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Forum: Writers' Cafe 11-15-2017, 08:45 PM
Replies: 56
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https://youtu.be/Uw0rzonn8qA Sent from my...

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Forum: Writers' Cafe 11-15-2017, 08:40 PM
Replies: 56
Views: 5,589
Posted By brianpatrick
I listened to this. Itís pretty good. Have you...

I listened to this. Itís pretty good. Have you heard Mark Hollisís some album from 1998?

Heís the master of this genre. Or, the creator.


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Forum: Non-Fiction 11-15-2017, 08:30 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 572
Posted By brianpatrick
Agree. This is a fascinating story. I mean, Iím a...

Agree. This is a fascinating story. I mean, Iím a 50 year old hetro with no real connection to the trans or gay community and I find myself reading this and thinking: WTF?! Itís like watching an...
Forum: The Intellectual Table 11-14-2017, 07:38 PM
Replies: 92
Views: 2,056
Posted By brianpatrick
The problem with arming the choir is that a...

The problem with arming the choir is that a percentage of them will be depressed at some point (suicidal) or negligent with their guns (kids using them to accidentally shoot themselves, friends, or...
Forum: Fiction 11-14-2017, 07:32 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 131
Posted By brianpatrick
Yeah, this shit is dope. Bravo. Iím not sure what...

Yeah, this shit is dope. Bravo. Iím not sure what this little piece is, but as it stands itís a magnificent start to something. It builds a compelling world quickly. Something few writers can ever...
Forum: The Intellectual Table 11-13-2017, 03:45 PM
Replies: 340
Views: 19,922
Posted By brianpatrick
Thatís probably your scots-Irish heritage...

Thatís probably your scots-Irish heritage speaking. I think theyíve probably contributed to his moderation. Otherwise we may have descended down a rabbit hole that even general Kelly couldnít have...
Forum: The Intellectual Table 11-13-2017, 03:33 PM
Replies: 92
Views: 2,056
Posted By brianpatrick
Yes, and I can take Advil for the headache I got...

Yes, and I can take Advil for the headache I got from drinking too much vodka, but is That really a good solution?

I donít expect you to understand the deeper implications, but really?


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Forum: The Intellectual Table 11-10-2017, 09:48 PM
Replies: 92
Views: 2,056
Posted By brianpatrick
Weíre doing research on the best consumer 3D...

Weíre doing research on the best consumer 3D printers on the market (within a price range). As soon as we get one we are going to print our own guns. Hey, I️ wonder if we can print drugs?😀


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Forum: Introductions 11-10-2017, 09:44 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 292
Posted By brianpatrick
Welcome back. Donít know how to fix the link...

Welcome back. Donít know how to fix the link thing. Weíve had some technical difficulties surrounding pics and links.


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Forum: The Intellectual Table 11-09-2017, 02:51 PM
Replies: 340
Views: 19,922
Posted By brianpatrick
Yes, this appears to be the face of higher...

Yes, this appears to be the face of higher education in many places these days.

I recommend the hard sciences as a major. Most of the other stuff these days will likely get you smothered in...
Forum: Fiction 11-07-2017, 04:26 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 163
Posted By brianpatrick
Yep, thatís how you do it. Sent from my...

Yep, thatís how you do it.


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Forum: The Intellectual Table 11-06-2017, 09:48 PM
Replies: 92
Views: 2,056
Posted By brianpatrick
He was an asshole with mental health problems who...

He was an asshole with mental health problems who was allowed to buy military style weapons. When you couple mental health problems with our current interpretation of our 2nd amendment, you get these...
Forum: Fiction 11-02-2017, 06:43 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 283
Posted By brianpatrick
The Bloom of an Unexpected Flower

Iíll figure out how to add comments later
Forum: Fiction 11-02-2017, 06:38 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 283
Posted By brianpatrick
The Bloom of an Unexpected Flower

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Forum: Members' Feedback 11-01-2017, 10:09 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 362
Posted By brianpatrick
I donít think about symbolism much. Sometimes I...

I donít think about symbolism much. Sometimes I use foreshadowing or ideas to set a mood for a scene, but Iím not smart enough to plot symbolism.


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Forum: Introductions 10-31-2017, 06:55 PM
Replies: 3
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Posted By brianpatrick
Hi Birb. Welcome Sent from my iPhone...

Hi Birb. Welcome


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Forum: Fiction 10-24-2017, 03:51 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 401
Posted By brianpatrick
A comma after door would be a ďcomma spliceĒ ...

A comma after door would be a ďcomma spliceĒ

They are two complete sentences. If I had written it I probably would have used a period.


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Forum: Fiction 10-23-2017, 05:14 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 401
Posted By brianpatrick
Wilson leaned in and rapped smartly on the door;...

Wilson leaned in and rapped smartly on the door; New York City didnít agree with him. He coughed into his gloved hand.



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Forum: Introductions 10-22-2017, 11:24 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 286
Posted By brianpatrick
Welcome. Donít mind flea; heís a weirdo😀 ...

Welcome. Donít mind flea; heís a weirdo😀


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Forum: Fiction 10-22-2017, 12:49 AM
Replies: 149
Views: 12,559
Posted By brianpatrick
Welcome back Eric. Good to see you posting. I was...

Welcome back Eric. Good to see you posting. I was thinking maybe you got killed on the steppe somewhere. Would have been a shame. Poetic, but a shame nonetheless.😀


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Forum: Writers' Cafe 10-20-2017, 09:04 AM
Replies: 9,081
Views: 248,629
Posted By brianpatrick
Bad as in ďnaughtyĒ? Sent from my iPhone...

Bad as in ďnaughtyĒ?


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Forum: Tips & Advice 10-19-2017, 07:54 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 366
Posted By brianpatrick
I have the same problem with ideas falling out of...

I have the same problem with ideas falling out of my head. But Iíve discovered over the years that there is an endless supply of them. Okay, maybe there wonít be later, dunno, but i no longer even...
Forum: Tips & Advice 10-18-2017, 07:03 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 366
Posted By brianpatrick
Wait... you gonna gloss over ďlocal bath houseĒ? ...

Wait... you gonna gloss over ďlocal bath houseĒ?

Who has a local bath house?😀

I like the clicking noise. And... I like writing slower.

My wife can type 89-90 words per minute, but I feel...
Forum: Tips & Advice 10-18-2017, 04:39 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 366
Posted By brianpatrick
I have a busy life outside of writing. I write...

I have a busy life outside of writing. I write everything on my iPhone, and itís always with me. Iím always thinking of writing and stories in progress. I write sometimes for ten of fifteen minutes...
Forum: Tips & Advice 10-16-2017, 07:17 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 2,015
Posted By brianpatrick
I started writing at age 44. Before that I wrote...

I started writing at age 44. Before that I wrote songs and played the bass guitar.

Once I learned how to write a short story rejected the idea of re-writes for a long time. I thought if I could...
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