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Forum: Poetry 01-11-2017, 11:30 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 763
Posted By <3Less
Wanderlost

Whereas I roam, in stead you stayed,
counting 'til the end, the days
between parting and the last
good-bye.
Forum: Free Writing 04-08-2016, 04:18 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,649
Posted By <3Less
Please, for the love of god, don't tell this to...

Please, for the love of god, don't tell this to Nacia. It...it never ends well. I still have nightmares, even when I'm not sleeping.
Forum: Fiction 04-05-2016, 05:57 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 736
Posted By <3Less
What made you think of the name, Daryl Kato-Kim?

What made you think of the name, Daryl Kato-Kim?
Forum: Poetry 03-06-2016, 04:09 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 782
Posted By <3Less
Not really. My idea just went as far as having...

Not really. My idea just went as far as having the two separate, but connected poems : cease and desist. Didn't really have any ideas on content.
Forum: Poetry 03-06-2016, 02:13 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 782
Posted By <3Less
Holy geeze, I wasn't saying anything. There...

Holy geeze, I wasn't saying anything.

There is a term called cease and desist. Your poem is called desist. Therefore, I thought it would be a nice sort of connection if you had also had a poem...
Forum: Poetry 03-06-2016, 01:38 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 782
Posted By <3Less
You should couple this poem with another one...

You should couple this poem with another one called Cease.
Forum: Poetry 03-06-2016, 12:24 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 753
Posted By <3Less
Hundreds upon hundreds upon hundreds. It's...

Hundreds upon hundreds upon hundreds.

It's pretty intense. She likes this style very much. I've never seen her write any other way, sans non-poetry.
Forum: Poetry 03-06-2016, 12:14 AM
Replies: 65
Views: 4,831
Posted By <3Less
I'm legitimately surprised people are still...

I'm legitimately surprised people are still talking in here. I started reading the poem thinking it'd be something new, and was like...wait...I haven't been here in quite some time, but I've read...
Forum: Poetry 11-15-2015, 01:54 PM
Replies: 65
Views: 4,831
Posted By <3Less
Yeah, I hadn't thought of that in the perspective...

Yeah, I hadn't thought of that in the perspective of the penis being the kitten/the kitten being stroked. That makes more sense.
Forum: Poetry 11-15-2015, 01:02 PM
Replies: 65
Views: 4,831
Posted By <3Less
"I kitten stroked it" I don't think what I...

"I kitten stroked it"

I don't think what I think of this is the same thing that you think of this. That is, unless you shredded that penis to unidentifiable levels.
Forum: Poetry 07-29-2015, 07:40 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,196
Posted By <3Less
I go back and forth in my thought processes. It...

I go back and forth in my thought processes. It bothers me when I don't understand what I'm reading too, issue is, I'm not other people, I'm me. When I don't understand what I'm reading, I know that...
Forum: Poetry 07-29-2015, 05:59 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,196
Posted By <3Less
No worries, you did what I asked, I can't...

No worries, you did what I asked, I can't complain about your results (too much).

When I started writing this I had no purpose. I was just in a mood. I had fun writing it, despite that. It's...
Forum: Poetry 07-29-2015, 05:05 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,196
Posted By <3Less
Tell me, how do you feel when you read it? How do...

Tell me, how do you feel when you read it? How do you read it?
Forum: Poetry 07-28-2015, 04:34 PM
Replies: 35
Views: 4,050
Posted By <3Less
Yeah, maybe. You could try beam, perhaps.

Yeah, maybe. You could try beam, perhaps.
Forum: Poetry 07-28-2015, 04:04 PM
Replies: 35
Views: 4,050
Posted By <3Less
Sadly, I'm not quite a poet like you are, so I do...

Sadly, I'm not quite a poet like you are, so I do not see.
Forum: Poetry 07-28-2015, 12:40 AM
Replies: 13
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Views: 1,346
Posted By <3Less
It really is.

It really is.
Forum: Poetry 07-27-2015, 10:18 PM
Replies: 35
Views: 4,050
Posted By <3Less
"Built of logs, not boards Built to endure...

"Built of logs, not boards
Built to endure russian winters

Windows higher than your head
Slit like, the thickness of a log"

The use of log twice in such close proximity felt awkward to me.
Forum: Poetry 07-27-2015, 08:57 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,196
Posted By <3Less
FINaleY

murder, death, suicide
no one cared, no one cried

fire, bullets, pointy things
ignorance says silence sings

rope tied, frayed, strung
gasoline filled his lung
concrete block over flung
gun...
Forum: Poetry 07-10-2015, 10:08 AM
Replies: 45
Views: 4,144
Posted By <3Less
Okay, okay, you're kind of breaking into the...

Okay, okay, you're kind of breaking into the illogical.

One does not need to be Russian to know Russian, nor do all Russian's know all Russian words, so really that line is just...aweful.
Forum: Poetry 07-09-2015, 09:30 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 1,853
Posted By <3Less
Oh, that special Life guy. He always knows what's...

Oh, that special Life guy. He always knows what's what.

Be that as it may, I'd like to venture a guess. The puppet is also the master?

Either way, I like the thought.
Forum: Poetry 07-09-2015, 03:00 PM
Replies: 45
Views: 4,144
Posted By <3Less
Seems pronounceable enough for me. I...

Seems pronounceable enough for me.

I personally don't think it's a great example of what he's trying to get across.



I don't know if the result should be considered part of the combination....
Forum: Poetry 07-09-2015, 11:52 AM
Replies: 45
Views: 4,144
Posted By <3Less
I was like, "woah, so many more comments," and...

I was like, "woah, so many more comments," and then...
Forum: Poetry 07-09-2015, 03:17 AM
Replies: 45
Views: 4,144
Posted By <3Less
And yet, your [non] structure is so prevalent in...

And yet, your [non] structure is so prevalent in every poem I see you put out...that I can't help but say that you, indeed, follow a structure when you write poetry, whether it's intended or not.
Forum: Poetry 07-09-2015, 03:09 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,122
Posted By <3Less
An example, on my part, of taking things out of...

An example, on my part, of taking things out of context.

Moving on.

Typo.

Otherwise, I similarly don't know which I like better.

As far as the rhythm goes, I think the first is more...
Forum: Poetry 07-08-2015, 02:54 PM
Replies: 45
Views: 4,144
Posted By <3Less
Not going to lie, I had to google that.

Not going to lie, I had to google that.
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