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Forum: Poetry 09-08-2017, 02:41 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 343
Posted By NokturnalMe
The end bugged me a lot. Torn between keeping...

The end bugged me a lot.
Torn between keeping it sweet or making it seem blunt and monotonous like the relationship itself.

Thanks for the tip.
Does read well if ended there, I agree.
Forum: Poetry 09-03-2017, 11:17 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 343
Posted By NokturnalMe
Night-Time Habits

Itís just you and me

sitting here

every night

waiting for something new

to happen
Forum: Poetry 02-21-2017, 11:00 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 452
Posted By NokturnalMe
Trash

dead like split ends

that need trimming

i fall onto the floor

for sweeping

into the trash
Forum: Poetry 08-28-2016, 11:54 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 592
Posted By NokturnalMe
I guess you've got something in your eye there.

I guess you've got something in your eye there.
Forum: Poetry 08-28-2016, 11:02 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 553
Posted By NokturnalMe
Nice to see you too Nacia. Eyeliner can be your...

Nice to see you too Nacia.
Eyeliner can be your best friend or it can turn into your worst nightmare (if you're having a bad day).
Forum: Poetry 08-28-2016, 11:00 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 411
Posted By NokturnalMe
Too many questions all over the place. Feels...

Too many questions all over the place.
Feels empty. Like it lacks a sort of theme or body.

Perhaps you ought to revise it with one train of thought in mind to get your message across more...
Forum: Poetry 08-28-2016, 10:55 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 592
Posted By NokturnalMe
Last line just seems uncomfortable to read.

Last line just seems uncomfortable to read.
Forum: Poetry 08-27-2016, 12:57 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 553
Posted By NokturnalMe
I enjoy using eyeliner. Just putting it out...

I enjoy using eyeliner.
Just putting it out there.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 08-16-2016, 11:37 AM
Replies: 24
Views: 2,996
Posted By NokturnalMe
Having way too much RAM and not being able to...

Having way too much RAM and not being able to enjoy it 'cause your OS is limiting you.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 08-16-2016, 11:34 AM
Replies: 9,066
Views: 244,936
Posted By NokturnalMe
Morrissey - My Love Life

Morrissey - My Love Life
Forum: Poetry 08-09-2016, 12:17 PM
Replies: 31
Views: 2,268
Posted By NokturnalMe
Thought it was a play on the bird theme.

Thought it was a play on the bird theme.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 08-04-2016, 01:33 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 2,996
Posted By NokturnalMe
And feel paranoid that your PC may be at risk of...

And feel paranoid that your PC may be at risk of malware, spyware, ransomware, viruses etc, just because you didn't want to update your OS time and again?
Even that in itself makes me hate computers.
Forum: Poetry 07-30-2016, 10:54 AM
Replies: 31
Views: 2,268
Posted By NokturnalMe
Ugly indeed but beautiful enough to consider as...

Ugly indeed but beautiful enough to consider as romantic.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 07-30-2016, 10:47 AM
Replies: 9,066
Views: 244,936
Posted By NokturnalMe
Lana Del Rey - Old Money

Lana Del Rey - Old Money
Forum: Writers' Cafe 07-21-2016, 12:43 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 2,606
Posted By NokturnalMe
It's awkward and uncomfortable for both parties.

It's awkward and uncomfortable for both parties.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 07-19-2016, 04:25 AM
Replies: 24
Views: 2,996
Posted By NokturnalMe
I enjoyed reading this mini-rant.

I enjoyed reading this mini-rant.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 07-19-2016, 01:01 AM
Replies: 23
Views: 2,606
Posted By NokturnalMe
See what I'm talking about? =p

See what I'm talking about? =p
Forum: Writers' Cafe 07-18-2016, 01:06 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 2,606
Posted By NokturnalMe
Witnessing somebody flirt with you. Always find...

Witnessing somebody flirt with you.
Always find it strange.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 07-18-2016, 01:05 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 2,996
Posted By NokturnalMe
Fact that it decides to update when it pleases...

Fact that it decides to update when it pleases even though you're busy with an important task.
And to add to that, it has the nerve to give you limited options of when to restart.
Forum: Board Games 06-27-2016, 01:39 PM
Replies: 12,867
Views: 222,975
Posted By NokturnalMe
Fur

Fur
Forum: Poetry 06-27-2016, 01:38 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 710
Posted By NokturnalMe
Don't delete what you've written. If it doesn't...

Don't delete what you've written.
If it doesn't make sense or work well for a 3rd party, then it doesn't mean it's bad.
It just means you could perhaps revise it again.
I enjoyed the piece overall.
Forum: Board Games 06-22-2016, 02:45 PM
Replies: 12,867
Views: 222,975
Posted By NokturnalMe
Strokes

Strokes
Forum: Board Games 06-19-2016, 12:55 PM
Replies: 181
Views: 16,090
Posted By NokturnalMe
Is this an open conversation between one person?...

Is this an open conversation between one person? :)
Forum: Poetry 06-19-2016, 10:15 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 710
Posted By NokturnalMe
The first stanza is my favorite. Only issue...

The first stanza is my favorite.

Only issue I've got is the inconsistency of stanza two's last line's missing capitalized "and".
Forum: Board Games 06-19-2016, 10:10 AM
Replies: 12,867
Views: 222,975
Posted By NokturnalMe
Woman

Woman
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