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Forum: Fiction 09-20-2010, 02:10 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 576
Posted By HeroBeard
Wow, thanks guys. I honestly didn't think I'd get...

Wow, thanks guys. I honestly didn't think I'd get such a good response :D

A.Zerro I think you're right, the nightmare was meant to be more of a comparison really. not being able to move was like...
Forum: Fiction 09-19-2010, 03:26 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 576
Posted By HeroBeard
First page

Hey guys, this is the initial part of my novel so far. I'm not entirely sure I'm going to run with it but I thought I'd maybe get some feedback either way.

Here goes nothing.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 09-19-2010, 08:16 AM
Replies: 78
Views: 4,150
Posted By HeroBeard
reading - fantasy usually, I will drift through...

reading - fantasy usually, I will drift through other genres when recomended.

writing - modern fantasy or scifi. Anything that'll just let me make stuff up.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 09-19-2010, 06:45 AM
Replies: 39
Views: 2,378
Posted By HeroBeard
Iced earth is pretty nice and so is a little dio,...

Iced earth is pretty nice and so is a little dio, anything similar to these usually puts me in a good mood to write. I made alot of progress with jimmy eat world blasting behind me, which was nice.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 09-19-2010, 06:16 AM
Replies: 8,559
Views: 201,140
Posted By HeroBeard
I rarely wear matching socks.

I rarely wear matching socks.
Forum: Fiction 09-19-2010, 04:34 AM
Replies: 42
Views: 2,599
Posted By HeroBeard
I do love getting free stuff.

I do love getting free stuff.
Forum: Members' Choice 09-19-2010, 04:29 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 6,823
Posted By HeroBeard
That was, without question, brilliant.

That was, without question, brilliant.
Forum: Fiction 09-19-2010, 04:02 AM
Replies: 42
Views: 2,599
Posted By HeroBeard
That's fair enough, I wont hold you to my...

That's fair enough, I wont hold you to my personal preferences as they are just that I guess. But seeing as you've brought up phosphoresescent algae, why not add a little to your cave? Seems like a...
Forum: Fiction 09-19-2010, 03:40 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 837
Posted By HeroBeard
I enjoyed that alot, the dialogue is great...

I enjoyed that alot, the dialogue is great although the final segment gets a bit heavy and could do with a little more breaking up.

the line "The restless warrior was a prisoner of love, not war....
Forum: Fiction 09-19-2010, 03:08 AM
Replies: 42
Views: 2,599
Posted By HeroBeard
My point was that you're describing things that...

My point was that you're describing things that don't require as much attention as you're giving them, especially if you're not writing to pre-teens as you mention.

No one talks like that, you...
Forum: Fiction 09-19-2010, 01:49 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 815
Posted By HeroBeard
Too bold; didn't read.

Too bold; didn't read.
Forum: Fiction 09-19-2010, 01:47 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,149
Posted By HeroBeard
I very much enjoyed reading this, you have hooked...

I very much enjoyed reading this, you have hooked me good sir. It feels like a fantasy setting but you mention stale cigarettes so I'm guessing it isn't.

“Is this the end of me, or the beginning?’...
Forum: Fiction 09-19-2010, 01:32 AM
Replies: 42
Views: 2,599
Posted By HeroBeard
"The young man stumbled out of the dark cave, his...

"The young man stumbled out of the dark cave, his short hair matted to his forehead with sweat. His eyes were so wide with fear and horror that there was more white than blue, the red blood trickling...
Forum: Introductions 09-18-2010, 01:54 PM
Replies: 4
Hi
Views: 545
Posted By HeroBeard
Ninjas? 0_0

Ninjas? 0_0
Forum: The Library 09-18-2010, 12:54 PM
Replies: 3,692
Views: 253,093
Posted By HeroBeard
Trying to read wild sheep chase by haruki...

Trying to read wild sheep chase by haruki murakami but can't seem to make it through.
Forum: Introductions 09-18-2010, 12:48 PM
Replies: 4
Hi
Views: 545
Posted By HeroBeard
Thanks allot, I look forward to having my amateur...

Thanks allot, I look forward to having my amateur nonsense laughed at :P
Forum: Fiction 09-18-2010, 09:18 AM
Replies: 20
Views: 2,040
Posted By HeroBeard
The first paragraph seems to build up to...

The first paragraph seems to build up to something but the next two continue the build up and leaves us hanging. Sets the tone well but nothing really happens.
Forum: Fiction 09-18-2010, 09:06 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 510
Posted By HeroBeard
I like it, you have a very loose way of writing....

I like it, you have a very loose way of writing. It feels easy on the brain.
Forum: Introductions 09-18-2010, 08:45 AM
Replies: 4
Hi
Views: 545
Posted By HeroBeard
Icon7 Hi

Hi guys, just poking my nose in here. Quite a busy forum you've got, don't mind me I'm fairly quiet.

I tend to only write when I really want to get something out of my head, so I tend to not...
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