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Forum: Publishing 07-08-2010, 01:31 PM
Replies: 214
Views: 11,811
Posted By VFurnas
Redlorrie, I have sent mine. Hope it is...

Redlorrie,

I have sent mine. Hope it is good enough.
Forum: Poetry 07-08-2010, 10:09 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 772
Posted By VFurnas
I love the idea of being left with the "cold...

I love the idea of being left with the "cold sea."

It feels like this is the end of the poem and the beginning is missing. Feel like I skipped to the end and am not sure why they are left...
Forum: Poetry 07-08-2010, 10:03 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 10,299
Posted By VFurnas
Haa..that is perfect! Love it!

Haa..that is perfect!

Love it!
Forum: Poetry 07-08-2010, 08:22 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 10,299
Posted By VFurnas
Muph..well you might want to change it a bit. ...

Muph..well you might want to change it a bit.



Could be...

So call me a creep
just for hanging around
Ill never let you know
how deep I fell
Forum: Poetry 07-07-2010, 03:54 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 10,299
Posted By VFurnas
how far I hang down?? What does it mean?

how far I hang down?? What does it mean?
Forum: Poetry 07-07-2010, 10:27 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 10,299
Posted By VFurnas
This is confused me. It is a man...

This is confused me.

It is a man lamenting for a long lost love...but the last line is oogie..."How far I hang down" doesn't fit.

It goes from sweet to creepy. Sorry.
Forum: Introductions 07-07-2010, 10:12 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 841
Posted By VFurnas
Howdy Zottie, Welcome back to writersbeat!...

Howdy Zottie,

Welcome back to writersbeat! I think that is what everyone fears...unfair and mean words at our 'word babies.' I promise to be nice and fair. I look forward to reading your work.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 07-07-2010, 08:56 AM
Replies: 26
Views: 1,731
Posted By VFurnas
I write because it brings me joy. I write to work...

I write because it brings me joy. I write to work out struggles in my life. I write to communicate, share, honor and love.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 07-05-2010, 09:36 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,115
Posted By VFurnas
Red Lorrie, I followed you. Would welcome the...

Red Lorrie, I followed you. Would welcome the return follow. :)
Forum: Writers' Cafe 07-05-2010, 08:42 PM
Replies: 231
Views: 15,547
Posted By VFurnas
Why so angry? Can't we all just get along?

Why so angry?

Can't we all just get along?
Forum: Writers' Cafe 07-05-2010, 07:30 PM
Replies: 231
Views: 15,547
Posted By VFurnas
Don't we all make mistakes? :)

Don't we all make mistakes? :)
Forum: Non-Fiction 07-05-2010, 07:21 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 833
Posted By VFurnas
I get the worry of a mother. I also understand...

I get the worry of a mother. I also understand the hardships of living in a family of bipolar. I just wrote about this two weeks ago on my own blog. ...
Forum: Fiction 07-05-2010, 07:11 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 962
Posted By VFurnas
RainDrop, I have 'followed' you. I know...

RainDrop,

I have 'followed' you. I know the worry about posting your work there is a site that searches the web for copywrite protection site. (www.copyscape.com (http://www.copyscape.com))...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 07-05-2010, 07:02 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 746
Posted By VFurnas
Haaa...love it Rain Drop!

Haaa...love it Rain Drop!
Forum: Writers' Cafe 07-05-2010, 06:58 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 746
Posted By VFurnas
I think 'best seller' means that it is in the top...

I think 'best seller' means that it is in the top 100 books sold. At least that is what I could find from a quick google search.

I'm not one...yet. :)
Forum: Free Writing 07-05-2010, 06:54 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,431
Posted By VFurnas
You should use a self publisher. Lulu is one....

You should use a self publisher. Lulu is one. Here is the link (www.lulu.com (http://www.lulu.com)) You have to format everything but then you can order copies of the book and they open it up to...
Forum: Poetry 07-05-2010, 12:35 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 655
Posted By VFurnas
That is beautiful! I love the pattern of date,...

That is beautiful! I love the pattern of date, question and 'I' statement.

You start it in the final stanza but then change..why?

what if you...
[quote]Ten years from now your heart will...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 07-05-2010, 05:50 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,115
Posted By VFurnas
I started my blog when I realized I was posting...

I started my blog when I realized I was posting rediculously long postings on facebook. Friends were reading it and telling me that my weightloss and writing journey inspired them. So I thought why...
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 07-03-2010, 03:21 PM
Replies: 45
Views: 5,430
Posted By VFurnas
I had the problem too. I figured out that if I...

I had the problem too. I figured out that if I had a clear outline it made it so much easier. Figured out the beginning and then wrote the last chapter. then mapped out how to get there chapter by...
Forum: Poetry 07-02-2010, 06:15 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 557
Posted By VFurnas
Thank you both for the suggestions. This is...

Thank you both for the suggestions. This is really helpful.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 07-02-2010, 08:56 AM
Replies: 249
Views: 9,076
Posted By VFurnas
1975 Was all ready to post then saw all...

1975

Was all ready to post then saw all these young ones and didn't want to be the old fart.

Too late...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 06-26-2010, 05:25 PM
Replies: 8,559
Views: 215,502
Posted By VFurnas
Random Facts...

My dogs are addicted to batteries and kleenex. :shaun:
Forum: Poetry 06-26-2010, 10:35 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 557
Posted By VFurnas
15 Years Ago

15 years ago he was new on the sales floor.
We talked. He smiled. I laughed
My friend called him hers.
I acquiesced letting go.
5 years ago he was at the end of a relationship.
He cried. I...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 06-26-2010, 10:22 AM
Replies: 8,559
Views: 215,502
Posted By VFurnas
I hate bowling and refuse to touch the games at...

I hate bowling and refuse to touch the games at arcades...germs scare me. I love the idea of long walks at sunset but hate mosquitoes and sweating.
Forum: Nine and Sixty Ways Poetry Tools and Lessons 06-26-2010, 09:57 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 7,112
Posted By VFurnas
Reading the poem I totally got the self harm...

Reading the poem I totally got the self harm aspect. It was the shame, and scretive nature of the ink. The association of the body and the work. It is nice...I think the changes that HoiLei suggest...
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