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Forum: Writers' Cafe 07-17-2008, 08:13 PM
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Posted By o'connell
wicked and weird - buck 65

wicked and weird - buck 65
Forum: Poetry 07-17-2008, 08:11 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 888
Posted By o'connell
I really liked this,I must admit being a little...

I really liked this,I must admit being a little confused(happens a lot) after reading it the first few times and it was until I googled "another place" that it really began to make sense.

The...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 07-16-2008, 07:49 PM
Replies: 9,103
Views: 252,587
Posted By o'connell
red hill mining town - U2

red hill mining town - U2
Forum: Poetry 07-16-2008, 07:37 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 1,449
Posted By o'connell
Nice one Gary, I think the narrator works well ,I...

Nice one Gary, I think the narrator works well ,I like "the fly on the wall " point of view,had me chuckling in parts,great ending,fries wouldn't have been as funny.I like the reference to the fondue...
Forum: Poetry 07-16-2008, 07:16 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 606
Posted By o'connell
I liked it too, I think if you stripped it down a...

I liked it too, I think if you stripped it down a bit it might flow better,some parts seem unnecessarily wordy(for want of a better word), there's a lot of repetition of pronouns that could be...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 04-27-2008, 07:57 AM
Replies: 9,103
Views: 252,587
Posted By o'connell
atlantic city - counting crows

atlantic city - counting crows
Forum: Writers' Cafe 03-27-2008, 06:00 PM
Replies: 9,103
Views: 252,587
Posted By o'connell
round here - counting crows

round here - counting crows
Forum: Poetry 03-27-2008, 05:34 PM
Replies: 27
Views: 1,609
Posted By o'connell
Nice work,great imagery ,a refreshing take on an...

Nice work,great imagery ,a refreshing take on an old subject.I wouldn't change a thing I think the ending works well
Forum: Poetry 03-27-2008, 05:16 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,356
Posted By o'connell
I connected with this one a lot more than some of...

I connected with this one a lot more than some of the others,is it the final installment in the series?There's a clarity with this one that some of the others lacked( I thought).The change in point...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 03-27-2008, 05:01 PM
Replies: 6,898
Please Read: Post Your Picture!
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Posted By o'connell
Couldn't figure how to post it

Couldn't figure how to post it
Forum: Writers' Cafe 03-18-2008, 07:11 PM
Replies: 9,103
Views: 252,587
Posted By o'connell
she talks to angels - black crows

she talks to angels - black crows
Forum: Members' Choice 03-18-2008, 07:06 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 3,561
Posted By o'connell
I'd like to nominate Devour by skhull

I'd like to nominate Devour by skhull
Forum: Poetry 03-06-2008, 06:44 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 609
Posted By o'connell
Nice work , it's short but you get your point...

Nice work , it's short but you get your point across.I think if you pared down the two three liners it might look better(just my opinion) i.e

lights flash dark then bright, hour glass shadows...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 03-06-2008, 06:24 PM
Replies: 9,103
Views: 252,587
Posted By o'connell
fade away - counting crows

fade away - counting crows
Forum: Issues 03-06-2008, 06:22 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 8,367
Posted By o'connell
I agree with Jimbo a jolly strange feeling...

I agree with Jimbo a jolly strange feeling indeed.

Thanks for publishing my piece.

The issue looks great.

The time and effort you put in really shows, thanks
Forum: Poetry 03-06-2008, 06:12 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,215
Posted By o'connell
Irishman once removed sounds painful.I know you...

Irishman once removed sounds painful.I know you guys have Irish roots just thought I'd throw a spanner in the works , keep you on your toes. You never know where there's a paddy lurking.:)(the smiley...
Forum: Poetry 03-05-2008, 04:58 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,215
Posted By o'connell
Stop talking about us like we're not in the room...

Stop talking about us like we're not in the room ;)
Forum: Poetry 03-05-2008, 11:13 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,051
Posted By o'connell
I'm a bit conflicted about this one,seeing all...

I'm a bit conflicted about this one,seeing all the pieces in order would definitely help like QoW I'm not really sure which time frame I'm in from stanza to stanza.If one time frame is Finn and the...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 03-01-2008, 05:21 PM
Replies: 9,103
Views: 252,587
Posted By o'connell
eve of destruction - bob dylan

eve of destruction - bob dylan
Forum: Writers' Cafe 02-13-2008, 06:33 PM
Replies: 9,103
Views: 252,587
Posted By o'connell
I am a patriot - eddie vedder

I am a patriot - eddie vedder
Forum: Poetry 02-13-2008, 06:17 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 931
Posted By o'connell
I really liked this, colourful flowing language...

I really liked this, colourful flowing language very Dylanesque and like some Dylan lyrics I always enjoy them but don't always understand them ,the same can be said here.I have many ideas about who...
Forum: Poetry 02-13-2008, 09:24 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 876
Posted By o'connell
Brilliant,as Baron said an epic read.I understand...

Brilliant,as Baron said an epic read.I understand what QoW said about "banshee screams " it's more my neck of the woods than sand dunes but I think works perfectly (assuming I understand it)that it's...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 02-05-2008, 05:58 PM
Replies: 9,103
Views: 252,587
Posted By o'connell
alone - alice in chains & pearl jam

alone - alice in chains & pearl jam
Forum: Previous Contests 02-05-2008, 05:55 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,908
Posted By o'connell
Thanks very much for the comments, I appreciate...

Thanks very much for the comments, I appreciate them.Best of luck April
Forum: Previous Contests 01-19-2008, 11:56 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,809
Posted By o'connell
still release Release, for longing suns ...

still release

Release,
for longing suns
crave shadows.
Alone and lost
day without night
endures silently.
Life;motionless
suffers time
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