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Forum: Writers' Cafe 12-11-2014, 03:43 PM
Replies: 139
Views: 8,935
Posted By A.Zerro
Admittedly I haven't been here for over a...

Admittedly I haven't been here for over a year..wow I think 3 or 4 years now. The thing is, I'm not a good writer. I'm looking to improve, but I'm not looking to aim my hopes towards getting...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 12-07-2014, 10:53 PM
Replies: 139
Views: 8,935
Posted By A.Zerro
*opens door to sniff the air for food. With none...

*opens door to sniff the air for food. With none in smell, I inch the door closed and tuck myself back under my doona like a crab in a shell.*
Forum: Writers' Cafe 12-07-2014, 09:51 PM
Replies: 64
Views: 6,727
Posted By A.Zerro
The smell of infection disturbs me. ...

The smell of infection disturbs me.

*shudders*
Forum: Writers' Cafe 12-05-2014, 02:27 PM
Replies: 35
Views: 2,852
Posted By A.Zerro
I like to listen to post-rock on Pandora, that...

I like to listen to post-rock on Pandora, that way there's something different and things I haven't heard. Often times I'm always happy with the selection.

Also enjoy some alternative as well,...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 12-05-2014, 12:50 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 516
Posted By A.Zerro
I think they call that inspiration. It's why it's...

I think they call that inspiration. It's why it's recommended that people who write should keep reading as well, I think.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 07-31-2012, 12:26 AM
Replies: 38
Views: 4,791
Posted By A.Zerro
My friends say I'm exactly the same online as I...

My friends say I'm exactly the same online as I am in person and I guess that's comforting in a way. The only bad thing is they also say I can express myself better when I type it than when I speak...
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 10-15-2011, 03:31 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,147
Posted By A.Zerro
Don't confine yourself to the thought that what...

Don't confine yourself to the thought that what you are writing, the ideas that you have, are copies of what someone else has done. Personally, it's all about the way you write a story, whether what...
Forum: The Library 10-02-2011, 05:50 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 2,473
Posted By A.Zerro
There's a few juvenile zombie books that I've...

There's a few juvenile zombie books that I've read, since I'm into them.

Z by Michael Thomas Ford, which like I said, it's a very juvenile book however I really enjoyed it.

and Daniel Waters...
Forum: Fiction 09-29-2011, 01:28 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,028
Posted By A.Zerro
I think this was a really nice piece. I like the...

I think this was a really nice piece. I like the description in the last paragraph, it painted a lovely picture of transformation from the last, although I'm still unsure what it's about.

Still,...
Forum: Fiction 07-09-2011, 05:40 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 939
Posted By A.Zerro
Very good! Should be without the...

Very good!



Should be without the comma, otherwise it breaks up the sentence too much.



A spectacular thing. Torrens still amazes me, his character is so good and fluid, you wouldn't...
Forum: The Notice Board 06-25-2011, 07:37 PM
Replies: 32
Views: 7,405
Posted By A.Zerro
Yes I get it as well. The first time I was like...

Yes I get it as well. The first time I was like "Wait... I thought I was logged in." Then I read here and it makes more sense if other people are also experiencing it.
Forum: Fiction 06-25-2011, 07:29 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,705
Posted By A.Zerro
This really, well for me it impacted on the way I...

This really, well for me it impacted on the way I see things. At the moment I'm writing a story about zombies, not so much vampires but the simple imagined logic in this surprised me to no end. What...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 06-25-2011, 04:53 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 3,485
Posted By A.Zerro
This was excellent entertainment! I love the way...

This was excellent entertainment! I love the way you did it from point of view and it just clicked all well together. Did you send this to her? Oh, the look on her face... you really did capture...
Forum: Fiction 06-25-2011, 04:05 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,165
Posted By A.Zerro
Jeez, I think the one thing that caught me off...

Jeez, I think the one thing that caught me off guard was how different these hippies were to the prologue. It's almost as if they're different characters, and if they are how were we to know? If...
Forum: The Library 06-24-2011, 05:09 AM
Replies: 18
Views: 4,945
Posted By A.Zerro
I will have to read it, eventually. I've heard...

I will have to read it, eventually. I've heard many peoples good opinions about the series and after reading Pathfinder I think it's almost mandatory for me to read it. I agree with you on the story...
Forum: The Library 06-24-2011, 12:16 AM
Replies: 18
Views: 4,945
Posted By A.Zerro
Orson Scott Card

I have just finished a book by Orson Scott Card. The Pathfinder. now, forgive me for being absolutely blind, but I didn't know it was by O.S.C until the end of the book, even though the hardcover...
Forum: Fiction 06-22-2011, 10:57 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,393
Posted By A.Zerro
capslock isn't needed to get the point across for...

capslock isn't needed to get the point across for death. A simple exclamation mark and perhaps a description of her actions as she said it would be sufficient enough, because if you can't portray...
Forum: Fiction 06-21-2011, 06:51 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,051
Posted By A.Zerro
Doesn't really make sense, this bit so I...

Doesn't really make sense, this bit so I rearranged it so it did, hope you don't mind >.<

or



That's the only problem with grammar I spotted, so well done! I really enjoyed this, it was...
Forum: The Library 06-18-2011, 04:34 AM
Replies: 61
Views: 6,227
Posted By A.Zerro
I tell you the authors whom I just can't get...

I tell you the authors whom I just can't get enough of?

Scott Westerfeld, (Hi-Fives Gwyn!) He's amazing. I particularly liked him for his book "Peeps." Reason being is because I just love the way...
Forum: Fiction 06-17-2011, 11:34 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,126
Posted By A.Zerro
On that note then, you did a pretty good job at...

On that note then, you did a pretty good job at her being completely oblivious [to his attention seeking], but as I said it just didn't seem right, lacking in some way, like he's almost serious but...
Forum: Fiction 06-17-2011, 04:42 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,126
Posted By A.Zerro
Rather intriguing, this chapter. Sorry for not...

Rather intriguing, this chapter. Sorry for not posting earlier, time is not on my side at the moment. Now, the only thing that keeps bugging me was this sentence:



To me I feel as if it should...
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 06-08-2011, 10:54 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 1,659
Posted By A.Zerro
I think it's much easier to describe surroundings...

I think it's much easier to describe surroundings with third person, which also allows you to throw in their feelings and everyone elses at the same time. First person really limits you to one...
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 06-07-2011, 05:53 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 2,604
Posted By A.Zerro
I always thought the best way to write was to...

I always thought the best way to write was to write and not look back on what you have done. Once you actually start looking back and noticing how crap it is, you give up writing the rest of it,...
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 04-08-2011, 06:27 PM
Replies: 36
Views: 5,603
Posted By A.Zerro
I actually have one concerning the word 'bum' ...

I actually have one concerning the word 'bum'

In Australia, there's a saying that goes around when you drink "Up ya bum!" like instead of cheers, I've never, ever understood it and yet I've grown...
Forum: Fiction 03-30-2011, 02:43 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,304
Posted By A.Zerro
Don't rush through it, it's not worth it. Take...

Don't rush through it, it's not worth it. Take you're time, I'd rather have to wait and read something great than demand something fast and get something disastrous. Quality, not quantity. =]
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