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Forum: Fiction 06-18-2012, 10:25 PM
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Forum: Poetry 06-18-2012, 10:19 PM
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Views: 679
Posted By Mkasel
This is one of my favorite poems I've read on...

This is one of my favorite poems I've read on this site. Amazing. So relatable, you should really pursue a published career.
Forum: Poetry 06-18-2012, 10:15 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 600
Posted By Mkasel
You are good. I will say that, but I do not like...

You are good. I will say that, but I do not like the use of punctuation. Honestly, the poem is so good without the overwrought period use.
Forum: Previous Contests 06-18-2012, 10:14 PM
Replies: 37
Views: 11,520
Posted By Mkasel
Really great, love your voice!

Really great, love your voice!
Forum: Non-Fiction 06-18-2012, 04:55 PM
Replies: 29
Views: 4,453
Posted By Mkasel
I actually started writing a blog today....

I actually started writing a blog today. Honestly, it is a place to publish the essays that I would be writing regardless if blogs exist. It is just nice to know that someone out there might be...
Forum: Poetry 10-15-2009, 05:45 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 847
Posted By Mkasel
"So are you prepared? Or are you scared? Well...

"So are you prepared?
Or are you scared?
Well such is the way
That time works each day
And you better pray
'Cause it's slipping away
All the things you don't do
You can only blame you
And...
Forum: Poetry 10-15-2009, 05:43 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 635
Posted By Mkasel
The shape is very interesting. Though, I find the...

The shape is very interesting. Though, I find the writing somewhat juvenile. Perhaps I am partial to thinking so because of how against the current "Vampire mania" I am. Maybe a different topic would...
Forum: Non-Fiction 10-15-2009, 05:41 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 2,422
Posted By Mkasel
Interesting. Last week in my AP Language and...

Interesting. Last week in my AP Language and Composition class (Yes, I'm a high schooler).. we read George Orwell's essay, "Why I Write." It's pretty weird that I came on here a found a post with the...
Forum: Non-Fiction 10-15-2009, 05:38 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 1,017
Posted By Mkasel
I'm not sure where this is going. Maybe it's just...

I'm not sure where this is going. Maybe it's just me, but the message just doesn't pop out, and the writing seems unclear. Perhaps a little more focus?
Forum: Fiction 10-15-2009, 05:37 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,296
Posted By Mkasel
Woah.

Your graphic imagery is shocking, yet necessary. I feel like I'm in the racing mind of a teenager. Never dwelling on one thought. I really, really like the profanity. It adds to the quick, uncensored...
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