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Forum: Fiction 06-08-2017, 11:31 PM
Replies: 33
Views: 1,515
Posted By Lyndia
I liked this. I think its a good example of...

I liked this. I think its a good example of proper storytelling. Others say the end was quite obvious, but the ride enjoyable. I agree, but would like to add that for me I wasn't thinking about the...
Forum: Poetry 03-26-2016, 04:33 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 765
Posted By Lyndia
Well to be honest with the spelling I was trying...

Well to be honest with the spelling I was trying to correct the pronunciation so that it kept in line with the scheme I was using for the syllables. Hoping for it to be pronounced as three instead of...
Forum: Poetry 02-04-2016, 04:37 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 673
Posted By Lyndia
Honestly I don't know much about poetry, which is...

Honestly I don't know much about poetry, which is why I hardly ever comment on it. But something about this really made me want to say something.

The parts of it that are good, are really...
Forum: Poetry 02-01-2016, 11:52 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 765
Posted By Lyndia
Musing About Treacherous Tendencies

I find myself beguiled again
By trifling eccentricities
And wonder if its such a sin
This mental infidelity

Try as I can to stem the fright
It nips my heels and heeds me not
Such epicurean...
Forum: Fiction 02-13-2015, 01:55 PM
Replies: 129
Views: 10,114
Posted By Lyndia
Isn't it funny how, even starting out with good...

Isn't it funny how, even starting out with good intentions, discussions about such subjects as religion-politics-et cetera often devolve into madness? Not that this is madness. This is still quite...
Forum: Introductions 02-08-2015, 05:54 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 738
Posted By Lyndia
Welcome back! I tend to go on hiatus's too, but...

Welcome back! I tend to go on hiatus's too, but somehow I always end up back here. Oh WritersBeat, what are you putting in the water?

I'm not an avid reader of fan fictions, though I did dabble...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 02-08-2015, 05:43 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,827
Posted By Lyndia
Well, everyone has the right to their own...

Well, everyone has the right to their own opinion... unless you disagree with mine! No, I'm joking. I seriously like discussing (read: discussing, not arguing haha) things with people whose opinions...
Forum: Fiction 02-08-2015, 01:48 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 2,403
Posted By Lyndia
Instead of directly critiquing anything, I'm...

Instead of directly critiquing anything, I'm going to list a few bullet points. The reason why is as follows: Sometimes amidst all the tweaks here and there in a story, long or short, things can get...
Forum: Fiction 02-03-2015, 07:43 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 2,403
Posted By Lyndia
Okay, I know it has been longer than "a little...

Okay, I know it has been longer than "a little while", but, heeeeey. I'm here now, right? Sorry for the delay in my comment, though.

Anyways, first off, I really really like the little background...
Forum: Fiction 02-03-2015, 06:44 AM
Replies: 54
Views: 4,081
Posted By Lyndia
I've been thinking, kind of wondering what...

I've been thinking, kind of wondering what exactly your writing is all about, the story I mean. As interesting as it is, I have trouble understanding it all. But something--an idea--jumped out at me,...
Forum: Fiction 02-02-2015, 01:58 PM
Replies: 34
Views: 4,230
Posted By Lyndia
Makes sense. It's easier to be angry at a...

Makes sense. It's easier to be angry at a complete stranger than the person you've loved, trusted and lived with for however many years. In the end though, you aren't doing yourself any favors. As...
Forum: Fiction 02-02-2015, 01:17 PM
Replies: 34
Views: 4,230
Posted By Lyndia
I don't know... I guess it could go either way...

I don't know... I guess it could go either way without the insults there, I mean they definitely cement how she feels aha, but I think most people would assume that she would be enraged. Of course,...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 02-01-2015, 10:04 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,827
Posted By Lyndia
I agree with you 100 percent. It's so obvious (I...

I agree with you 100 percent. It's so obvious (I mean, in a subtle way, if that makes any sense), even from before the kiss, and if it was Ellie and a boy those same people would be pointing out all...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 02-01-2015, 07:57 PM
Replies: 35
Views: 5,086
Posted By Lyndia
I'm not sure about when I first started writing;...

I'm not sure about when I first started writing; I'm sure I made many, many mistakes, but I started so young I don't even remember what it was like then for me, or how exactly I became better, just...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 02-01-2015, 07:45 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,827
Posted By Lyndia
I haven't played it (I haven't had a playstation...

I haven't played it (I haven't had a playstation since its second generation; damn naughty dog and their Sony exclusives) BUT I was super excited for it, and I've seen 3 or 4 different lets plays of...
Forum: Introductions 02-01-2015, 01:18 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,238
Posted By Lyndia
Hey there, nice 'ta virtually meet ya! Welcome to...

Hey there, nice 'ta virtually meet ya! Welcome to the Beat :) You'll find the water nice and warm...
Forum: Fiction 01-30-2015, 07:40 PM
Replies: 34
Views: 4,230
Posted By Lyndia
Cecil -- I think it might actually be more...

Cecil --

I think it might actually be more appropriately worded as is. I thought the same thing, but on looking it up saw that rifle has more of a negative connotation associated with stealing....
Forum: Fiction 01-30-2015, 07:29 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 2,403
Posted By Lyndia
Phonetically it's "per-sef-on-ee" yeah? I like...

Phonetically it's "per-sef-on-ee" yeah? I like the name. Then again I'm a sucker for any kind of old mythology.

*This is just a thought I had while reading, and reading Az's comment. I'll be back...
Forum: Fiction 01-30-2015, 07:22 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 811
Posted By Lyndia
A pretty great hook. I'm not that into Scifi, but...

A pretty great hook. I'm not that into Scifi, but if I read that on the back of a book (and it wasn't super expensive, because I'm a cheapo) I would pick it out and read it. Or at least sample a...
Forum: Fiction 01-30-2015, 07:16 PM
Replies: 54
Views: 4,081
Posted By Lyndia
I could get into this. Certainly, you do...

I could get into this.

Certainly, you do have a special way with words. The way you say things confuses me, but the things you say?

I like 'em.

(the coke part was what hooked me)
Forum: Introductions 01-29-2015, 09:19 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 609
Posted By Lyndia
Hey and welcome to WritersBeat! If you're looking...

Hey and welcome to WritersBeat! If you're looking for honest, but (most of the time, aha) fair crits and opinions, you've found a great place to start. In my opinion, anyways :) Glad you're getting...
Forum: Introductions 01-29-2015, 09:14 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,125
Posted By Lyndia
Hey there and welcome :) As far as getting...

Hey there and welcome :) As far as getting feedback for longer scribblings, posting short excerpts is the best way to go. It helps if you build yourself up a little in the community first; you'll...
Forum: The Library 01-27-2015, 11:48 PM
Replies: 3,692
Views: 253,056
Posted By Lyndia
I've been going through the Witcher series; right...

I've been going through the Witcher series; right now I'm in the middle of The Time of Contempt.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 01-27-2015, 07:42 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 2,820
Posted By Lyndia
I'm looking forward to it too :) I have read...

I'm looking forward to it too :) I have read something of yours come to think of it (The Voyeur, I think was the title) and I really liked it. It's so different though (kind of breaking the fourth...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 01-27-2015, 07:36 PM
Replies: 27
Views: 4,248
Posted By Lyndia
Glad to hear it! I'm looking forward to reading...

Glad to hear it! I'm looking forward to reading it :)
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