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Forum: Poetry 03-24-2012, 06:11 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 803
Posted By Phyllis Stewart
Wonderful, but do change the last line for meter....

Wonderful, but do change the last line for meter. Agatha had a good suggestion.

I hope you don't feeeel what you wrote. Just in case you ever do, here is a hug you can use more than once:...
Forum: Board Games 03-24-2012, 06:04 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 2,514
Posted By Phyllis Stewart
I'm glad that I don't get all that i ask for if...

I'm glad that I don't get all that i ask
for if wishes took over my every task

like mowing the lawn and making the bed
and left me time to relax instead

I'd just get in trouble with some...
Forum: Poetry 03-23-2012, 01:07 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 479
Posted By Phyllis Stewart
Thanks to all of you for your sympathy and...

Thanks to all of you for your sympathy and understanding. I'm feeling better now... the Valium DID help. :)
Forum: Poetry 03-22-2012, 12:34 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 479
Posted By Phyllis Stewart
It's Its !

I like to review
(I really do)
but there’s one thing
I must ask of you.

It's something I see
day after day,
and I gotta tell ya
it's turnin' me gray!
Forum: Poetry 03-22-2012, 12:13 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 710
Posted By Phyllis Stewart
And nazi's are right And people underrate them ...

And nazi's are right
And people underrate them
And communists are right
Yet people overrate them <<< good use of under- over- rate

Fact is, NAZI stands for National SOCIALIST Party, so Naziism...
Forum: Poetry 03-22-2012, 12:11 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 313
Posted By Phyllis Stewart
LOVE this! Peace cannot be bought And...

LOVE this!

Peace cannot be bought
And stored in a big pot <<< Superb way to say it!

Welcome MV, will look forward to more! :)
Forum: Poetry 03-22-2012, 12:09 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,086
Posted By Phyllis Stewart
Wow, thanks sooo much to you both, MV and Uz......

Wow, thanks sooo much to you both, MV and Uz... errr Ink! ;)
Forum: Poetry 03-20-2012, 12:29 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 384
Posted By Phyllis Stewart
LOL! ALone with saucepan lids! Love it.

LOL! ALone with saucepan lids! Love it.
Forum: Poetry 03-20-2012, 12:28 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 346
Posted By Phyllis Stewart
A prom to a morning...I like the thought. I take...

A prom to a morning...I like the thought. I take it to mean we have a lonnnggg fun morning of life to enjoy. Don't waste it. I'm old and wise so, kids, you listen to me, you hear!
Forum: Poetry 03-20-2012, 12:27 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 469
Posted By Phyllis Stewart
Love the first stanza, but do you really mean...

Love the first stanza, but do you really mean "snore?"
Forum: Poetry 03-19-2012, 11:26 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 304
Posted By Phyllis Stewart
Very nice rhythm and content. Good descriptive...

Very nice rhythm and content. Good descriptive piece!
Forum: Poetry 03-19-2012, 11:23 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,471
Posted By Phyllis Stewart
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http://www.writersbeat.com/images/icons/icon1.gif Elysian Fields

Love these lines:
If promises were...
Forum: Poetry 03-19-2012, 11:15 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,086
Posted By Phyllis Stewart
Foster, thanks for the suggestion... I made the...

Foster, thanks for the suggestion... I made the change.
Forum: Poetry 03-19-2012, 04:42 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,086
Posted By Phyllis Stewart
Agatha, I agree and I've made the edit. THANKS!

Agatha, I agree and I've made the edit. THANKS!
Forum: Poetry 03-18-2012, 12:15 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 834
Posted By Phyllis Stewart
Wow! Heavy meaning in so few words! Excellent!

Wow! Heavy meaning in so few words! Excellent!
Forum: Fiction 03-17-2012, 10:04 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 575
Posted By Phyllis Stewart
Let's Plan on It

A short story written with the requirement it be no more than 600 words. Got it just under the wire at 599! Hope you enjoy the read.

__________

Julie and Mitch sat on her front porch,...
Forum: Poetry 03-17-2012, 07:50 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 708
Posted By Phyllis Stewart
Tau put up the next quarter's members choice...

Tau put up the next quarter's members choice nomination thread, and I just wanted you to know I have nominated this poem.

http://www.writersbeat.com/showthread.php?p=484978#post484978

I have...
Forum: Members' Choice 03-17-2012, 07:38 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 6,457
Posted By Phyllis Stewart
Nomination

My Elvish Maiden
by KBR
http://www.writersbeat.com/showthread.php?t=36857

and...

Learning To Accept Miracles
by Jinjonator
http://www.writersbeat.com/showthread.php?t=36846
Forum: Poetry 03-17-2012, 07:35 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 383
Posted By Phyllis Stewart
I like the break in rhythm here with watermaze....

I like the break in rhythm here with watermaze. Nice touch!

the lakes the haze
the seas the watermaze
they lead the way
to awesome tales
Forum: Poetry 03-17-2012, 04:46 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 425
Posted By Phyllis Stewart
I run but can't escape the fatal ...

I run but can't
escape the
fatal
attraction

of my
own personal
magnetic fields

creating crazy currents
Forum: Poetry 03-17-2012, 04:41 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 452
Posted By Phyllis Stewart
Some favorite, important, lines: in worlds I...

Some favorite, important, lines:

in worlds I made
where I was more and others less

I walked away from my best friend
for what? a taste of sweet success

communion strong
with one who's...
Forum: Poetry 03-17-2012, 10:45 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,086
Posted By Phyllis Stewart
Loz and bfish, thanks for reading and getting the...

Loz and bfish, thanks for reading and getting the lighter-hearted ending. After all, can't fight it, may as well accept it.
Forum: Poetry 03-17-2012, 10:44 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 769
Posted By Phyllis Stewart
Oooh... intense! Something new in poetry, here....

Oooh... intense! Something new in poetry, here. But a good write for sure.
Forum: Poetry 03-17-2012, 10:19 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 431
Posted By Phyllis Stewart
Really nice imagery and phrasing here! From lazy...

Really nice imagery and phrasing here! From lazy grey seals to country lane hedges, an excellent piece!
Forum: Poetry 03-17-2012, 10:08 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 314
Posted By Phyllis Stewart
Wow! Courageous work! Well worded and well...

Wow! Courageous work! Well worded and well thought out too. Love this line: and be treated like their women, invisible milked cows

The end is outstanding: And Palestine could have the land and...
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