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Forum: Fiction 07-18-2016, 05:50 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 2,685
Posted By Super Mario
Sorry I've been away. So without further ado...

Sorry I've been away. So without further ado here is the rest of it. This is as far as I've got. The reason I keep putting it different posts is because it's easier to read rather than one big...
Forum: Fiction 07-01-2016, 11:58 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 2,685
Posted By Super Mario
That's brilliant what you wrote. I must admit it...

That's brilliant what you wrote. I must admit it is much more interesting than what I wrote. When I'm reading a book I always think mine doesn't read anything like this. I just don't feel it flows...
Forum: Fiction 07-01-2016, 05:26 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 2,685
Posted By Super Mario
Well decided to put Chapter 3 up. I must say...

Well decided to put Chapter 3 up. I must say this is the most I have written in my life I think. About 9,000 words altogether.

CHAPTER 3

Julia felt glad to be out and about. The fresh...
Forum: Fiction 07-01-2016, 03:04 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 2,685
Posted By Super Mario
Thank you very much for your comment Zoey141 and...

Thank you very much for your comment Zoey141 and everybody else. I'm actually writing right now. It was more for grammar and layout. I'm not bad at grammar but not that confident with it.
Forum: Fiction 06-30-2016, 11:53 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 2,685
Posted By Super Mario
So here's Chapter 2 CHAPTER 2 At...

So here's Chapter 2

CHAPTER 2

At the debrief the next day P.C Lyons and PC McMillan along with their colleagues paid close attention to what Inspector Lynn Cullen was saying. ďAs you...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 06-30-2016, 08:55 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,361
Posted By Super Mario
Joing a writers club

I was just wondering if anyone here was a member of a writers club? If so do you find it useful, what sort of things do you do other than write?

Am toying with the idea of joining a writers club....
Forum: Fiction 06-27-2016, 08:22 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 2,685
Posted By Super Mario
Thank you very much. Would you like me to post...

Thank you very much. Would you like me to post more? I will go back through it and seem if I can eliminate any hads.
Forum: Fiction 06-25-2016, 11:44 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 2,685
Posted By Super Mario
Thank you very much. I had a feeling that I...

Thank you very much. I had a feeling that I posted too much.
Forum: Fiction 06-20-2016, 05:49 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 2,685
Posted By Super Mario
Any ideas for my novel?

Well I said I'd post a bit so here goes. I know there will a few critiques but will be much appreciated.

It was a quiet warm July night. Julia Forbes sat down to watch some television after a...
Forum: Tips & Advice 06-20-2016, 05:46 AM
Replies: 31
Views: 8,274
Posted By Super Mario
TBH I am just writing whatever comes into my...

TBH I am just writing whatever comes into my head. When I first started writing my novel I remember typing away furiously because stuff just kept coming into my head. I've got back to it a few...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 06-20-2016, 02:51 AM
Replies: 24
Views: 4,025
Posted By Super Mario
The fact they are going to be taking jobs from...

The fact they are going to be taking jobs from us. The fact we have become so dependant on them.
Forum: Writer's Beat Technical Support 06-02-2016, 12:14 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 3,326
Posted By Super Mario
Thank you very much. I've now changed it.

Thank you very much. I've now changed it.
Forum: Writer's Beat Technical Support 06-02-2016, 11:18 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 3,326
Posted By Super Mario
Changing the time

Hi everybody,

I've just registered and have realised the time is incorrect. How do I change the time setting to the UK?
Forum: Introductions 06-02-2016, 11:11 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 828
Posted By Super Mario
Hello to everybody

Hi,

I am trying to write a book although with not much success. Was hoping to get some help and support from other writers.

I may post a excerpt of my book to see what others think.

Well...
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