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Forum: Fiction 09-07-2006, 04:30 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 889
Posted By Keyser Soze
Upper Class ~330 Words

Haven't written in a while. Check it out please!

The couple sat on their porch overlooking their vast backyard in their white tennis shirts and shorts under a large umbrella covering a small...
Forum: The Library 05-27-2006, 02:03 PM
Replies: 3,718
Views: 286,785
Posted By Keyser Soze
Finished 2001: A Space Odyssey in three days. ...

Finished 2001: A Space Odyssey in three days.

Gonna start on The Great Gatsby.
Forum: Fiction 05-25-2006, 03:40 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,662
Posted By Keyser Soze
I think you meant "hear", not "here". ...

I think you meant "hear", not "here".



There were a few more errors like this.

I was taught that unless the dialogue was at the end of a paragraph, when you end the quotations, you end with...
Forum: Poetry 05-25-2006, 11:05 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 841
Posted By Keyser Soze
Is this a poem?

Is this a poem?
Forum: Poetry 05-25-2006, 10:37 AM
Replies: 20
Views: 1,680
Posted By Keyser Soze
I don't really understand it, Chris. :\

I don't really understand it, Chris.

:\
Forum: Poetry 05-25-2006, 10:33 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,336
Posted By Keyser Soze
This is a very complex poem; often times I find...

This is a very complex poem; often times I find the setting placed in my mind changing.

A little too much for me.
Forum: Poetry 05-25-2006, 10:28 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 996
Posted By Keyser Soze
I'll be blunt. I don't understand this.

I'll be blunt.

I don't understand this.
Forum: Fiction 05-25-2006, 10:27 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 777
Posted By Keyser Soze
65 Cybele into Earth and Moon

CHAPTER II

“In a meeting with the media last night, President Garrison was reported telling the press that he will not send any reinforcements to the troops in Somalia and Brazil until the...
Forum: Poetry 05-24-2006, 03:25 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,006
Posted By Keyser Soze
I liked this poem; it was short, cute, and...

I liked this poem; it was short, cute, and simple, though with rhyming like this, that's never the case.

Good work.
Forum: Poetry 05-24-2006, 03:18 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 909
Posted By Keyser Soze
I loved it :) It flows well and it's easy to...

I loved it :)

It flows well and it's easy to get pulled in.

Excellent :)
Forum: Fiction 05-24-2006, 03:16 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,266
Posted By Keyser Soze
A little extra I thought I should add to the...

A little extra I thought I should add to the chapter...


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After a few awkward moments, Doctor Klein’s face changed from one of somber mourning to one of confusion. He stared curiously...
Forum: Poetry 05-24-2006, 01:58 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,113
Posted By Keyser Soze
Though it is a wonderful poem and I really admire...

Though it is a wonderful poem and I really admire your skills, I am not sure what to think of it.

All in all, a great poem! You are talented! :)
Forum: Fiction 05-24-2006, 05:26 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,266
Posted By Keyser Soze
Yeah, the first one was completely rewritten,...

Yeah, the first one was completely rewritten, though I appreciate your critiquing!

Thanks :)
Forum: Poetry 05-22-2006, 05:44 PM
Replies: 13
Dog
Views: 1,584
Posted By Keyser Soze
I got a good vision of the dog from this poem;...

I got a good vision of the dog from this poem; donno why, but I thought of a basset hound, though I think you were going for a Dachsund from the "sausage of a dog" line.

:)
Forum: Non-Fiction 05-22-2006, 05:42 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 2,089
Posted By Keyser Soze
I think it's a good review. It's tough on...

I think it's a good review.

It's tough on the actors and writers, but if the movie is that bad, then why not?

Good work; I like your writing.
Forum: Fiction 05-22-2006, 05:36 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 2,360
Posted By Keyser Soze
I haven't read the other version, but I'll say...

I haven't read the other version, but I'll say that I really liked this. It's an interesting concept and it's a nice story; I'll have to read the the other one everyone is talking about.

For a...
Forum: Poetry 05-22-2006, 05:16 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,844
Posted By Keyser Soze
I limbo about seven-and-a-half hours a night. ...

I limbo about seven-and-a-half hours a night.

I like it, but I also agree with what riverwriter said. This is a good effort and I think's a good piece.
Forum: Poetry 05-22-2006, 05:13 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 737
Posted By Keyser Soze
With the proper formatting, the poem was easier...

With the proper formatting, the poem was easier to read and understand. It's a bit strange, but I like it.

Well written, short and to the point. Good work. :)
Forum: Fiction 05-22-2006, 05:08 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,266
Posted By Keyser Soze
I've been writing this whole time while working...

I've been writing this whole time while working on a final project for my Business class and I've just posted. Give me some time to critique, my God.

:65:Don't kill me.
Forum: Fiction 05-22-2006, 04:56 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,266
Posted By Keyser Soze
Okay, it took me a while, but I rewrote it. ...

Okay, it took me a while, but I rewrote it.

I had too many errors initially, so I tried my best on this second draft.

CHAPTER I

“Civil war has ravaged Western Africa and most...
Forum: Fiction 05-22-2006, 01:50 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,266
Posted By Keyser Soze
Thank you for this. The hyperventilating and...

Thank you for this.

The hyperventilating and stuff was a bit unrealistic, I agree.

I'll fix it soon and repost.
Forum: Fiction 05-22-2006, 11:14 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,266
Posted By Keyser Soze
65 Cybele into Earth and Moon

Okay, it took me a while, but I rewrote it.

I had too many errors initially, so I tried my best on this second draft.

CHAPTER I

“Civil war has ravaged Western Africa and most of South...
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