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Forum: Writers' Cafe 10-06-2018, 10:39 PM
Replies: 9,825
Views: 310,154
Posted By JesseK1213
"Oh that's the way my sister might give a kiss." ...

"Oh that's the way my sister might give a kiss."


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AwSoG4iit6A


This album was recorded live.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 10-06-2018, 10:45 AM
Replies: 9,825
Views: 310,154
Posted By JesseK1213
Yeah buddy. That's some real newgrass. ...

Yeah buddy. That's some real newgrass.


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ioDXUnJmdBE
Forum: Writers' Cafe 10-06-2018, 10:32 AM
Replies: 9,825
Views: 310,154
Posted By JesseK1213
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eMd0uaXLwps

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eMd0uaXLwps
Forum: Writers' Cafe 08-14-2018, 10:45 AM
Replies: 99
Views: 2,560
Posted By JesseK1213
How does one delete their profile? Asking for a...

How does one delete their profile? Asking for a friend.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 08-08-2018, 08:27 PM
Replies: 84
Views: 2,507
Posted By JesseK1213
Ditto. Oh, shit.

Ditto.

Oh, shit.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 08-06-2018, 05:19 PM
Replies: 84
Views: 2,507
Posted By JesseK1213
Nah. They’re imaginary, so they pretty much have...

Nah. They’re imaginary, so they pretty much have to laugh at whatever I tell them to.

If you can’t find the real thing, I highly recommend the imaginary route. You save a fortune on dinners.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 08-06-2018, 10:15 AM
Replies: 84
Views: 2,507
Posted By JesseK1213
No way. They don't have two sense to rub together...

No way. They don't have two sense to rub together <----- see what I did there?
Forum: Writers' Cafe 08-06-2018, 09:16 AM
Replies: 84
Views: 2,507
Posted By JesseK1213
I'd like to meet Brian. Seems like a nice enough...

I'd like to meet Brian. Seems like a nice enough fella, and I can tell by his posts that we have a similar personality. Also, I'd probably pitch him on a website for his plumbing company.

I'd like...
Forum: Fiction 08-06-2018, 08:16 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 716
Posted By JesseK1213
Feels sophomoric. The characters feel like...

Feels sophomoric. The characters feel like caricatures and don't ring true. For instance, the cop lighting up at the mention of a dating site, forgetting about the woman going 120. I'm sure men are...
Forum: Fiction 08-04-2018, 12:35 PM
Replies: 93
Views: 2,315
Posted By JesseK1213
Ahhh, well that makes a hell of a lot more sense....

Ahhh, well that makes a hell of a lot more sense.

Journey on. I'll be reading.
Forum: Fiction 08-04-2018, 11:01 AM
Replies: 93
Views: 2,315
Posted By JesseK1213
Had no problem making it to the end. But then I...

Had no problem making it to the end. But then I got there and... where's the payoff?

One of the challenges I have with writing (and writing science fiction especially) is getting what's in my head...
Forum: Fiction 07-15-2018, 02:25 PM
Replies: 28
Views: 1,375
Posted By JesseK1213
I agree, but in the situation of breaking and...

I agree, but in the situation of breaking and entering, it doesn't ring true. Unless you've had a pistol to your face a dozen or more times, you're not going to act the way your MC acts. Truthfully,...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 07-05-2018, 07:05 PM
Replies: 47
Views: 3,479
Posted By JesseK1213
How coy.

How coy.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 07-05-2018, 06:15 PM
Replies: 47
Views: 3,479
Posted By JesseK1213
Bleh. It's unrealistic to hope for a Miyagi in a...

Bleh. It's unrealistic to hope for a Miyagi in a writing forum. That's to say, one who's actually walked the walk and can provide the "wax on, wax off" kind of critique, the stork-stance that will...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 07-04-2018, 06:04 PM
Replies: 47
Views: 3,479
Posted By JesseK1213
Speaking as a relative newcomer who joined well...

Speaking as a relative newcomer who joined well after this forum's heyday (or so I've been told), the only way to get this place active is with a surge of new content (in the fiction, member's only,...
Forum: The Intellectual Table 07-04-2018, 05:31 PM
Replies: 222
Views: 6,386
Posted By JesseK1213
“If what Jesus said was good, what can it matter...

“If what Jesus said was good, what can it matter whether he was God or not?” -- Kurt Vonnegut (who's up in heaven now, or at least, that's his favorite joke)
Forum: Writers' Cafe 07-04-2018, 12:14 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 679
Posted By JesseK1213
I tend to agree with Shane. Rules (or guidelines,...

I tend to agree with Shane. Rules (or guidelines, maybe that's a better word) are certainly there for a reason. When a shitty writer doesn't follow the rules, the writing is shittier. When a shitty...
Forum: Fiction 05-20-2018, 01:49 PM
Replies: 62
Views: 4,516
Posted By JesseK1213
I just wanted to chime in here and say that I...

I just wanted to chime in here and say that I always suspected Brian was a “plaid shorts” kind of guy.

Carry on.
Forum: Fiction 05-14-2018, 04:46 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,258
Posted By JesseK1213
Feels too preachy and thin to be a story. It also...

Feels too preachy and thin to be a story. It also doesn’t feel very honest - I feel like the author is trying to tell me somehing rather than the story takes. I would suggest taking a step back and...
Forum: Lyrics 03-24-2018, 11:57 AM
Replies: 30
Views: 3,324
Posted By JesseK1213
I dig it. Mellow but crunchy. Do you play...

I dig it. Mellow but crunchy.

Do you play all the instruments on the track?

I'm a drummer, so I'd like to hear a little more variation there, but the simple beat works for the song. I would...
Forum: Fiction 03-24-2018, 11:40 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,405
Posted By JesseK1213
I read most of the stuff you post, Nick. Goddamn....

I read most of the stuff you post, Nick. Goddamn. It's good.

It's your voice.

I don't have any critiques. I just like it. A lot.
Forum: Fiction 03-03-2018, 10:50 PM
Replies: 62
Views: 4,516
Posted By JesseK1213
Don't read it. The efficacy of my writing, or...

Don't read it. The efficacy of my writing, or lack thereof, has no bearing on my comment, and that comment is, You two are children.

Am I trying to write? You bet your ass I am, trying being the...
Forum: Fiction 03-03-2018, 06:48 PM
Replies: 62
Views: 4,516
Posted By JesseK1213
Yes.

Yes.
Forum: Fiction 03-03-2018, 01:21 PM
Replies: 62
Views: 4,516
Posted By JesseK1213
Jesus, you two are embarrassing. Is anyone...

Jesus, you two are embarrassing.

Is anyone else here actually trying to write?
Forum: Fiction 03-03-2018, 10:13 AM
Replies: 58
Views: 5,195
Posted By JesseK1213
I don't like Kaylee. I get that's the intention,...

I don't like Kaylee. I get that's the intention, but I don't even like that I hate her. She's smarmy, but it seems forced. She just found out that her mother was in the hospital and had been shot......
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