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Forum: Poetry 08-25-2011, 03:07 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 701
Posted By evilclonier
Sorry, I wasn't sure whether to post the meaning...

Sorry, I wasn't sure whether to post the meaning or not. M.A.D. is a cold war term meaning Mutally Assured Destruction; the idea that if one country set off it's nuclear arsenal the other would do...
Forum: Poetry 08-25-2011, 02:27 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 701
Posted By evilclonier
Emotional Ideology

Wow it's been ages since I've submitted something here, so long in fact that some of you may not know me. I'm evilclonier, pleased to meet you.





Out of sync with reality is an...
Forum: Poetry 08-25-2011, 02:18 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,045
Posted By evilclonier
A nice piece. I see what you were trying to do...

A nice piece. I see what you were trying to do and I think with a little work it could be better. Here's my critique:



Right, I think the line "he wrote small rhymes" doesn't fit. I think it...
Forum: Members' Choice 08-25-2011, 01:38 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 9,934
Posted By evilclonier
Simple Together by KBR. ...

Simple Together by KBR.

http://www.writersbeat.com/showthread.php?t=33400
Forum: Poetry 08-25-2011, 01:36 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,252
Posted By evilclonier
I agree with Redlorry here, the poem is...

I agree with Redlorry here, the poem is beautiful, the way you've portrayed the fine sentiment in the piece is brilliant. I just have two things that I felt weren't quite right.



In the above...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 06-30-2011, 05:26 AM
Replies: 393
Views: 22,307
Posted By evilclonier
Queen- Classic as always. A great choice...

Queen- Classic as always. A great choice winterstorm. Thanks.

This isn't 80s, but if you'll allow me I'll post it anyway.

Lateralus by Tool: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EDlC7oG_2W4

I...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 06-30-2011, 05:22 AM
Replies: 9,826
Views: 311,364
Posted By evilclonier
10,000 Days- Tool

10,000 Days- Tool
Forum: Writers' Cafe 06-17-2011, 03:21 AM
Replies: 9,826
Views: 311,364
Posted By evilclonier
Just finished listening to the album Reign In...

Just finished listening to the album Reign In Blood by Slayer. A masterpiece of an album.
Forum: Poetry 06-07-2011, 01:55 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 608
Posted By evilclonier
That's nice, however with this version the last...

That's nice, however with this version the last line doesn't make enough sense. What will the final product alter? You talk in stanza two about how the creation of the piece (movements etc) defines...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 06-06-2011, 10:40 AM
Replies: 9,826
Views: 311,364
Posted By evilclonier
Speed of Darkness- Flogging Molly.

Speed of Darkness- Flogging Molly.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 06-06-2011, 10:34 AM
Replies: 8,559
Views: 221,101
Posted By evilclonier
It'll be fine Dela, people make mistakes. We're...

It'll be fine Dela, people make mistakes. We're all only human. Time will sort it out. Hope you feel better. :)
Forum: Poetry 06-06-2011, 08:08 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 608
Posted By evilclonier
A good piece with lots of potential. Here's my...

A good piece with lots of potential. Here's my critique:

I like this first stanza, however I'm not sure about the last line. The word "evoke" doesn't sit well with me. On first reading the line...
Forum: Poetry 06-06-2011, 07:59 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,401
Posted By evilclonier
Wow, I was both surprised and pleased at this...

Wow, I was both surprised and pleased at this thread's resurrection. Thanks for all your comments guys, I'll have a look at the latter half of the piece and see about changing/omitting it.
Forum: Introductions 05-26-2011, 12:24 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 681
Posted By evilclonier
Hi Gaenor, welcome to Writer's Beat, make...

Hi Gaenor, welcome to Writer's Beat, make yourself at home. Your book sounds like the kind of thing I like to read. Anyway, I look forward to seeing you around the forums.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 05-26-2011, 09:32 AM
Replies: 9,826
Views: 311,364
Posted By evilclonier
I saw it a few years back, I loved it. Don't...

I saw it a few years back, I loved it.

Don't Shut 'Em Down- Flogging Molly
Forum: Writers' Cafe 05-25-2011, 01:47 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,559
Posted By evilclonier
I saw the new Pirates of the Caribbean film...

I saw the new Pirates of the Caribbean film today. Aside from the bad acting it was great, really entertaining. Cruz is much better than Knightly. Geoffery Rush was brilliant as always.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 05-25-2011, 12:09 PM
Replies: 34
Views: 2,518
Posted By evilclonier
They're doing mostly festivals for their European...

They're doing mostly festivals for their European tour this year, but I imagine next year or maybe the year after they'll do a proper tour. Ugh, they're playing in the city nearest me on my birthday...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 05-25-2011, 11:57 AM
Replies: 34
Views: 2,518
Posted By evilclonier
I think I said this in the Random Fact thread but...

I think I said this in the Random Fact thread but it's applicable here: No matter how bad a mood I'm in the band Tool will always make me feel better. Also the band Flogging Molly always cheer me up...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 05-25-2011, 11:54 AM
Replies: 23
Views: 1,134
Posted By evilclonier
Aragorn's speech at the Black Gate in The Return...

Aragorn's speech at the Black Gate in The Return of the King.

Anything with the Joker in from The Dark Knight.

V's monologue and the final scene from V for Vendetta.

Also anything with a...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 05-23-2011, 03:54 PM
Replies: 9,826
Views: 311,364
Posted By evilclonier
Crushcrushcrush- Paramore.

Crushcrushcrush- Paramore.
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 05-23-2011, 12:23 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 826
Posted By evilclonier
I see no reason why you can't write it from both...

I see no reason why you can't write it from both character's perspectives. When it seems more appropriate write it from character's point of view, then in other situations you might want to write it...
Forum: Poetry 05-23-2011, 07:10 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,486
Posted By evilclonier
Short and sweet; a nice piece. The last line made...

Short and sweet; a nice piece. The last line made the poem for me, its alliterative quality defines the poem.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 05-23-2011, 07:07 AM
Replies: 8,559
Views: 221,101
Posted By evilclonier
@Nadja: Steal the drumsticks and put them in a...

@Nadja: Steal the drumsticks and put them in a tank with a tarantula in it. Friends solves all problems.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 05-22-2011, 01:05 PM
Replies: 8,559
Views: 221,101
Posted By evilclonier
After months of wanting to and being prevented...

After months of wanting to and being prevented from doing so by how busy I was, I finally started my Steampunk piece today. I'm not entirely sure yet whether it'll be a novel or a short story yet,...
Forum: Writers' Cafe 05-22-2011, 07:41 AM
Replies: 9,826
Views: 311,364
Posted By evilclonier
New Storms for Older Lovers- La Dispute.

New Storms for Older Lovers- La Dispute.
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