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Forum: Free Writing 03-18-2018, 08:03 AM
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Posted By Nick Pierce
Yeah, I wouldn't worry about clean with this one....

Yeah, I wouldn't worry about clean with this one. The cut up seems a route to bring this one's potential forth.

And use the original title to keep the reader from cryin'.
Forum: Free Writing 03-18-2018, 04:49 AM
Replies: 14
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Posted By Nick Pierce
Try the cut up method. Print it out as is,...

Try the cut up method.

Print it out as is, cut it width wise so there are one line strips then rearrange them in a few configurations. Post a couple of the completed (using all lines) versions.
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Forum: Free Writing 03-17-2018, 05:08 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,008
Posted By Nick Pierce
My first impulse is to say "Half". But that is...

My first impulse is to say "Half".
But that is unhelpful.

Lemme sleep on it.
The other one was tight.
This one is way too long winded.
Forum: Free Writing 03-17-2018, 04:45 PM
Replies: 14
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Posted By Nick Pierce
Too much work in this piece. As you have...

Too much work in this piece.
As you have sometimes said "Edit".
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