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Forum: Fiction 05-24-2011, 10:05 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 825
Posted By bobbedford
Not if you speak the queens english instead of...

Not if you speak the queens english instead of the bastardised Amercian version. Cosy is the correct spelling!
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 05-19-2011, 04:34 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 553
Posted By bobbedford
Multiple First Person

OK - so I had the idea of writing successive chapters with three different first person narratives. I.e. character A - 1, character B - 2 etc. etc.

I imagine it has been done before - and am sure...
Forum: Fiction 05-18-2011, 10:55 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,614
Posted By bobbedford
Thanks for the comments - in terms of the...

Thanks for the comments - in terms of the extraneous stuff - what do you mean in particular?
Forum: Fiction 05-18-2011, 02:48 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,614
Posted By bobbedford
Thanks for the advice all. Makes sense. Now...

Thanks for the advice all. Makes sense.

Now I read it again I can see how many commas are in there. Way too many - just reads weird in places.

Ta
Forum: Fiction 05-17-2011, 03:05 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,614
Posted By bobbedford
The Avoidance of Hell...(Brutally Honest Feedback Needed)

Ok so rubbish working title I know.

Basically, I keep thinking I've got a novel in me, and have poured hours into this first chapter... (literally hours and hours).

Basically, would really...
Forum: Fiction 05-17-2011, 03:01 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 2,442
Posted By bobbedford
I have to say I enjoyed this, read well, despite...

I have to say I enjoyed this, read well, despite some of the other comments.
Forum: Fiction 05-17-2011, 02:59 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,892
Posted By bobbedford
I enjoyed the read, good work! nice...

I enjoyed the read, good work!

nice cliffhanger for next part.
Forum: Previous Contests 05-17-2011, 02:56 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 2,675
Posted By bobbedford
Sounds just like me...

Sounds just like me...
Forum: Members' Choice 05-17-2011, 02:53 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 6,846
Posted By bobbedford
This was very well written.

This was very well written.
Forum: Introductions 05-17-2011, 02:50 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 2,351
Posted By bobbedford
Hi and welcome

Hi and welcome
Forum: Introductions 05-17-2011, 02:49 PM
Replies: 5
Yo
Views: 818
Posted By bobbedford
Yo

Hello.

Aspiring writer, trying to write in between working 14 hour days...

Absolutely no idea if I can write though!
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