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Forum: Grammar 08-25-2015, 12:34 PM
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Not at all! Plus, that makes sense, since...

Not at all!

Plus, that makes sense, since Devon taught me everything I know.
Forum: Grammar 08-24-2015, 02:48 PM
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Posted By calligraphy
:D Good! It's a quickie, so, glad it made sense...

:D Good! It's a quickie, so, glad it made sense late at night lol
Forum: Grammar 08-24-2015, 12:39 AM
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Posted By calligraphy
I like it better! Let's name the man!

I like it better! Let's name the man!
Forum: Grammar 08-23-2015, 11:06 PM
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Posted By calligraphy
and this.... eventually turns into a show vs tell...

and this.... eventually turns into a show vs tell argument lol
Forum: Grammar 08-23-2015, 11:05 PM
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Posted By calligraphy
Example: The man angrily got in the car....

Example:

The man angrily got in the car. He frantically drove his car to the old house. He ferociously walked up to the door and loudly knocked on it. The door opened violently.

...
Forum: Grammar 08-23-2015, 10:29 PM
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Posted By calligraphy
Sometimes the sentence is weaker with it. I've...

Sometimes the sentence is weaker with it. I've found YA writers overuse them to "youthanize" the narrative, but essentially it makes the writer sound younger.

I usually strip them out as much...
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