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Forum: Poetry 09-06-2017, 02:59 PM
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Hun, humour me. Experiment by writing it in 1st...

Hun, humour me. Experiment by writing it in 1st person or even a combination of 1st and 3rd. In my opinion you have a distance that possibly you want the concept to posses, but it feels like a...
Forum: Poetry 09-04-2017, 03:41 PM
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Posted By iDrew
However well drawn the scene maybe I’m not really...

However well drawn the scene maybe I’m not really feeling it, but why that is I’m not too sure. Possibly the scene is too general and almost fleeting as if the reader is just walking through. I feel...
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