.

Lot of stuff here but no dominant function.
Forum: Free Writing 02-19-2018, 05:09 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 205
Posted By Nick Pierce
" ... not much older than myself." gotta...

" ... not much older than myself."

gotta stop here for now

this is so much more controlled than your usual style

works for me
Forum: Non-Fiction 02-19-2018, 04:58 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 118
Posted By Nick Pierce
green dragon zen center renegade

Walkin' through the
fir tree forest on
a Mt. Tamalpais
mountain side

Followin' a grown over
game trail through the
underbrush

It's 9:30 am on
Forum: Non-Fiction 02-17-2018, 05:42 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 115
Posted By Nick Pierce
So do you know of Ur?

So do you know of Ur?
Forum: Free Writing 02-17-2018, 05:27 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 290
Posted By Nick Pierce
Line six establishes a 3d footing by giving an...

Line six establishes a 3d footing by giving an earth location and line seven puts a time to the bit.
Forum: Members' Feedback 02-17-2018, 05:14 AM
Replies: 58
Views: 1,129
Posted By Nick Pierce
[QUOTE=Gaines;741965] Om, I see.

[QUOTE=Gaines;741965]


Om, I see.
Forum: Free Writing 02-17-2018, 12:37 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 290
Posted By Nick Pierce
Line 5 steps through the fourth wall with the...

Line 5 steps through the fourth wall with the vision/color device.
Forum: Members' Feedback 02-17-2018, 12:33 AM
Replies: 58
Views: 1,129
Posted By Nick Pierce
Prate & Preach?

Prate & Preach?
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