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Forum: Fiction 05-29-2009, 11:27 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 707
Posted By seanbags
HoiLei, thanks . good point

HoiLei, thanks . good point
Forum: Writers' Cafe 05-20-2009, 12:39 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,038
Posted By seanbags
Hi Arcite, all my work is free hand but I have...

Hi Arcite, all my work is free hand but I have had a go at doing work on my computer. I prefer freehand. I went and had a look at your cute furry animals doing bad things, Funny.

It's hard to...
Forum: Fiction 05-17-2009, 10:31 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 1,389
Posted By seanbags
Need an artist?

I think this is a great little intro to a comic book. I may be interested in being your artist. It takes time and just as much effort as the writing. Send me a PM if you want a sample of say, the...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 05-17-2009, 03:29 PM
Replies: 806
Views: 17,570
Posted By seanbags
Oh look, pitterpatter brought blankets. Nice cave...

Oh look, pitterpatter brought blankets. Nice cave guys, can I play too? I brought some of my controban!
Forum: Writers' Cafe 05-17-2009, 02:04 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,038
Posted By seanbags
I think they are the best. My favourite form of...

I think they are the best. My favourite form of writing. I draw comic art and spend alot of my time reading them. I love the way they come out each month. Each month is a chapter. Some of them go...
Forum: Fiction 05-17-2009, 12:59 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 700
Posted By seanbags
Ha ha ha ha. I like this. It reminds me of that...

Ha ha ha ha. I like this. It reminds me of that Dr Who episode where all the reality TV shows result in the death of the contestants. Anyone seen that?

I would get rid of the second sentence "The...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 05-16-2009, 07:38 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 2,686
Posted By seanbags
It's been hacked. Happens a lot, especially on...

It's been hacked. Happens a lot, especially on images of women in networking sites. Click the image to get a better view and WHAM! You've won a years subscription to...
Forum: Fiction 05-16-2009, 07:23 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 3,082
Posted By seanbags
Burn necro burn! Sorry guys.

Burn necro burn! Sorry guys.
Forum: Introductions 05-16-2009, 07:19 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 866
Posted By seanbags
lol

lol
Forum: Fiction 05-16-2009, 05:25 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 3,082
Posted By seanbags
I read the FAQ's regarding thread nec and I'm...

I read the FAQ's regarding thread nec and I'm sure it say's in there not to revive threads that are over a year old. This thread isnt over a year old. Did I read wrong? Was it one month? I'm too lazy...
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 05-16-2009, 04:41 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,407
Posted By seanbags
I can already smell the fear and taste the blood....

I can already smell the fear and taste the blood. :D

All I can suggest is try not to go into too much detail. Keep it simple.

"she trod on his bleeding face a few more times..."
Forum: Introductions 05-16-2009, 04:19 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 866
Posted By seanbags
Hi

Hi
Forum: Fiction 05-16-2009, 03:37 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 707
Posted By seanbags
Thanks and welcome

Thanks for the critique. I appreciate the time you must have spent and I'll take into consideration the points you have outlined.

I can see how one could get confused reading this piece. I'm...
Forum: Fiction 05-16-2009, 02:01 AM
Replies: 23
Views: 3,082
Posted By seanbags
This doesn't make sense to me. Shouldn't it read...

This doesn't make sense to me. Shouldn't it read :

She once saw him as her master, and she knew what she was to him, though he never said it. ?

Seanbags
Forum: Fiction 05-16-2009, 12:21 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,017
Posted By seanbags
Sorry, I didnt realise this story had already...

Sorry, I didnt realise this story had already been critiqued. I found the older thread. I noticed that some things were not changed so I guess it wasnt a total loss, or waste of my time.
Forum: Fiction 05-15-2009, 08:10 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,017
Posted By seanbags
I grew up surfing In Margaret River, Western...

I grew up surfing In Margaret River, Western Australia. Spent my youth in the water and had a few cramps. I've been close to drowning a a couple of occasions too. When panicking in the water, you...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 05-14-2009, 05:32 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 2,686
Posted By seanbags
All I saw was a poker game trying to download...

All I saw was a poker game trying to download onto my computer. not good. very bad, wont be clicking on links in this forum any longer.
Forum: Poetry 05-14-2009, 03:47 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 717
Posted By seanbags
I'd cut everything but the first part. less is...

I'd cut everything but the first part. less is more.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 05-14-2009, 03:44 AM
Replies: 806
Views: 17,570
Posted By seanbags
Gawed

Gawed
Forum: Fiction 05-14-2009, 03:38 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,082
Posted By seanbags
I thought it was great. I love it when I get lost...

I thought it was great. I love it when I get lost in a story. It was like a dream. Your descriptions worked well for me. I have no idea about spag and in a story like this I really dont think the...
Forum: Fiction 05-14-2009, 01:51 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,017
Posted By seanbags
I like this story. I assume it's part of a larger...

I like this story. I assume it's part of a larger piece because of all the detail. On it's own it has a good little lesson to be learned about never underestimating nature and how easy we can be...
Forum: Fiction 05-13-2009, 10:47 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 831
Posted By seanbags
I didn't understand the point of the story. ...

I didn't understand the point of the story.

I think, when you described what the female jogger looked like, there was really no reason for it. Perhaps you wanted the reader to visualise her as...
Forum: Fiction 05-13-2009, 08:52 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 707
Posted By seanbags
Twinkles

This is a story I wrote about 2 or 3 years ago. I gave it a bit of a spruce up for easier reading. 628 words, honest critiques and SPAG very welcome.


Twinkles

Today at work, I was sitting...
Forum: Writer's Beat Technical Support 05-13-2009, 04:52 AM
Replies: 22
Views: 4,451
Posted By seanbags
Icon7 Not too many I hope

I was wondering today if I would stick around for long. I tend to go through fads or phases if you like. My time here in the last few days, has (I believe) really helped me improve my writing....
Forum: Writers' Cafe 05-13-2009, 03:15 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,280
Posted By seanbags
There is another method that nobody has mentioned...

There is another method that nobody has mentioned yet:

Give up. Throw the story into the waste bin and never write ever, ever again. Forget you even tried to write. No more Writers Block. Easy,...
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