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Forum: Fiction 01-10-2016, 08:59 AM
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Views: 654
Posted By NSD716
I agree with active over passive and I'm still...

I agree with active over passive and I'm still re-reading this all the time to try and find where I can improve the syntax and structure. Thank you for your compliment. It helps reinforce why I'm...
Forum: Fiction 01-09-2016, 05:27 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 440
Posted By NSD716
Excerpt 2: Continued (1419)

((My excerpt continued. Was just a little bit over the word count and I didn't want to risk it))


She stared at the soldiers for a few moments, studying them. His presence was probably...
Forum: Fiction 01-09-2016, 05:24 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 654
Posted By NSD716
Excerpt 1: Fantasy Story (1641)

((This is from my fantasy story, just seeing what people think))

Large books floated above a small table, bobbing up and down gently as if in a calm surf. Each had different a cover, some leather...
Forum: Fiction 10-14-2015, 05:00 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,353
Posted By NSD716
This is a very intriguing setting and I enjoyed...

This is a very intriguing setting and I enjoyed it ((I have a soft spot for post apocalyptic stories)).

As for your fear of coming across confusingly, I don't think you have to worry about that....
Forum: The Library 10-05-2015, 02:47 PM
Replies: 37
Views: 9,502
Posted By NSD716
Brave New World - This book is both my favorite...

Brave New World - This book is both my favorite and most loathed story. The future Huxley created is both terrifying and depressing, however what scared me most was that if I were part of the world,...
Forum: Board Games 10-05-2015, 02:30 PM
Replies: 12,150
Views: 239,717
Posted By NSD716
I am...not sure what to post

I am...not sure what to post
Forum: Board Games 10-05-2015, 02:27 PM
Replies: 68
Views: 8,977
Posted By NSD716
The shiv remained in his side, not too deep, but...

The shiv remained in his side, not too deep, but certainly enough to puncture the kidney. Its handle protruded out past his fingers as he used his hand to try and stem the bleeding. Blood continued...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 10-05-2015, 02:10 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 2,082
Posted By NSD716
Wow, a few of these are very creative. Mine would...

Wow, a few of these are very creative. Mine would be far less so.

Shapeshifting would be my choice.

I could soar above mountains, swim in the deepest oceans, traverse areas and observe things...
Forum: Introductions 10-05-2015, 02:00 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,111
Posted By NSD716
Hello Everyone

Hi, my name is Dakota and I wouldn't call myself a writer, more of a story enthusiast. I have created many fictional histories, lore, and worlds for other people over the years and finally decided to...
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