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Forum: Scripts 10-15-2011, 12:11 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,576
Posted By krackham
Thanks. Glad you liked it! Hope the ending was...

Thanks. Glad you liked it! Hope the ending was clear enough...

Kylie
Forum: Scripts 10-13-2011, 02:49 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,576
Posted By krackham
Icon7 On the Edge...

Hi - would love some feedback on the following ten minute piece. In particular the ending...

Thanks,

Kylie


On the Edge

Cast:
Forum: Scripts 10-12-2011, 01:20 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 2,495
Posted By krackham
Sorry, new to the list and thought this was...

Sorry, new to the list and thought this was something I wanted to respond to. :)
Forum: Writers' Cafe 10-12-2011, 03:24 AM
Replies: 76
Views: 4,698
Posted By krackham
Can't stand it when people use 'for all intensive...

Can't stand it when people use 'for all intensive purposes' !!! They've obviously never used the word 'intent'!
Forum: Scripts 10-12-2011, 03:20 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 7,005
Posted By krackham
I really like the idea of this - but it struck me...

I really like the idea of this - but it struck me that you might not even need the character of Steve at all. The interesting relationship for me is that between Kyle and Jay, and the intro part with...
Forum: Scripts 10-12-2011, 03:10 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 2,495
Posted By krackham
I agree with Night Wanderer about the dialogue -...

I agree with Night Wanderer about the dialogue - needs to be more natural.

I would like to know what you have in mind for this - is this a short, ten minute piece, or a one act or a full length...
Forum: Scripts 10-11-2011, 06:25 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 1,691
Posted By krackham
Hi, You didn't say how old the kids are that...

Hi,

You didn't say how old the kids are that you are writing for.... phrases like..." I don't hear the sound of progress ringing in my ears" would go over the head of my very literal six year old,...
Forum: Introductions 10-11-2011, 06:12 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 604
Posted By krackham
Icon7 Hi! Another newbie!

Hi All!

Just introducing myself. My name is Kylie, and I write scripts!! I am working on a few longer scripts at the moment, but have put them aside for a while and I've spent the last year or so...
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