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Forum: Poetry 07-15-2018, 12:02 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 93
Posted By Yonathan1
Your Propaganda In Hopes of Me Saying No

I cross paths with god
The righteous keep waltzing in pastor
tunic shoes and fidgeting fingers.

You arrive to my deathbed babbling
about heaven and hell to me without
consent
Your words...
Forum: Poetry 07-14-2018, 10:22 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 204
Posted By Yonathan1
It's supposed to be like cartoon-style writing, i...

It's supposed to be like cartoon-style writing, i wrote this to construct a stronger image cause originally instead of writing jellyfish bubbles i immediately thought of man-o-war because it was more...
Forum: Poetry 07-13-2018, 11:42 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 295
Posted By Yonathan1
Packed a punch, the ending was pure genius.

Packed a punch, the ending was pure genius.
Forum: Poetry 07-13-2018, 11:41 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 100
Posted By Yonathan1
The Picture of Funnybone Jack

Roll your funny-ribs down a hill
Funnybone Jack
It goes clunk, clunk, clunk.

Youíre skull is a jack-in-the-box
contraption for tickles and tickles
Clunk, clunk, clunk, down sharp
avocado...
Forum: Poetry 07-08-2018, 10:23 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 204
Posted By Yonathan1
Thanks Nick! I appreciate your burgeoning comment.

Thanks Nick! I appreciate your burgeoning comment.
Forum: Poetry 07-07-2018, 08:29 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 204
Posted By Yonathan1
The Pet

My pet-fish whirlpools into
pearlywhite toilet-bowl abysses
A 911-exit from childhood.

Not like Man-o-War bubbles
hurricane-blowing in jaguar-body-slides
as it skis around youth, they
leap...
Forum: Poetry 07-06-2018, 08:28 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 127
Posted By Yonathan1
Clicks

Hear clicks of plastic-keyboards
Man tap-dances fingers through a hubbub.

Click, tap, a b c, aweqafad,
I donkey-slammed alt-crt-delete buttons
by accident.

The poem fish-splashes ricocheting...
Forum: Poetry 07-05-2018, 08:43 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 177
Posted By Yonathan1
Thanks Grace, everything you've said just now is...

Thanks Grace, everything you've said just now is noted.
Forum: Poetry 07-04-2018, 05:03 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 177
Posted By Yonathan1
Pleasure

The earth is a striptease
The milk I slurp ice-skates like waterfalls
leaving me whitethirsty for celestial
angels, shifting 4x4 Fords, hissing
of canine-teeth, days curling into
night like...
Forum: Poetry 07-03-2018, 07:16 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 367
Posted By Yonathan1
Thanks grace well I made a revision on it if...

Thanks grace well I made a revision on it if you'd like to see it.
Forum: Poetry 07-02-2018, 02:31 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 163
Posted By Yonathan1
To Ariana Grande Upon Her Kindness

I canít catch a glimpse of paradise-doors
or butterfly people
I fall and crumble to the ground
Itís not hard explaining the sides of my face holding bar
codes like I am a criminal to love or...
Forum: Poetry 06-30-2018, 02:46 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 367
Posted By Yonathan1
Ok I get it, thanks for your honesty.

Ok I get it, thanks for your honesty.
Forum: Poetry 06-30-2018, 09:07 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,065
Posted By Yonathan1
Hey dude LanceRocks, please use simpler words...

Hey dude LanceRocks, please use simpler words because man this made my eyes hurt reading those Jurassic words. Yikes! My only concern for the piece was those words.
Forum: Poetry 06-29-2018, 07:03 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 367
Posted By Yonathan1
Can I get a critique please?

Can I get a critique please?
Forum: Poetry 06-29-2018, 05:05 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 367
Posted By Yonathan1
lol no.

lol no.
Forum: Poetry 06-29-2018, 07:55 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 367
Posted By Yonathan1
The Book of Lies

Reading Journal #1

Read well, rummage
a book
I am done bulldozing
about how much I read
Pick up Exodia and
obliterate me to the
shadow-realm.
(Get to point? Ok)
Forum: Poetry 06-29-2018, 07:53 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 219
Posted By Yonathan1
What is the poem about?

What is the poem about?
Forum: Poetry 06-28-2018, 04:19 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 219
Posted By Yonathan1
Is this an internet poem?

Is this an internet poem?
Forum: Fiction 06-27-2018, 09:37 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 503
Posted By Yonathan1
You're very welcome.

You're very welcome.
Forum: Poetry 06-27-2018, 09:36 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 161
Posted By Yonathan1
Petunia

Petunia The Pottymouth
A chattering ol flower

She bobbled and babbled
about the day for hours
Petunia the Pottymouth

A flimsy little stem
She bobbled and babbled
about squawking like a...
Forum: Poetry 06-26-2018, 11:03 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 152
Posted By Yonathan1
Oysters

Oysters are manís best friend
I cling them for drag queens,
cocktail celebrations.

They bend wormholes with
slivertesticals flopping like
fish in sync
Whatís going on with 4x4...
Forum: Poetry 06-26-2018, 07:51 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 164
Posted By Yonathan1
Autistic Textbook

Autistic Diary #1

People flip plastic-lips and
claim earth with donkey-poo
fingertips
Their cotton-ball-brains need
to be replaced into shiny metal
neurons to charge apeshit
thoughts.
Forum: Poetry 06-26-2018, 07:50 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 218
Posted By Yonathan1
Cool poem, I love the story behind it shepdog, I...

Cool poem, I love the story behind it shepdog, I recognize your name from Writingforums.com. Anyway great work, I like the confessional side to it by the way.
Forum: Poetry 06-25-2018, 03:04 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 177
Posted By Yonathan1
Do you always write with the same formatting as...

Do you always write with the same formatting as such Nacia?
Forum: Poetry 06-24-2018, 08:24 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 314
Posted By Yonathan1
Oh ok, never heard of DramaFever.

Oh ok, never heard of DramaFever.
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