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Forum: Writers' Cafe 06-08-2015, 07:32 AM
Replies: 109
Views: 9,465
Posted By SailorMystery15
That depends on what the writer describes as...

That depends on what the writer describes as risqué. I write fan fiction, which the subject matter can be kind of disturbing (mainly with more horror related stories), but not in a sexual sense.
Forum: Non-Fiction 04-30-2015, 04:55 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,557
Posted By SailorMystery15
Even though I don't be believe in the New World...

Even though I don't be believe in the New World Order, nice work.
Forum: Fiction 04-30-2015, 04:52 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 769
Posted By SailorMystery15
It seems you did good in an action-packed sense,...

It seems you did good in an action-packed sense, but it's a little dialogue heavy. I'm not sure if your intending dialogue heavy chapters, but just a heads up.
Forum: Poetry 04-30-2015, 04:45 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,080
Posted By SailorMystery15
You nailed it.

You nailed it.
Forum: Fiction 04-11-2015, 05:55 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,671
Posted By SailorMystery15
You really did a good job with this. I especially...

You really did a good job with this. I especially liked how you pulled my interest in the first line. The one problem I had with this is that it was a bit dialogue heavy. Overall, you did good.
Forum: Poetry 01-10-2015, 05:35 AM
Replies: 82
Views: 7,509
Posted By SailorMystery15
It sounds nice, but the structure is a little...

It sounds nice, but the structure is a little choppy.
Forum: Non-Fiction 01-10-2015, 05:30 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 3,887
Posted By SailorMystery15
This is nice, but it sounds more like poetry than...

This is nice, but it sounds more like poetry than nonfiction. Nice try though.
Forum: Non-Fiction 01-03-2015, 09:07 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 4,395
Posted By SailorMystery15
I can clearly see the purpose of this work. You...

I can clearly see the purpose of this work. You have done well.
Forum: The Library 01-03-2015, 08:54 AM
Replies: 287
Views: 49,830
Posted By SailorMystery15
I remember those books. Both are my favorites.

I remember those books. Both are my favorites.
Forum: The Library 01-03-2015, 08:53 AM
Replies: 287
Views: 49,830
Posted By SailorMystery15
The Boy in the Striped Pajamas or Of Mice and...

The Boy in the Striped Pajamas or Of Mice and Men. Both endings are so sad.
Forum: Poetry 01-03-2015, 07:48 AM
Replies: 33
Views: 3,479
Posted By SailorMystery15
Very Inspiring, this shows that God has...

Very Inspiring, this shows that God has unconditional love.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 01-03-2015, 07:43 AM
Replies: 32
Views: 4,837
Posted By SailorMystery15
Forum: Fiction 01-03-2015, 07:06 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 673
Posted By SailorMystery15
Icon1 Colors of the Wind (Chapter 1)

I have never thought I would be sharing a lifetime experience like this in my life. Before I begin my story, I should introduce myself. I am Rachel Matchers, I am 17, and I am a Crystal Child. I...
Forum: Prompts & Challenges 01-03-2015, 05:58 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 8,703
Posted By SailorMystery15
This is pretty interesting. I love the twist...

This is pretty interesting. I love the twist ending when Maggie was actually her baby.
Forum: Non-Fiction 01-03-2015, 05:50 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 2,350
Posted By SailorMystery15
This is good, but it seems you only look at the...

This is good, but it seems you only look at the negative aspects of Facebook.
Forum: Board Games 01-02-2015, 04:32 PM
Replies: 1,887
Views: 64,359
Posted By SailorMystery15
Yup, it was humiliating. Have you ever...

Yup, it was humiliating.

Have you ever bought a game that wouldn't work on your computer?
Forum: Poetry 01-02-2015, 04:25 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 430
Posted By SailorMystery15
Icon3 The Troubled Teen's Prayer

Dear Lord, I send out a request for assistance on this day.
My Mother's ill with the yearly bugs,
My Father's drinking is out of hand,
It seems that everyone in my family has taken ill.
While I...
Forum: Introductions 01-02-2015, 04:14 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 602
Posted By SailorMystery15
I write multiple genres including horror,...

I write multiple genres including horror, mystery, romance, drama, historical, and so much more.
Forum: Prompts & Challenges 01-02-2015, 10:52 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 6,912
Posted By SailorMystery15
Great writing! I loved how we don't realize...

Great writing! I loved how we don't realize Belle's dead until the end of the story! Overall, great job working on building up suspense.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 01-02-2015, 10:47 AM
Replies: 64
Views: 6,721
Posted By SailorMystery15
Vintage Dolls because they look so human, but...

Vintage Dolls because they look so human, but their not.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 01-02-2015, 09:57 AM
Replies: 9,617
Views: 302,563
Posted By SailorMystery15
It Doesn't Matter- Sonic Adventure 2

It Doesn't Matter- Sonic Adventure 2
Forum: The Library 01-02-2015, 09:37 AM
Replies: 37
Views: 12,358
Posted By SailorMystery15
The Boy in the Striped Pajamas because the ending...

The Boy in the Striped Pajamas because the ending is so tragic, and I don't like when people yell a lot.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 01-02-2015, 09:28 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,788
Posted By SailorMystery15
I would consider factors like operating system,...

I would consider factors like operating system, cost, anti-virus software, programs that come with it, important stuff like that.
Forum: Introductions 01-02-2015, 09:25 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 602
Posted By SailorMystery15
Icon7 Greetings

I just entered the forums a little bit ago. I'm pretty good at writing, and might post somewhere soon. I also am very helpful and smart. So, in other words, Hello.
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