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Forum: Nine and Sixty Ways Poetry Tools and Lessons 09-29-2009, 02:57 PM
Replies: 12
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Posted By Blooming
It's very useful this thread, and I want to ask...

It's very useful this thread, and I want to ask something

Is this a metaphor?

Dreams are birds that enter the next realm.

I know it's rubbish, but would it count?
Forum: Poetry 09-29-2009, 02:48 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,609
Posted By Blooming
Okay, I will try to read more and more. ...

Okay, I will try to read more and more.

Also, Ted Hughes is pretty good.
Forum: Poetry 09-29-2009, 11:22 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,609
Posted By Blooming
I think I understand what you're saying, but the...

I think I understand what you're saying, but the problem is. I don't know how a poem should look like, I usually read Romantic poetry and War poems.
Forum: Poetry 09-28-2009, 04:43 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,609
Posted By Blooming
Can someone explain what czechwizard is saying?...

Can someone explain what czechwizard is saying? Also, can people tell me how to make my poems better?
Forum: Poetry 09-26-2009, 04:52 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,609
Posted By Blooming
Well, I'm 17/18 years old, do you think you can...

Well, I'm 17/18 years old, do you think you can tell me how to make my poems become better? I would love to have a mentor.
Forum: Poetry 09-25-2009, 03:41 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,609
Posted By Blooming
I would love to have one more critique for both...

I would love to have one more critique for both poems.
Forum: Poetry 09-24-2009, 11:58 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,609
Posted By Blooming
It's helpful.

It's helpful.
Forum: Poetry 09-23-2009, 05:01 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,609
Posted By Blooming
The heart The Heart, what a beauty like...

The heart

The Heart, what a beauty like a dame,
Of Many fortunes and many mishaps,
And it will show all its talent when it reaches its fame,
It will touch the very souls of more than one...
Forum: Introductions 09-22-2009, 11:13 AM
Replies: 8
Hi
Views: 677
Posted By Blooming
Well, I have one in the poem area.

Well, I have one in the poem area.
Forum: Poetry 09-22-2009, 04:36 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,609
Posted By Blooming
I have another one, it might have more imagery...

I have another one, it might have more imagery than the other.

I can put it on here, if you want.
Forum: Introductions 09-21-2009, 06:14 AM
Replies: 8
Hi
Views: 677
Posted By Blooming
It's fine, and also I've been here like last...

It's fine, and also I've been here like last year. If it was 1066, I would be dead by now or I would be turned to dust.
Forum: Free Writing 09-21-2009, 05:10 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 913
Posted By Blooming
This does read like a normal prose, because it's...

This does read like a normal prose, because it's kind of sounding like a novel more than a poem.
Forum: Poetry 09-21-2009, 05:08 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,609
Posted By Blooming
Can you show me which part was wrong because I'm...

Can you show me which part was wrong because I'm reading it and well it flows alright.
Forum: Poetry 09-20-2009, 06:33 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,609
Posted By Blooming
Wings in the Petal. My first ever poem. Hope it's good.

Slowly drifting away from sunshine,
As I envelope all things light and dark,
I see a ray of hope and start to dine,
While dining with it, a lark passes on by...a lark,
Fluttering around the...
Forum: Introductions 09-20-2009, 05:22 AM
Replies: 8
Hi
Views: 677
Posted By Blooming
How long has it been?

How long has it been?
Forum: Introductions 09-19-2009, 06:05 AM
Replies: 8
Hi
Views: 677
Posted By Blooming
Hi

Everyone, I have returned fromthe blistering winds, scorching deserts and reached the highest towers in order to meet you. It's been too long, has it not?
Forum: Introductions 08-01-2008, 06:05 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 830
Posted By Blooming
Okay it was a thought.

Okay it was a thought.
Forum: Introductions 07-31-2008, 10:25 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 830
Posted By Blooming
Why thank you. I thought everyone forgot me. Also...

Why thank you. I thought everyone forgot me. Also do you like the idea of the music contest or not?
Forum: Introductions 07-31-2008, 05:58 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 830
Posted By Blooming
Oh thanks, anyway so what kind of books are you...

Oh thanks, anyway so what kind of books are you in to, also what kind genre are you into? Finally, can you do music? Because I want to open up a music contest right here.
Forum: Introductions 07-31-2008, 05:49 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 830
Posted By Blooming
I know everyone here knows me, besides the newcomers.

Topic^^, I just had to come back as I wanted to see all my friends and have a chat. It's been ages, the main reason why I wasn't here was because I had to clean my whole room, paint, fix my room a...
Forum: Fiction 04-20-2008, 03:50 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,019
Posted By Blooming
Oh okay.

Oh okay.
Forum: Fiction 04-19-2008, 09:14 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,019
Posted By Blooming
You know campy means sophiscated debate or...

You know campy means sophiscated debate or arguement.
Forum: Fiction 04-18-2008, 11:22 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,019
Posted By Blooming
Cool, so when do you have free time?

Cool, so when do you have free time?
Forum: Fiction 04-16-2008, 12:43 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,019
Posted By Blooming
Thanks, but I should take it, though you were...

Thanks, but I should take it, though you were being helpful. Well, can we talk about this on msn.
Forum: Fiction 04-16-2008, 11:17 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,019
Posted By Blooming
Okay, sorry White Tiger.

Okay, sorry White Tiger.
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