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Forum: Fiction 09-03-2015, 12:05 PM
Replies: 28
Views: 2,079
Posted By I-Gypsy-Queen
First, Checker, don't get discouraged, I was...

First, Checker, don't get discouraged, I was captivated by the character and think she has a lot of potential. Grammar, syntax, BLAH BLAH BLAH, you got this, it can easily be fixed in the final...
Forum: Fiction 08-27-2015, 02:42 PM
Replies: 59
Views: 2,795
Posted By I-Gypsy-Queen
Except that's not true anymore. There are so many...

Except that's not true anymore. There are so many writers and so many books and not enough agents, so it's really a math game. Your work may be great, it's just not what they can SELL. It has nothing...
Forum: Fiction 08-26-2015, 11:46 AM
Replies: 59
Views: 2,795
Posted By I-Gypsy-Queen
I will absolutely review your work, if you want....

I will absolutely review your work, if you want. I have a decent platform on Goodreads and am looking to connect on Amazon too. Just tell me where to go.
Forum: Fiction 08-26-2015, 08:41 AM
Replies: 59
Views: 2,795
Posted By I-Gypsy-Queen
I'm definitely in, and I would love to keep...

I'm definitely in, and I would love to keep reading. Have you ever considered self-publishing? I was one of these: I can make it the traditional route, I can do it. But I'm giving self publishing a...
Forum: Poetry 08-26-2015, 08:12 AM
Replies: 39
Views: 2,178
Posted By I-Gypsy-Queen
great stuff. The single word that took me out of...

great stuff. The single word that took me out of this poem was "rumpus". It's too light and unsubstantial for the weight of the poem and it pulls you out. I would look for something different there....
Forum: Poetry 08-21-2015, 09:18 AM
Replies: 23
Views: 1,405
Posted By I-Gypsy-Queen
Good stuff Bagit. At first I though maybe it's...

Good stuff Bagit. At first I though maybe it's too mechanical, every line is set up and deliver, set up and deliver, and it's a list of things happening, but then I thought about it a little more and...
Forum: Fiction 08-19-2015, 08:27 AM
Replies: 24
Views: 1,692
Posted By I-Gypsy-Queen
This is really brilliant. A flash fiction of...

This is really brilliant. A flash fiction of hefty emotion. I felt weight just from the first paragraph, and that is some kind of genius. The relationship you managed to create between the narrator...
Forum: Poetry 08-19-2015, 08:15 AM
Replies: 43
Views: 3,534
Posted By I-Gypsy-Queen
Nice one Nick. Honestly, I was looking hard for...

Nice one Nick. Honestly, I was looking hard for something to give notes on, but I've got nothing. I love the subject matter, it makes the reader smile and it got people talking. All you need for...
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 08-12-2015, 12:14 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 952
Posted By I-Gypsy-Queen
Thanks for the help guys. I'm going to post the...

Thanks for the help guys. I'm going to post the first chapter in the Write Here section and you guys can tell me what you think. This is going on Amazon soon, so please, all the help you can give!
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 08-06-2015, 02:09 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 952
Posted By I-Gypsy-Queen
In Desperate Need of Help!!!-Humor for Inanimate Objects

Hey guys!

So here's the deal. In the novel I'm working on, my protagonist is a 13 year old boy who is wandering a post apocalyptic world alone except for his computer Nanny. Here's the problem I'm...
Forum: Free Writing 08-05-2015, 11:02 AM
Replies: 125
Views: 6,645
Posted By I-Gypsy-Queen
Sounds like your speaking from experience. It...

Sounds like your speaking from experience. It seems Gaines doesn't quite get sarcasm.
Forum: Poetry 07-31-2015, 09:23 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,282
Posted By I-Gypsy-Queen
You have cornered some wonderful images, now it's...

You have cornered some wonderful images, now it's time to take your place in the middle of the three ring and make them dance on a ball and swing from the tent tops.

I love LOVE this!!!
Forum: Free Writing 07-31-2015, 09:13 AM
Replies: 125
Views: 6,645
Posted By I-Gypsy-Queen
Phew, this was a read! I guess I might be late,...

Phew, this was a read! I guess I might be late, but I'm going to throw my two cents in. Firstly, Max, I must disagree with you on Nazi's being the last police state because I lived in one for the...
Forum: Poetry 07-21-2015, 12:31 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,282
Posted By I-Gypsy-Queen
the stanza break seems to signify a change in...

the stanza break seems to signify a change in location. the first stanza is describing the outside world, the last one the inside of the place. I actually like this one, think it has potential, but...
Forum: Poetry 05-12-2015, 08:53 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 860
Posted By I-Gypsy-Queen
Awesome! This was really enjoyable

Awesome! This was really enjoyable
Forum: Writer's Beat Technical Support 04-13-2015, 05:11 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 3,360
Posted By I-Gypsy-Queen
Done and done

Done and done
Forum: Introductions 04-10-2015, 07:59 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 901
Posted By I-Gypsy-Queen
Welcome! I was intrigued by your title "salut"....

Welcome! I was intrigued by your title "salut". Do you happen to have Eastern European background? I'm from Romania and that is exactly how we say hello in Romanian. Even spelled exactly the same....
Forum: Poetry 04-07-2015, 01:44 PM
Replies: 126
Views: 7,913
Posted By I-Gypsy-Queen
Shelly, I'm glad you feel this passionate about...

Shelly, I'm glad you feel this passionate about Nacia's work. I hope you have the same passion for your own work. I would, however, suggest that you refrain from insulting every other person on the...
Forum: Poetry 04-07-2015, 12:52 PM
Replies: 126
Views: 7,913
Posted By I-Gypsy-Queen
Shelly, it seems to me, the only person currently...

Shelly, it seems to me, the only person currently guilty of "unnecessary roughness" is you. Critiquing someone's work is not making a fool out of them and this forum is designed for critiquing. No...
Forum: Poetry 04-07-2015, 10:20 AM
Replies: 126
Views: 7,913
Posted By I-Gypsy-Queen
All right folks, let's round this out and agree...

All right folks, let's round this out and agree to disagree. Half of you are supporting the forum's purpose of "critiquing" and the other half is critiquing the critiques. There is no common ground...
Forum: Poetry 04-02-2015, 08:09 AM
Replies: 126
Views: 7,913
Posted By I-Gypsy-Queen
Nacia, I understand your position, so I'm going...

Nacia, I understand your position, so I'm going to give you the same advice my teacher did when I told her I was far too good to do revisions and my original work carried it's own brilliance and...
Forum: Poetry 04-01-2015, 12:51 PM
Replies: 126
Views: 7,913
Posted By I-Gypsy-Queen
Shelly, this is not a publishing site, this is a...

Shelly, this is not a publishing site, this is a critiquing site. The ONLY reason to put your work on here is to have it critiqued. If one is looking to get discovered or endless praise for their...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 04-01-2015, 08:50 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,541
Posted By I-Gypsy-Queen
This is Genius and I will say no more about it.

This is Genius and I will say no more about it.
Forum: Poetry 04-01-2015, 08:46 AM
Replies: 126
Views: 7,913
Posted By I-Gypsy-Queen
I just have a question for you Nacia, do you edit...

I just have a question for you Nacia, do you edit your work, (I mean heavily, changing stanzas, removing entire sections, rewriting, trying different formats), or are your poems pretty close to the...
Forum: Fiction 03-28-2015, 09:06 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 996
Posted By I-Gypsy-Queen
Hey Joe, have you ever written a play? This reads...

Hey Joe, have you ever written a play? This reads a lot like one, and I think in that format you can also trust the actors to bring some of the physical tension Gabriel was talking about. Just a...
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