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Forum: Poetry 07-03-2018, 11:41 PM
Replies: 15
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Posted By Vince
sounds like someone knows how to whistle

sounds like someone knows how to whistle
Forum: Poetry 07-03-2018, 01:01 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 312
Posted By Vince
Grace, Kathy read it and had some changes to...

Grace,
Kathy read it and had some changes to ofter as well - I will work on it. Areadymade some changes to the post .



the dead bee remark was a referanceto the movie "to have and have not"...
Forum: Poetry 07-02-2018, 06:42 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 312
Posted By Vince
Grace Gabriel, thanks for your help. I wrote...

Grace Gabriel,
thanks for your help. I wrote this for a young couple getting married soon. Been married three times. This time for 40 years. I finally learned.


Glad you liked it.


by the...
Forum: Poetry 07-02-2018, 11:52 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 312
Posted By Vince
Metamorphosis

Drawn together by their deep yearning for wholeness,
Each has pieces the other is missing from their souls,
The puzzle begun with romance, completed by marriage

Not an event but a rich...
Forum: Poetry 06-25-2018, 12:28 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 241
Posted By Vince
Thanks for the encouragement spshane and Ms. Box...

Thanks for the encouragement spshane and Ms. Box made some changes what do you think?
Forum: Poetry 06-21-2018, 11:08 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 241
Posted By Vince
yonathan1 indeed. this was an experiment...

yonathan1


indeed. this was an experiment that failed will try again.
Forum: Poetry 06-20-2018, 12:26 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 241
Posted By Vince
Dragonfly

Driven it climbs out of a wet world
A water creature seeking a dry end
Gasping it’s body forms a hard shell

But this is not death. This is definition
Without mind life is made...
Forum: Poetry 06-09-2018, 11:08 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 235
Posted By Vince
Like this. some of the referances are too modern...

Like this. some of the referances are too modern for an old goat like me but I like the thinking . Love is elusive and when you have it you can't hold it in place.
Forum: Poetry 06-08-2018, 06:33 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 552
Posted By Vince
thanks Vonathan1 - often most men become that...

thanks Vonathan1 - often most men become that lion. look forward to reading your stuff.
Forum: Poetry 05-30-2018, 11:25 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 552
Posted By Vince
Thanks box. even old lions still have their bite...

Thanks box. even old lions still have their bite and dignity. They still feel relevant and only become silly and pathetic when they try to be young again. Age is complicated.
Forum: Poetry 05-27-2018, 07:47 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 552
Posted By Vince
thanks Nick

thanks Nick
Forum: Poetry 05-27-2018, 07:46 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 552
Posted By Vince
the thoughts of an old man, Nacia

the thoughts of an old man, Nacia
Forum: Free Writing 05-19-2018, 10:28 AM
Replies: 27
Views: 1,174
Posted By Vince
the proff that souo exists is easy - two words -...

the proff that souo exists is easy - two words - James Brown - he is gone but soul lives on
Forum: Poetry 05-19-2018, 05:48 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 552
Posted By Vince
Ancient Lion

The old lion’s blood still burns bright,
hot as the youngest stalking male’s.

Remembered conflicts no less real,
though behind memory’s closing door.

His pride now, is a feeling not a...
Forum: Poetry 05-15-2018, 12:20 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 485
Posted By Vince
Which Real

Age sees though most of life’s most solid givens.
Is it unseemly to notice that animal nature rules?
Not long out of the jungle, humane rules are riven.

Contemplating humanity brings no peace of...
Forum: Poetry 05-14-2018, 07:31 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 536
Posted By Vince
Thriving mentally - I think. life changes when...

Thriving mentally - I think. life changes when you are old. Not all bad but clearly different.
Forum: Free Writing 05-14-2018, 07:28 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 955
Posted By Vince
I wish I were you"... as he would say

I wish I were you"... as he would say
Forum: Poetry 05-14-2018, 07:22 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 437
Posted By Vince
Somehow bliss has become some kind of right to be...

Somehow bliss has become some kind of right to be had by all or life is wrong because of its absence. It seems that thinking feeling people can't find it or hold it; only talk about it. Nice piece.
Forum: Non-Fiction 05-12-2018, 06:06 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,543
Posted By Vince
there is that day when you see yourself as old....

there is that day when you see yourself as old. Its a shock at first, but then the trick is knowing what you have to stop doing and what you must continueto do. Freedom is not a function of physical...
Forum: Poetry 05-12-2018, 05:48 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 536
Posted By Vince
I'm 72 - a real old goat

I'm 72 - a real old goat
Forum: Free Writing 05-11-2018, 02:55 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,410
Posted By Vince
to be great is to be misunderstood - don't know...

to be great is to be misunderstood - don't know who said that but it rings true. and Nick you usually ring the bell - are you the clapper?
Forum: Poetry 05-11-2018, 02:48 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 536
Posted By Vince
Leila, glad you felt it - when you get old...

Leila,

glad you felt it - when you get old you get redundent.
Forum: Poetry 05-11-2018, 02:46 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 536
Posted By Vince
Box, you are the spring to my winter. So nice -...

Box, you are the spring to my winter. So nice - very glad you liked. The stream of me babbles so I do too.
Forum: Poetry 05-08-2018, 12:48 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 536
Posted By Vince
Glad you liked. Funny I had been thinking of...

Glad you liked. Funny I had been thinking of Monty pyton - here is a piece based on them:

The Dead Parrot Society


Dead Parrot? - Yes, indeed! As you may recall, there was a comedy group...
Forum: Poetry 05-08-2018, 12:17 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 446
Posted By Vince
beauty is built on memories that can not be...

beauty is built on memories that can not be recalled
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