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Forum: Classifieds 06-01-2017, 12:23 PM
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Views: 2,128
Posted By Lmc71775
FIX ME coming out from Flux Books

My YA novel FIX ME will come out this November from Flux Books. It's on sale on pre-order, 44% off on Amazon. You can go HERE...
Forum: Poetry 05-16-2017, 05:57 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 494
Posted By Lmc71775
Haha...I guess you can say that.

Haha...I guess you can say that.
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 05-11-2017, 11:20 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 2,638
Posted By Lmc71775
Although novellas can be a hard sell, it's not...

Although novellas can be a hard sell, it's not impossible. There are still publishing houses that take novellas. You just have to research them. A lot of e-publishers are willing to look at them too....
Forum: Poetry 05-11-2017, 11:14 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 802
Posted By Lmc71775
Yeah, I like it too. Good ending.

Yeah, I like it too. Good ending.
Forum: Poetry 05-11-2017, 11:01 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 494
Posted By Lmc71775
The Broken Record Player

You smoke and choke on the last note
you wrote. Silly little singing sorry tunes,
played out over the spread of a 24 hour day.

Lay broken and twisted, missed it. Whistled it
in your ear. Words...
Forum: Poetry 05-11-2017, 10:56 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,318
Posted By Lmc71775
Wow, very lovely! Great images. I really enjoyed...

Wow, very lovely! Great images. I really enjoyed this.
Forum: Poetry 10-15-2016, 01:14 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 720
Posted By Lmc71775
Yeah, I liked this too. Very vivid and emotional.

Yeah, I liked this too. Very vivid and emotional.
Forum: Fiction 08-29-2016, 02:21 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 878
Posted By Lmc71775
Haha! Good ending. If felt like a video game or...

Haha! Good ending. If felt like a video game or something with all the bullets flying. That one phrase got a bit repetitious, but it works in the end. I was entertained.
Forum: Fiction 08-27-2016, 02:08 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,805
Posted By Lmc71775
I thought this was really good. I really enjoyed...

I thought this was really good. I really enjoyed it. I liked how you described hell, although it sounds a bit cliche, it still works. There's a lot of action in this.

The writing was clear and...
Forum: Fiction 08-27-2016, 12:35 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 763
Posted By Lmc71775
Good idea, Max. Thank you for taking the time to...

Good idea, Max. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. I will definitely keep that in mind when I revise it.
Forum: Fiction 08-27-2016, 02:51 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 763
Posted By Lmc71775
The Dream Squad (Chapter One 1250 words)

Chapter One

Molly

Iím sitting in a circle of five with Dr. Ding seated in the middle. Jay is to the right of me, fidgeting in his seat as he picks his nails and waits his turn. I wish I can say...
Forum: Poetry 08-11-2016, 02:53 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 562
Posted By Lmc71775
Thank you both, KBR and NuNu. I sincerely...

Thank you both, KBR and NuNu. I sincerely appreciate!
Forum: Poetry 08-11-2016, 02:50 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 492
Posted By Lmc71775
This is quite elegant. Thoroughly enjoyed!

This is quite elegant. Thoroughly enjoyed!
Forum: Poetry 08-08-2016, 05:16 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 705
Posted By Lmc71775
WOW! Best poem I've read in a long time. It's so...

WOW! Best poem I've read in a long time. It's so passionate and beautiful. Such a lovely, lovely poem. I very much enjoyed this piece.
Forum: Poetry 08-08-2016, 05:06 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 488
Posted By Lmc71775
This is a different poem in the use of other...

This is a different poem in the use of other devises such as italics, and dashes, underlines, etc. I would get rid of the first just in the second to the last line though. Otherwise good poem,...
Forum: Poetry 08-08-2016, 05:03 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 645
Posted By Lmc71775
There's some rhyme in there but it breaks off....

There's some rhyme in there but it breaks off. I'm not sure if I completely like that. Some interesting lines in there. I enjoyed this.
Forum: Poetry 08-08-2016, 04:58 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 605
Posted By Lmc71775
Did you mean "and SWIM around at home?" I...

Did you mean "and SWIM around at home?"

I like the message in the poem. Dolphins live a good life. Great images.
Forum: Poetry 08-08-2016, 04:55 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 437
Posted By Lmc71775
The first stanza brings about a cool image. ...

The first stanza brings about a cool image.

I like the last line too. I enjoyed this.
Forum: Poetry 08-07-2016, 12:52 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 499
Posted By Lmc71775
I think this one line should read: She feeds OFF...

I think this one line should read: She feeds OFF of it

Otherwise, a good poem. I enjoyed.
Forum: Poetry 08-07-2016, 12:37 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 562
Posted By Lmc71775
Can You Keep a Secret?

Lies on the ground, moving around
in loud sound. Shake and quake
and wake my thoughts, baking
them to a crisp.

Listen. They glisten in the light,
alright? Keep you uptight
with fright in your...
Forum: Poetry 08-07-2016, 12:36 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 429
Posted By Lmc71775
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double post
Forum: Poetry 12-11-2014, 04:59 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 378
Posted By Lmc71775
Where it's Safe

Go away. There is no more room.
Itís too crammed and rammed
up against the walls. Crawls and
falls and stands real tall. Donít stay
another day. Youíre wasting your time
rhyming in line with...
Forum: Poetry 12-11-2014, 04:58 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 408
Posted By Lmc71775
This is pretty. Did you mean "you" in this...

This is pretty.

Did you mean "you" in this line?> uo like a frame
Forum: Poetry 12-11-2014, 04:55 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 369
Posted By Lmc71775
I really like this. It's a fun read.

I really like this. It's a fun read.
Forum: Poetry 11-21-2014, 06:54 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 826
Posted By Lmc71775
Thanks, everyone. I sincerely appreciate the...

Thanks, everyone. I sincerely appreciate the comments!
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