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Forum: Fiction 07-01-2009, 05:45 AM
Replies: 23
Views: 1,618
Posted By Jimbo
Cheers Atreus. I'm off for a mini holiday in a...

Cheers Atreus. I'm off for a mini holiday in a couple of days. Might get my butt into gear when I get back. Still...might not though, eh? Shrug. :)

Connman, sorry, I missed your first...
Forum: Fiction 07-01-2009, 03:05 AM
Replies: 23
Views: 1,618
Posted By Jimbo
Lol! If only. But still...*blush*. Hey,...

Lol! If only. But still...*blush*.

Hey, Atreus, you're one to talk, where's more of your stuff, damnit? :)
Forum: Fiction 06-30-2009, 06:13 AM
Replies: 23
Views: 1,618
Posted By Jimbo
Aww, thanks for reading! I completely take...

Aww, thanks for reading!

I completely take the point about historical accuracy. I think that since I always intended to play fast and loose with it, I should remove the date reference...although...
Forum: Fiction 06-12-2009, 06:00 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 1,618
Posted By Jimbo
There is more to the dad disappearance stuff,...

There is more to the dad disappearance stuff, related to the moneylender, but I've not done a good enough (or ANY) job of hinting at it in the moneylender showdown. I've intended to fix that for a...
Forum: Fiction 06-12-2009, 04:27 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 1,618
Posted By Jimbo
Atreus! I knew this crit was coming, and I...

Atreus!

I knew this crit was coming, and I can't thank you enough for the time and effort you've gone to in reading through all 6.5 chapters! Thanks, though :)

As many comments as I've had...
Forum: Fiction 06-08-2009, 07:35 AM
Replies: 44
Views: 3,531
Posted By Jimbo
:) Yeah, I was going to start a thread on...

:)

Yeah, I was going to start a thread on it. How people go about doing it, how they get people to visit, if there are any legal ramificaitons of "publishing" your work on the blog...along with a...
Forum: Fiction 06-08-2009, 07:13 AM
Replies: 44
Views: 3,531
Posted By Jimbo
Really? Wow. Hold onto that first (partial)...

Really? Wow.

Hold onto that first (partial) print edition, it will be worth money one day. I'l sign it for you and everything! ;)

How does that song go? "Dre-e-e-am, dream, dream...
Forum: Fiction 06-08-2009, 03:55 AM
Replies: 44
Views: 3,531
Posted By Jimbo
Well, since my return to the site, I'm way behind...

Well, since my return to the site, I'm way behind on doing my fair share of reading others' works anyway...

I'd be interested to know (if you do push on and read the Knights chapters), how you...
Forum: Fiction 06-07-2009, 07:17 PM
Replies: 44
Views: 3,531
Posted By Jimbo
Now, either it's late and I'm tired, or you're...

Now, either it's late and I'm tired, or you're likening my work to some carrion fodder and yourself to a vulture? It's ok, you can compare this old thread to a rotting carcass, as I certianly never...
Forum: Fiction 06-07-2009, 05:59 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,038
Posted By Jimbo
Wow. I missed this because you replied at...

Wow. I missed this because you replied at exactly the same time as I did.

Thanks very much for the positive feedback!
Forum: Fiction 06-07-2009, 05:51 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,038
Posted By Jimbo
Thanks for reading Tim. Yeah, I think I can...

Thanks for reading Tim.

Yeah, I think I can see your point about the opening. I'll see if I can make it flow a bit better, whilst keeping the God gag.

By any chance, were the other bits that...
Forum: Fiction 06-05-2009, 08:33 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,038
Posted By Jimbo
Thanks for the read and the comment Poch. I...

Thanks for the read and the comment Poch. I dunno about a novel from this though lol.



Oh goody! Them's the kind of threats I like. :)

I've just realised though that I've uplaoded a...
Forum: Fiction 06-05-2009, 08:05 AM
Replies: 47
Views: 2,628
Posted By Jimbo
Devon's a lady, and she's been the best thing...

Devon's a lady, and she's been the best thing ever to happen to my writing.
Forum: Fiction 06-05-2009, 02:09 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,038
Posted By Jimbo
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Forum: Fiction 06-04-2009, 02:44 AM
Replies: 23
Views: 1,618
Posted By Jimbo
Hello Q! (Ooh, I feel like James Bond, saying...

Hello Q! (Ooh, I feel like James Bond, saying that).

Good to see you're still around here, too! You and Devon, along with a couple of other great, although now absent names (like Icarus) have...
Forum: Fiction 06-04-2009, 01:04 AM
Replies: 23
Views: 1,618
Posted By Jimbo
Devon, you're a star as always. Thanks for...

Devon, you're a star as always. Thanks for looking at this.

I'll address those slip-ups you've spotted. It's strange, coming from you, not to see almost my entire excerpt quoted back at me with...
Forum: Fiction 06-03-2009, 05:28 AM
Replies: 23
Views: 1,618
Posted By Jimbo
:) I will be greatly honoured, as always!

:) I will be greatly honoured, as always!
Forum: Fiction 06-03-2009, 03:12 AM
Replies: 23
Views: 1,618
Posted By Jimbo
Two Knights Abroad - Chapter 7 - Part 1/2 (2,437 Words)

Hi,

(Warning, this chapter contains a teeny, tiny bit of very mild swearing)

I've had a long break from writing and posting my work-in-progress novel chapters here at Writersbeat (where I've...
Forum: Previous Contests 04-02-2008, 12:54 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 2,561
Posted By Jimbo
Managed to find 5 seconds to get in here and say...

Managed to find 5 seconds to get in here and say "Well done Devon!"

I've actually read a short story about talking squirrels running out in front of cars before. Entirely different to Devon's...
Forum: Fiction 03-14-2008, 07:16 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 2,401
Posted By Jimbo
Oh shit. I don't think I can live up to the...

Oh shit. I don't think I can live up to the expectation now.

Consider that part of that particular chapter cut!

Just kidding. But, believe me when I say, it's going to be truly silly...and...
Forum: Board Games 03-13-2008, 08:19 AM
Replies: 182
Views: 8,188
Posted By Jimbo
Bernard: Inter-what? Dunno, but if it's dark they...

Bernard: Inter-what? Dunno, but if it's dark they gets a bash on the 'ead, sometimes. Hur, hur.
Ralph: Well, if they are not after me for money, and they are not female, then they should probably...
Forum: Fiction 03-12-2008, 10:09 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 2,401
Posted By Jimbo
Heyup, Danster. But it's not...

Heyup, Danster.



But it's not emphasis I want, it's...umm...it's...anti-climax. Italics doesn't feel right to me. Maybe if I just said something like 'demeaning cowshed' and left italics...
Forum: Board Games 03-12-2008, 08:00 AM
Replies: 12,150
Views: 234,300
Posted By Jimbo
I am also behind in giving out crits. I...

I am also behind in giving out crits.

I am still finding it hard to tell others what I think they should be doing.

I am desperate for feedback on my own stuff though, so I must get on...
Forum: Board Games 03-12-2008, 07:51 AM
Replies: 12,150
Views: 234,300
Posted By Jimbo
I am now able to drive both to and from work in...

I am now able to drive both to and from work in the daylight, once more. I am finding it helps maintain a light and airy mood. I am loving the feeling of the approach of spring.

I am a bit...
Forum: Fiction 03-12-2008, 04:07 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 2,401
Posted By Jimbo
That's true Devon. Maybe for now I'll leave...

That's true Devon.

Maybe for now I'll leave Theresa as she is and see if her later actions can win over people who might be a little wary initially. She's not a main character, so I'm not too...
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