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Forum: Non-Fiction 09-16-2018, 05:13 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 108
Posted By brianpatrick
This is okay, but as a piece of writing it reads...

This is okay, but as a piece of writing it reads like a 7th grade essay.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 09-15-2018, 10:21 PM
Replies: 9,561
Views: 300,717
Posted By brianpatrick
https://youtu.be/bLKb9Ms68ME

https://youtu.be/bLKb9Ms68ME
Forum: Writers' Cafe 09-15-2018, 10:12 PM
Replies: 9,561
Views: 300,717
Posted By brianpatrick
https://youtu.be/yEyXDwM5UxU

https://youtu.be/yEyXDwM5UxU
Forum: Writers' Cafe 09-15-2018, 09:57 PM
Replies: 9,561
Views: 300,717
Posted By brianpatrick
Got me thinking... ...

Got me thinking...

https://youtu.be/f7MbmXklj3Q
Forum: Poetry 09-15-2018, 04:01 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 180
Posted By brianpatrick
If Grace gave it (unprovoked), it was not an...

If Grace gave it (unprovoked), it was not an insult. At worst case a joke, meant for you to laugh along with. Had you given her reason to attack you there wouldnít be doubt as to the situation. She...
Forum: Poetry 09-13-2018, 03:15 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 180
Posted By brianpatrick
Maybe gnash instead of shark-chew.

Maybe gnash instead of shark-chew.
Forum: Fiction 09-11-2018, 06:19 PM
Replies: 93
Views: 1,719
Posted By brianpatrick
Youíre a twat, but I know what you mean. Iím...

Youíre a twat, but I know what you mean. Iím probably a twat too. Adulting is hard, no?
Forum: Fiction 09-11-2018, 06:08 PM
Replies: 93
Views: 1,719
Posted By brianpatrick
Theyíre a scene ender. Sufficient to end the...

Theyíre a scene ender. Sufficient to end the scene. I need more to see if it worked.
Forum: The Intellectual Table 09-11-2018, 05:45 PM
Replies: 206
Views: 3,038
Posted By brianpatrick
No family wealth. My people were all working...

No family wealth. My people were all working class.

Iím just not sure if we did election financing reform, and term limits, weíd need a lot of old white dudes in prison.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 09-11-2018, 05:43 PM
Replies: 9,561
Views: 300,717
Posted By brianpatrick
Sigma is sexy as fuck in the new scene. Oh yeah,...

Sigma is sexy as fuck in the new scene. Oh yeah, make me earn it!
Forum: Fiction 09-11-2018, 05:42 PM
Replies: 93
Views: 1,719
Posted By brianpatrick
Yet, they were different, they were more...

Yet, they were different, they were more detailed, and they had not receded the way dreams often do to be replaced with - the best comparison she could muster was the melancholy after laughter....
Forum: Writers' Cafe 09-11-2018, 05:38 PM
Replies: 9,561
Views: 300,717
Posted By brianpatrick
Yes, and if I were more flexible I could...

Yes, and if I were more flexible I could...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 09-11-2018, 05:28 PM
Replies: 9,561
Views: 300,717
Posted By brianpatrick
I donít know why... ...

I donít know why...

https://youtu.be/nSuregWhlWk
Forum: Writers' Cafe 09-11-2018, 04:46 PM
Replies: 9,561
Views: 300,717
Posted By brianpatrick
I had this conversation the other day on a...

I had this conversation the other day on a remodel with one of my younger guys:

ďMy favorite rapper died of drug overdose yesterday (Mac something... dunno.) he was dating Celine Dion.Ē

Me: ďhe...
Forum: The Intellectual Table 09-11-2018, 04:38 PM
Replies: 143
Views: 3,190
Posted By brianpatrick
This is how I see that situation: She was...

This is how I see that situation:

She was putting things up on the wall and buying candles to fill a void inside her. Once she met you, you filled the void, and she was free to participate in...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 09-11-2018, 04:31 PM
Replies: 9,561
Views: 300,717
Posted By brianpatrick
Well, thatís Nathan East, and if I could play...

Well, thatís Nathan East, and if I could play like him I wouldnít have time to talk to you all. Thereís also the thing about playing with Eric Clapton... yeah, if Iíd done that, well... you know.
Forum: Poetry 09-10-2018, 08:50 PM
Replies: 58
Views: 545
Posted By brianpatrick
Iím already sleeping. Shhh... donít say another...

Iím already sleeping. Shhh... donít say another word.
Forum: Poetry 09-10-2018, 08:38 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 226
Posted By brianpatrick
Yeah. I couldnít work in an office.

Yeah. I couldnít work in an office.
Forum: Poetry 09-10-2018, 08:35 PM
Replies: 58
Views: 545
Posted By brianpatrick
Please please let this be true...

Please please let this be true...
Forum: Poetry 09-10-2018, 08:33 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 226
Posted By brianpatrick
Yeah. I spent a lot of years playing bass in...

Yeah. I spent a lot of years playing bass in mostly cover bands and doing studio work for no-name losers and assholes. Mostly in the western United States.
Forum: Poetry 09-10-2018, 08:26 PM
Replies: 58
Views: 545
Posted By brianpatrick
Yes, yes, John Giblin!

Yes, yes, John Giblin!
Forum: Poetry 09-10-2018, 08:19 PM
Replies: 58
Views: 545
Posted By brianpatrick
Yes. I do. She knew the best bass players.

Yes. I do. She knew the best bass players.
Forum: Poetry 09-10-2018, 08:18 PM
Replies: 58
Views: 545
Posted By brianpatrick
Is it morning? Itís 9:30pm here.

Is it morning? Itís 9:30pm here.
Forum: Poetry 09-10-2018, 08:17 PM
Replies: 58
Views: 545
Posted By brianpatrick
With just one hand held up high I can blot you...

With just one hand held up high
I can blot you out
Out of sight.

Fucking Kate!
Forum: Poetry 09-10-2018, 08:15 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 226
Posted By brianpatrick
I have friends in St. Catherineís. Guys I used to...

I have friends in St. Catherineís. Guys I used to play with in a band. Last I heard they were still doing heroin. I hope youíre not doing smack. That shit is the devil.
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