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Forum: Fiction 04-19-2017, 05:32 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 955
Posted By Miki
Thanks Nick, yes, I will be continuing with this...

Thanks Nick, yes, I will be continuing with this piece, just taking a bit more time to develop it. miki
Forum: Fiction 04-10-2017, 08:05 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 955
Posted By Miki
Family Reunion

Marge and Joe were at odds about attending her three day family reunion. Joe liked being around Marge's strange but interesting relatives. Totally different from his quintessentially ordinary...
Forum: Lyrics 12-12-2016, 08:32 AM
Replies: 2
71
Views: 517
Posted By Miki
71

Hi Jim, I really like this poem and could so relate as I recently turned 76. So far it's been a great age and am looking forward to more. miki
Forum: Introductions 12-12-2016, 08:11 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,841
Posted By Miki
Emy

Hi Emy and welcome. Am looking forward to "reading you". I'm from ND and we have tons of snow, which I love but haven't been out x-country yet -- one of my favorite things.
I write some poetry,...
Forum: Fiction 12-05-2016, 11:12 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 1,294
Posted By Miki
Chapter 1 Bleamy's Corner

Me too, I want more. When can we expect Chapter 2. You really caught my interest in this emotional driven piece. Thanks, miki
Forum: Fiction 12-05-2016, 11:06 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,176
Posted By Miki
Its in the blood

I liked it. I didn't feel much emotion until toward the end then it came bounding in and I wanted more. I don't see him as a madman just someone looking for something -- whatever that something is....
Forum: Fiction 12-05-2016, 10:58 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 1,214
Posted By Miki
paradiso

I liked it although ended up a bit confused, was the angry man the one who simply appeared and then disappeared?
I was left, wanting more but I enjoy the flash fiction format. Thanks, miki
Forum: Lyrics 10-17-2016, 10:55 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 486
Posted By Miki
Boy do I hear you on this topic. And totally...

Boy do I hear you on this topic. And totally agree, could even add the thirties. miki
Forum: Fiction 10-17-2016, 10:51 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 768
Posted By Miki
gypsy

Thanks avacado, I've long had issues with tense. Sometime I catch it when reading a piece aloud, obviously missed this time. Will work harder from now on.
Forum: Fiction 10-03-2016, 08:41 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 768
Posted By Miki
The Gypsy

That's it! I don't believe it. I've worked on this story for half a life time but the ending wouldn't end. Until now. Is it possible the Gypsy's card of symbols is responsible for my muse making an...
Forum: Introductions 09-26-2016, 07:35 AM
Replies: 4
New
Views: 1,124
Posted By Miki
Hi Rosie, welcome. Will look forward to reading...

Hi Rosie, welcome. Will look forward to reading your poetry, it's also one of my favorites to read and write, I especially have fun with haiku. In fact, am beginning a four week course in a couple of...
Forum: Fiction 09-23-2016, 11:23 AM
Replies: 20
Views: 2,048
Posted By Miki
nmeleen

Hi nmeleen, I liked the basis of the beginning however, a little put off by lack of a few capital letters on names and beginning of paragraphs and quotes. I have found reading aloud will catch these...
Forum: Members' Feedback 09-19-2016, 08:36 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 4,238
Posted By Miki
I have found, the hard way, when I get to the...

I have found, the hard way, when I get to the place where I "don't have anything to write about" I write a letter to someone. It's surprising how quickly it will get me back to working on a short...
Forum: Introductions 09-19-2016, 08:30 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 924
Posted By Miki
starryblu

Welcome and thanks for the intro. I've been here a bit but out o' town lately. Anyway, from your intro I'd love to read your writings in first form. I certainly can relate to what you said but have...
Forum: Fiction 09-19-2016, 08:24 AM
Replies: 23
Views: 6,326
Posted By Miki
The stick-up

Thanks, I liked it. You might want to change the "when the bell" to "then the bell". Other than that it reads well. miki
Forum: Fiction 09-02-2016, 10:47 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,744
Posted By Miki
Interesting piece, certainly held my attention....

Interesting piece, certainly held my attention. Thanks. miki
Forum: Fiction 09-02-2016, 10:43 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 2,083
Posted By Miki
WOW! This is heavy. I feel like I've walked...

WOW! This is heavy. I feel like I've walked through a marsh of sucking mud. I guess that is because it says something to me. Will have to read it again, see if I can figure it out. Good job. miki
Forum: Fiction 09-02-2016, 10:27 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,230
Posted By Miki
bluntarrow

Hi, just read your story. I like the idea but question the choice of names, seems like they are too modern unless I'm mis-reading the time period.

"The gate keeper...." seems a bit confusing,...
Forum: Introductions 09-02-2016, 09:52 AM
Replies: 2
Hi
Views: 766
Posted By Miki
Welcome, I'm relatively new but would like to...

Welcome, I'm relatively new but would like to read something you've written. mikiel
Forum: Fiction 08-10-2016, 08:23 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 638
Posted By Miki
Interesting. I got lost in a couple of places but...

Interesting. I got lost in a couple of places but you brought my back in line. I still believe in magic -- dark and light -- and your story solidified it for me. Thanks for sharing, miki
Forum: Fiction 08-10-2016, 08:01 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,319
Posted By Miki
Very interesting story and well told. I was...

Very interesting story and well told. I was pulled in from the beginning. Can't think of any way to improve it. Thank you, miki
Forum: Fiction 07-25-2016, 11:00 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 516
Posted By Miki
Sad Day

On a perfect May morning Grandma's east porch made an excellent play-house for five-year-old girls and little kittens. Who would have thought a day beginning like this would end up filled with...
Forum: Fiction 07-25-2016, 10:09 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 722
Posted By Miki
max crash

I felt like I was reading an essay. At the end I couldn't find a hole to jump into, not sure what it makes me -- a hole in one, maybe??? Actually there are parts which could be made into flash...
Forum: Fiction 07-25-2016, 09:55 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 757
Posted By Miki
Now that is "flash"! , miki

Now that is "flash"! , miki
Forum: Fiction 07-25-2016, 09:53 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 627
Posted By Miki
max crash

I must say, I enjoyed the story because of its completeness in a few words. I've been fooling around some with flash now will attempt again. After reading yours I think I know where I've been going...
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