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Forum: Previous Contests 09-16-2013, 05:59 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 14,199
Posted By Kravorkian
And that's what makes it so fun!

And that's what makes it so fun!
Forum: Previous Contests 09-14-2013, 10:17 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 14,199
Posted By Kravorkian
I love the themes in a lot of these contests. ...

I love the themes in a lot of these contests. They actually give me a starting point for stories that end up going places I never expect them to. I've missed the deadline by just over an hour for...
Forum: Writing Markets 06-26-2013, 04:32 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,706
Posted By Kravorkian
@wikedsunny: You come here and promote your own...

@wikedsunny: You come here and promote your own site, then trash on all the others. I wouldn't use your services if they were free and legit simply because you're so rude to everyone else.
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Forum: Fiction 06-06-2012, 04:17 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 692
Posted By Kravorkian
Wanting to keep the story really short, I...

Wanting to keep the story really short, I neglected to answer questions such as "Why does he reside on the second floor if he's nearly immobile?" Maybe I should take care of that with a sentence or...
Forum: Fiction 06-06-2012, 02:47 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 692
Posted By Kravorkian
The sliding glass door is a second story door out...

The sliding glass door is a second story door out onto a balcony. Many of my family members use these, and it just seemed natural to me as I wrote the story. Were you both just looking for a...
Forum: Tips & Advice 06-05-2012, 02:46 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 3,667
Posted By Kravorkian
Luckily, 95% of my ideas come to me either while...

Luckily, 95% of my ideas come to me either while reading other work (which means I can easily write down ideas that come to mind, because I only read at home), from dreams (I keep a pen and paper on...
Forum: Fiction 06-05-2012, 02:30 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 692
Posted By Kravorkian
Nadja - Thank you. Rooster - Thank you also....

Nadja - Thank you.

Rooster - Thank you also. I'm trying to get some feedback in before I post any more stories. I work long hours and don't have much time to post (nor write). I actually have a...
Forum: Fiction 06-04-2012, 04:27 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 692
Posted By Kravorkian
Thanks for reading through, Phoenix! While I...

Thanks for reading through, Phoenix!

While I do agree (now that I've read through it a few times aloud) that I should change those two sentences up a bit, I never want to actually say throughout...
Forum: Fiction 06-04-2012, 03:44 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 692
Posted By Kravorkian
Anamnesis (899 words)

She only comes to see me at night. When the sun has retreated, the moon has taken over, and a fog has covered the land. Ive often questioned people about the fog, since there is never a night...
Forum: Fiction 06-03-2012, 03:09 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 905
Posted By Kravorkian
You have excellent suggestions above, so I'll...

You have excellent suggestions above, so I'll make a suggestion that would help you set the tone of the story. The first paragraph would be a great place to do so.



The color red always has...
Forum: Fiction 06-03-2012, 02:24 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 397
Posted By Kravorkian
You on bath salts, Keliz?

You on bath salts, Keliz?
Forum: Previous Contests 05-30-2012, 05:17 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 6,531
Posted By Kravorkian
The Deserted Road 1379 words Glenda...

The Deserted Road
1379 words

Glenda Miller sat in her easy chair, a drink in her left hand and a book in her right, a smile upon her face. With her feet nestled tightly together in the...
Forum: Fiction 05-28-2012, 09:06 AM
Replies: 37
Views: 2,614
Posted By Kravorkian
I'll be patiently awaiting the continuation of...

I'll be patiently awaiting the continuation of this story. Ahh, zombies. If it weren't for The Walking Dead, I wouldn't need a television!

It's always nice to see a new take on zombie stories. ...
Forum: Poetry 05-28-2012, 08:03 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 610
Posted By Kravorkian
This reminds me of a drive through town around...

This reminds me of a drive through town around here. In these parts, we call them "eleventeen-year-olds" - young women barely clothed, seemingly the pride and joy of their hooker mom or pimp father....
Forum: Fiction 05-28-2012, 07:55 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,650
Posted By Kravorkian
I can't think of an ending that would be more...

I can't think of an ending that would be more appropriate for this story.

I'm the type that shuns all form of religion, and nearly turned away when I saw "Quran". (Especially because it was...
Forum: Prompts & Challenges 05-28-2012, 06:53 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 4,158
Posted By Kravorkian
Followed the challenge to a tee. A challenge it...

Followed the challenge to a tee. A challenge it was, as using a color in every sentence would prove distracting to anyone reading, in my opinion.

But! - you did well disguising the color words...
Forum: Fiction 05-27-2012, 06:01 PM
Replies: 34
Views: 4,218
Posted By Kravorkian
Two things - In the first line, your...

Two things -


In the first line, your slang seems ok and (sort of) in place. In the second line, though, you're simply telling the reader that Frank can can "see the accomplice puking and then...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 03-23-2011, 06:18 PM
Replies: 9,090
Views: 249,531
Posted By Kravorkian
Enhance My Nightmares by Sonic Syndicate

Enhance My Nightmares by Sonic Syndicate
Forum: Members' Feedback 08-18-2008, 03:51 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,598
Posted By Kravorkian
I'm sure if you had access to the forums hidden...

I'm sure if you had access to the forums hidden to everyone but administration/moderators, you'd see that there's a lot going on. :-)
Forum: The Library 07-20-2008, 04:18 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,436
Posted By Kravorkian
Finished with it yet, James?

Finished with it yet, James?
Forum: Members' Feedback 07-13-2008, 05:49 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,565
Posted By Kravorkian
It's kind of a CYA for forum administration. ...

It's kind of a CYA for forum administration. It's kinda tough to prove your age online without forking up some personal information that 99% of us are unwilling to do. In asking people not to join...
Forum: Members' Feedback 06-17-2008, 08:18 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,775
Posted By Kravorkian
Odd, I use FF2 and everything looks great. (I...

Odd, I use FF2 and everything looks great. (I refuse to use IE, lol)
Forum: Members' Feedback 06-01-2008, 02:10 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,825
Posted By Kravorkian
Thank you buttons actually require coding and...

Thank you buttons actually require coding and database tables. :-) (Or additional columns in the members/posts tables)
Forum: Board Games 05-20-2008, 12:19 PM
Replies: 10,582
Views: 205,835
Posted By Kravorkian
3672 bottles of beer on the wall...

3672 bottles of beer on the wall...
Forum: Board Games 05-15-2008, 06:07 PM
Replies: 10,582
Views: 205,835
Posted By Kravorkian
We're not at 1 million yet? 3664

We're not at 1 million yet?

3664
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