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Forum: Fiction 09-24-2017, 07:47 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 589
Posted By dtp81390
Thank you all who have replied. This has been...

Thank you all who have replied. This has been great help. As this is my first time writing anything like this all of this feedback is great.
Forum: Fiction 09-21-2017, 07:01 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 610
Posted By dtp81390
The Elementalist - ch 3 (1000 words)

Please read the newest chapter of my Fantasy Novel and provide me with feedback.

This is also posted in the Members Only Forum

Read my other chapters here:
Chapter 1...
Forum: Fiction 09-21-2017, 07:00 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 427
Posted By dtp81390
The Elementalist - ch 2 (2500 words)

This is also posted in the Members Only Forum

Read chapter 1 here: Chapter 1 (http://www.writersbeat.com/showthread.php?p=737115#post737115)

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Forum: Fiction 09-21-2017, 06:59 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 589
Posted By dtp81390
The Elementalist - ch 1 (675 words)

I originally posted this is the Members Only forum and have not gotten much of a response.

This is also being posted in the members only forum.
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Forum: Writing Help & Issues 08-01-2017, 03:27 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 2,013
Posted By dtp81390
Agreed guys which is why I asked. Thand for the...

Agreed guys which is why I asked. Thand for the input. I think a void is more appropriate bc her magic is actually void magic. Not sure why this wasn't obvious
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 07-31-2017, 01:46 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 2,013
Posted By dtp81390
No it emanates from her lair but grows as she...

No it emanates from her lair but grows as she steals magic from people. I can change the name.

Thanks for the feedback
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 07-31-2017, 07:35 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 2,013
Posted By dtp81390
Question about believability in Fantasy

In my novel, their is a darkness that was unleashed, which spreads every time the evil queen steals someones magic.

The source of the darkness is at her lair.

I was picturing this as an...
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 07-31-2017, 07:27 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 2,237
Posted By dtp81390
Thanks KS Crooks, For the life of me nothing...

Thanks KS Crooks,

For the life of me nothing would come to mind.
Forum: Fiction 07-26-2017, 12:19 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 858
Posted By dtp81390
The prophecy is the guiding line of the story....

The prophecy is the guiding line of the story. The MC is fire and water, and plays the role of the reluctant hero. Bits and pieces of it will be revealed throughout the story. The parts of the...
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 07-26-2017, 12:13 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 2,237
Posted By dtp81390
Thanks for the feedback. I did not realize...

Thanks for the feedback.

I did not realize the connection with the fifth element.
Forum: Fiction 07-26-2017, 11:11 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 858
Posted By dtp81390
Thank you so much for your input. It has been...

Thank you so much for your input. It has been incredibly helpful. I will need to rethink things a bit.

My intent is that the entire prophecy is known in pieces, and the MC does not get some of the...
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 07-24-2017, 07:06 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 2,237
Posted By dtp81390
Need help writing a prophecy

I posted this in the Fiction Forum and have not gotten a response. I thought this area might provide better results

My story involves a prophecy.

When Darkness fall across the land
Good...
Forum: Fiction 07-20-2017, 02:11 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 858
Posted By dtp81390
Need help writing a prophecy

My story involves a prophecy.

When Darkness fall across the land
Good versus evil one last stand

A child born from fire and water
Power far beyond all other

A child born from Earth and...
Forum: Introductions 07-19-2017, 05:59 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 721
Posted By dtp81390
Yeah, I already have rewritten parts of it. I...

Yeah, I already have rewritten parts of it. I will post it as soon as I can
Forum: Fiction 07-19-2017, 01:25 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 1,237
Posted By dtp81390
What the hell did I just read.

What the hell did I just read.
Forum: Fiction 07-19-2017, 01:22 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,521
Posted By dtp81390
I agree with what the agents said. I did not...

I agree with what the agents said. I did not connect with anyone. I liked the excerpt but there was nothing that I could really relate to. More personalization, characteristics that could help us...
Forum: Fiction 07-19-2017, 01:14 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,530
Posted By dtp81390
Ink. You have me intrigued and wanting to read...

Ink. You have me intrigued and wanting to read more. Great job on the editing and rewrite, it flows much better. I look forward to seeing more. I like the blanket over broken glass more than the gag...
Forum: Introductions 07-19-2017, 01:05 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 721
Posted By dtp81390
New Writer

Hello I am Denis. I am an Architect with the goal of writing a novel. At this point I do not need it to get published. It is more about achieving a personal goal
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