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Forum: Fiction 12-19-2008, 11:14 PM
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Posted By mathmission
Greatly appreciated. The line "That was three...

Greatly appreciated. The line "That was three years ago" actually was added from the original. Several people mentioned that they felt that the shifting back and forth between the past and persent...
Forum: Fiction 12-19-2008, 02:21 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 2,557
Posted By mathmission
Thank you very much, Devon and Mick, I greatly...

Thank you very much, Devon and Mick, I greatly appreciate your willingness to read. I'm actually very pleased with this story, and hope to polish it some day. I think it's very close to where I want...
Forum: Fiction 12-13-2008, 09:29 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 2,557
Posted By mathmission
well, if you spot any, please let me know. I do...

well, if you spot any, please let me know. I do use some punctuation incorrectly as a style, so I just want to make sure that those are not the ones you reference. Thanks again!
Forum: Fiction 12-12-2008, 09:09 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 2,557
Posted By mathmission
I saw that somewhere else, but still don't...

I saw that somewhere else, but still don't recognize it...

SPAG?
Forum: Fiction 12-12-2008, 01:39 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 2,557
Posted By mathmission
Thank you kindly. I figured that 3,000 is just...

Thank you kindly. I figured that 3,000 is just about the most one can expect to get people to read. It is rather long, as most of my work is closer to 1,000 words. But this one needed that extra...
Forum: Fiction 12-12-2008, 07:53 AM
Replies: 16
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Posted By mathmission
You know, I don't know why I didn't realize that...

You know, I don't know why I didn't realize that in fact, 10 dollars is not quite enough to buy the lamp, unless it happened to be a fairly small lamp. Not sure if I'll change that or not, but will...
Forum: Fiction 12-12-2008, 05:18 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 2,557
Posted By mathmission
Thank you Lord Loss for reading. I appreciate it.

Thank you Lord Loss for reading. I appreciate it.
Forum: Fiction 12-11-2008, 07:30 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 2,557
Posted By mathmission
Ten Dollars

As I was telling Devon, hard economic times have hit. I've been gone for a while sorting out job issues. Contract writing just isn't what it used to be. And film making has become more of a financial...
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