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Forum: Poetry 04-17-2016, 05:23 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 930
Posted By scottelot
Hi CB. Enjoyed this piece although I had to read...

Hi CB. Enjoyed this piece although I had to read it a few times; the dashes kept throwing me from the poem. A couple typos too, but a good read nonetheless.
Thanks
Scott
Forum: Fiction 03-13-2016, 08:26 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,477
Posted By scottelot
Some Nights

Intriguing write, Chat bot, enough so to read twice.
Ghostly visitor?
Thank you
Scott
Forum: Writers' Cafe 03-07-2016, 03:46 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 2,059
Posted By scottelot
Depends on my mood or current craving. Either...

Depends on my mood or current craving. Either way can be appealing - when done right. Was that too simple?
;)
Forum: Board Games 03-01-2016, 06:08 PM
Replies: 36
Views: 6,851
Posted By scottelot
In a world no one can help me, I see myself in a...

In a world no one can help me, I see myself in a dream, as a walking dead story that I have no control to change
Forum: Poetry 11-22-2015, 02:51 AM
Replies: 65
Views: 4,623
Posted By scottelot
iPeen-eye

The last 10 lines of this piece balance the awkwardity of this life experience well.
Always good to read your stuff.
Thanks
Forum: Poetry 07-26-2015, 06:20 PM
Replies: 50
Views: 3,201
Posted By scottelot
The short line breaks along with the progression...

The short line breaks along with the progression of flash imagery combine to make this feel like a somewhat awkward adolescent encounter.
Bing bang boom - and it's over.
Thanks for sharing
Forum: Poetry 06-26-2015, 05:40 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 996
Posted By scottelot
Thank you, yes, that totally makes sense. :)

Thank you, yes, that totally makes sense.
:)
Forum: Poetry 06-24-2015, 03:51 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 996
Posted By scottelot
Kind thanks. Scott

Kind thanks.
Scott
Forum: Poetry 06-20-2015, 11:44 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 996
Posted By scottelot
IDrew, thank you for reading. I value your...

IDrew, thank you for reading. I value your opinion; you may be right about the ending. I'll get back to it.
Scott
Forum: Poetry 06-06-2015, 09:44 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 996
Posted By scottelot
Thank you Nacia. Haven't been on much, but I've...

Thank you Nacia. Haven't been on much, but I've temporarily gotten away from form.
:)
Forum: Poetry 06-03-2015, 12:34 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 996
Posted By scottelot
I Must Luv You

Mostly, your love is
gravelled,
gritty.
as you turn my face
into the soil,
a comforting familiarity
settles in;
the taste
sweet,
like peat.
Forum: Poetry 05-25-2015, 01:56 PM
Replies: 50
Views: 3,231
Posted By scottelot
Teeth gritting dark humour in your work - had me...

Teeth gritting dark humour in your work - had me chuckling throughout. Last three lines kinda flattened the piece.
Thanks for sharing.
Forum: Board Games 04-06-2015, 07:36 AM
Replies: 12,429
Views: 238,269
Posted By scottelot
Potato

Potato
Forum: Board Games 03-31-2015, 04:51 AM
Replies: 12,429
Views: 238,269
Posted By scottelot
Rev

Rev
Forum: Poetry 03-24-2015, 10:47 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 2,230
Posted By scottelot
Good one Nacia. Read a couple times, then just...

Good one Nacia. Read a couple times, then just last word in each line for fun. I always walk away with something from your poems, a strong image or feeling of a moment.
Thanks
Forum: Board Games 03-14-2015, 03:42 PM
Replies: 12,429
Views: 238,269
Posted By scottelot
Crowd

Crowd
Forum: Board Games 03-14-2015, 03:42 PM
Replies: 12,429
Views: 238,269
Posted By scottelot
Music

Music
Forum: Board Games 03-14-2015, 03:36 PM
Replies: 12,429
Views: 238,269
Posted By scottelot
Line

Line
Forum: Poetry 03-07-2015, 11:59 AM
Replies: 79
Views: 6,378
Posted By scottelot
Nope, iambic hexameter.

Nope, iambic hexameter.
Forum: Poetry 03-07-2015, 11:24 AM
Replies: 79
Views: 6,378
Posted By scottelot
By my reckoning the IPs of the entire piece...

By my reckoning the IPs of the entire piece scanned ok, except L8:

"that drifted up like evil djinns arising from"
easy fix.
Needs atleast a couple reads for my thick head to sort content while...
Forum: Poetry 02-24-2015, 04:26 PM
Replies: 79
Views: 6,378
Posted By scottelot
Lon, read the piece twice and comments once. I'm...

Lon, read the piece twice and comments once. I'm not on boards much but respect your writing skills, as well as others on the forum.
My honest take is that your straight on IPs are good but in this...
Forum: Poetry 01-08-2015, 05:34 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,047
Posted By scottelot
Your line breaks and timing are as vital as your...

Your line breaks and timing are as vital as your word choice. I wouldn't want the responsibility of corrupting your charming style, Nacia.
Thanks for another unique experience.
Scott
Forum: Board Games 01-06-2015, 10:45 AM
Replies: 12,429
Views: 238,269
Posted By scottelot
Paradigm

Paradigm
Forum: Poetry 01-05-2015, 04:50 PM
Replies: 82
Views: 7,222
Posted By scottelot
iGinnie

Excellent!
Gritty.
I admire the refreshing honesty and straightforward, self-absorbed thought process of the character in your poem.
Yes, many poetic tools including assonance, consonance,...
Forum: Board Games 01-05-2015, 04:30 PM
Replies: 12,429
Views: 238,269
Posted By scottelot
Depth

Depth
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