WritersBeat.com
 

Go Back   WritersBeat.com > Search Forums


Showing results 1 to 1 of 1
Search took 0.00 seconds.
Search: Posts Made By: moonpunter
Forum: Fiction 04-01-2017, 05:52 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 550
Posted By moonpunter
OK, is this the beginning, somewhere in the...

OK, is this the beginning, somewhere in the middle, the end? I don't really see any grammar problems but story-wise this is just a fairly mundane conversation.
Showing results 1 to 1 of 1

 

All times are GMT -8. The time now is 12:44 PM.

vBulletin, Copyright 2000-2006, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.