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Forum: Fiction 06-09-2014, 11:31 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,197
Posted By AmoebaMan
I've revised the story a little to kill the most...

I've revised the story a little to kill the most horrendous clichés and make Lynn's emotions more consistent and believable.
Forum: Fiction 06-09-2014, 11:28 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,197
Posted By AmoebaMan
Thanks for the read Gideon, I'm glad you enjoyed...

Thanks for the read Gideon, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

With regards to the name Starke, it's very nearly translates directly into "strong" from German, hence the allusion to her mother's native...
Forum: Fiction 06-07-2014, 01:50 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,197
Posted By AmoebaMan
Thanks for the encouragement, Mike!

Thanks for the encouragement, Mike!
Forum: Introductions 06-07-2014, 01:46 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 782
Posted By AmoebaMan
The one and only. c:

The one and only. c:
Forum: Fiction 06-05-2014, 12:43 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,197
Posted By AmoebaMan
I typically like writing in the present tense,...

I typically like writing in the present tense, just because I think the vivid language works better with it, makes it more involving. I don't have a preference for first- versus third-person really,...
Forum: Fiction 06-04-2014, 02:00 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,197
Posted By AmoebaMan
I'm thinking I want to do something more with the...

I'm thinking I want to do something more with the character, but I'm not entirely certain yet. I'm thinking that as it stands where this story ends, Lynn's just been left completely alone, with no...
Forum: Fiction 06-04-2014, 08:34 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,197
Posted By AmoebaMan
Thanks for your awesome feedback, Lyndia! You're...

Thanks for your awesome feedback, Lyndia! You're right, some of the little mistakes in there are just silliness, and they make me a little embarrassed. As for the one or two tense inconsistencies,...
Forum: Introductions 06-03-2014, 08:10 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 376
Posted By AmoebaMan
Seriously though, welcome to the forums, bro! ...

Seriously though, welcome to the forums, bro! I'm just as new as you, so maybe we can help each other out a little!
Forum: Introductions 06-03-2014, 08:09 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 376
Posted By AmoebaMan
System.out.println("Hello, world!");

System.out.println("Hello, world!");
Forum: Scripts 06-02-2014, 12:30 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 4,938
Posted By AmoebaMan
:rofl:

:rofl:
Forum: Fiction 06-02-2014, 09:29 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 448
Posted By AmoebaMan
Dafuq? Did the mom make an omelette and feed...

Dafuq?

Did the mom make an omelette and feed it to a lion, and then the lion ate a small girl?
Forum: Fiction 06-02-2014, 09:15 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,197
Posted By AmoebaMan
Icon2 From Ashes (short story, realistic fiction)

From Ashes is a short story I wrote more or less on a whim. I'd like to do more with the character and setting, and I have a sort of half-baked idea for a plot (and meta-plot) that I've been working...
Forum: Fiction 06-02-2014, 08:59 AM
Replies: 23
Views: 1,823
Posted By AmoebaMan
Well, it's kinda hard to see a depressed actress...

Well, it's kinda hard to see a depressed actress who's about to commit suicide over a failed comeback as anything besides tragic. Unless you're laughing at how dumb of a reaction that is.

Also,...
Forum: Free Writing 06-02-2014, 08:44 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,647
Posted By AmoebaMan
I'd be inclined to get existentialism out of this...

I'd be inclined to get existentialism out of this too, if only from that last line. Only problem is that I really don't like existentialists.
Forum: Fiction 06-01-2014, 10:53 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 674
Posted By AmoebaMan
Peggy Frigg was a little touched said the village...

Peggy Frigg was a little touched said the village folk...and me. 0_0

Seriously creepy, but that last line is just so macabre that I have to laugh. Was it intended to be that way?
Forum: Introductions 06-01-2014, 10:45 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 782
Posted By AmoebaMan
Icon4 *a wild amoeba appears*

Hey guys! I'd add "gals" to the salutation, but of course as everybody knows, there are no girls on the internet. ;)

Anyways, I'm just a quasi-normal college guy with a knack for a lot of...
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