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Forum: Board Games 05-30-2014, 02:51 AM
Replies: 115
Views: 10,737
Posted By RerunGirl
silly-shinagians shake "ses-memes" (themsleves)...

silly-shinagians shake "ses-memes" (themsleves) sad, surely?
Forum: Board Games 05-29-2014, 03:34 AM
Replies: 115
Views: 10,737
Posted By RerunGirl
sane?

sane?
Forum: Poetry 05-28-2014, 07:28 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,395
Posted By RerunGirl
I like this work. It's so sweet, but have you...

I like this work. It's so sweet, but have you considered trying to make it into a spoken word? It seems to flow that way for me.
Forum: Lyrics 05-28-2014, 06:31 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 2,375
Posted By RerunGirl
Amazing! what type of music will you be playing...

Amazing! what type of music will you be playing it with?
Forum: Fiction 05-28-2014, 06:30 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 553
Posted By RerunGirl
Please re-write the first line. It seems as if it...

Please re-write the first line. It seems as if it is either a run-on sentence, or that there are some semicolons paced to allow the reader to cope.
Not a bad beginning however. Is this part of a...
Forum: Fiction 05-27-2014, 06:20 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 586
Posted By RerunGirl
Thanks so much MosherMike1138. I needed that...

Thanks so much MosherMike1138. I needed that encouragement. I've actually fleshed out the story, but when I tried to pitch to some of my family, it didn't make sense.

This is supposed to be the...
Forum: Introductions 05-27-2014, 06:10 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 370
Posted By RerunGirl
Hey Intimate! new here too. Just wondering, why...

Hey Intimate! new here too. Just wondering, why is your name 'Intimate'?
this is my first pitch, and I wonder if it's something to pursue.
Criticize as much as possible.

Background
This is a...
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 05-27-2014, 06:10 AM
Replies: 26
Views: 6,546
Posted By RerunGirl
I totally agree with AnyaKimlun. My characters...

I totally agree with AnyaKimlun. My characters become so real after a while it feels like a crime not to tell the world about them.
They take on a life of their own!
Forum: Tips & Advice 05-27-2014, 06:07 AM
Replies: 20
Views: 4,579
Posted By RerunGirl
Plotting here

Nope, I usually just make an overview and go from there...
what do u think of this?

Background
This is a story of the process of choosing the next monarch for a sector of Animalia called Aves....
Forum: Introductions 05-27-2014, 05:26 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 539
Posted By RerunGirl
Hello there!

I'm new too, and in high school as well. Not enjoying it much either.

What kind of stuff do you like writing about?

I'm trying to get a believable plot going for a webcomic I want to...
Forum: Fiction 05-27-2014, 05:20 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 586
Posted By RerunGirl
Icon1 Story Pitch, HELP!

Hey there! this is my first pitch, and I wonder if it's something to pursue.
Criticize as much as possible.

Background
This is a story of the process of choosing the next monarch for a sector of...
Forum: Scripts 05-27-2014, 05:06 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 7,005
Posted By RerunGirl
Celtx

Wow, easy to read and believeable. That's not even talking about the format! If you haven't already try Celtx, a free script writing software.
Forum: Scripts 05-27-2014, 05:02 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 6,264
Posted By RerunGirl
Icon1 Wit

This is a very amusing script, but I do not think its Shakespearian tone suits its hilarity. Try watching A Knight's Tale to get some ideas.
Rerun
Forum: Scripts 05-27-2014, 04:53 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 8,197
Posted By RerunGirl
Not such a good attempt. One, they sound like...

Not such a good attempt.
One, they sound like their in highschool when I know you are trying to make them appear to be in college, or above.
The dialog is a little...tasking. No setting, and...
Forum: Scripts 05-27-2014, 04:42 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 5,987
Posted By RerunGirl
Icon11 Clockwork?

Hey, I like your piece, but I am confused as to why you included the television broadcast. Maybe, replece the broadcast with something relevanty to the servant turning himself off.
I would like to...
Forum: Scripts 05-27-2014, 04:26 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 5,299
Posted By RerunGirl
Icon3 Reality

Hey, I love your script, it flows so naturally. How about we hear something about his disorder/disease. Does it exist in real life?
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