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Forum: Fiction 09-08-2018, 12:53 AM
Replies: 93
Views: 1,825
Posted By daes13
I mean give us more damnit! Its been weeks now...

I mean give us more damnit! Its been weeks now haha. And don't cut anything completely unless you decide it doesnt go with the story. As it stands 2 goes with the story better than 1 to me, because...
Forum: Fiction 09-07-2018, 04:53 PM
Replies: 93
Views: 1,825
Posted By daes13
I once gave one of my professors the first two...

I once gave one of my professors the first two pages of a current work,cause that's all he asked for. Prestigiously published man from New York with an extensive Wikipedia page and a multitude of...
Forum: Fiction 09-06-2018, 03:14 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 188
Posted By daes13
Just caught up and saw the part where you are...

Just caught up and saw the part where you are doing a pulp mocku of sorts. Unfortunately, your writing is too good for that, or the fact that there is an utter lack of humor in these pieces.

Its...
Forum: Fiction 09-04-2018, 09:58 AM
Replies: 93
Views: 1,825
Posted By daes13
I gotta quit commenting when I'm drunk. The fuck...

I gotta quit commenting when I'm drunk. The fuck was I even on hahaha.

POD bah!
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 09-04-2018, 07:07 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 487
Posted By daes13
Read any of the exchanges between the users here,...

Read any of the exchanges between the users here, writers cafe is a good start. You'll see plenty of grey.
Forum: Free Writing 09-03-2018, 02:28 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 221
Posted By daes13
May I offer one piece of advice... John...

May I offer one piece of advice...

John Ruskin on Gothic Architecture
Forum: Fiction 09-03-2018, 01:41 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 395
Posted By daes13
Read 2 and 3 at least chin, its all written well,...

Read 2 and 3 at least chin, its all written well, but those two reek of character.
Forum: The Intellectual Table 09-02-2018, 11:53 AM
Replies: 457
Views: 36,404
Posted By daes13
Can we eliminate word count limitations? Just...

Can we eliminate word count limitations? Just have it so the poster warns how long it is?
Forum: Writers' Cafe 09-02-2018, 03:29 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 252
Posted By daes13
Just wondering if they're still working on shit,...

Just wondering if they're still working on shit, or found a new place to get the crits they need, or dont nedd eh hahaha
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 09-01-2018, 05:12 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 487
Posted By daes13
Hey KS, your link dont work no more

Hey KS, your link dont work no more
Forum: Writers' Cafe 09-01-2018, 03:57 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 252
Posted By daes13
Where did they go?

Just wondering where the previous members went, and no, this ain't no excuse to beat the dead horse that is WritersBeat. Just wondering where the members such as: Lon Palmer, Shelly/CityBoy, Devon,...
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 09-01-2018, 02:20 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 487
Posted By daes13
Shades of grey in a character and a Byronic hero...

Shades of grey in a character and a Byronic hero are two different things. Even in Fairie Queen by Spenser the hero had shades of grey. They can be merely weaknesses, as shown by the allegory.
...
Forum: The Intellectual Table 09-01-2018, 01:54 PM
Replies: 457
Views: 36,404
Posted By daes13
Thanks to Mohican for making the Rules and...

Thanks to Mohican for making the Rules and Guidelines thread foremost:

" Too much of anything is never good. When posting, instead of making multiple posts, use the 'edit' button when you have...
Forum: Free Writing 08-31-2018, 12:17 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 186
Posted By daes13
This. This right here.

This. This right here.
Forum: Fiction 08-30-2018, 02:43 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 512
Posted By daes13
Is this going to be just a flash or is it going...

Is this going to be just a flash or is it going to be a short story?
Forum: Fiction 08-30-2018, 10:03 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 395
Posted By daes13
2 and 3 are written very well. Is each section...

2 and 3 are written very well. Is each section this short? If so, have you considered a memoir diary format?
Forum: Fiction 08-29-2018, 03:39 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 301
Posted By daes13
Writing a first person POV heavily laden with...

Writing a first person POV heavily laden with stream of consciousness of someone infamous is a daunting task. Many people will have their own opinions about the character.

You say he is speaking...
Forum: Free Writing 08-27-2018, 04:37 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 351
Posted By daes13
I ain't got a problem with the guys I know that...

I ain't got a problem with the guys I know that carry, just like they ain't got a problem with me carrying. Its the few that ain't got no business carrying that gives us all pause....

Maybe that...
Forum: Poetry 08-27-2018, 04:10 PM
Replies: 40
Views: 748
Posted By daes13
I would recommend a satirical Lyrical Ballads not...

I would recommend a satirical Lyrical Ballads not to improve poesy writing,but merely for our sake.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 08-26-2018, 01:00 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 284
Posted By daes13
Now dont you go forgetting bout us when you're...

Now dont you go forgetting bout us when you're all famous and shit. Cause, I hope you do. Congrats!
Forum: Fiction 08-26-2018, 10:59 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 288
Posted By daes13
Too much Hasbro not enough Dashiell Hamett

Too much Hasbro not enough Dashiell Hamett
Forum: Fiction 08-26-2018, 10:09 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 278
Posted By daes13
At least its a post for comments, whether sincere...

At least its a post for comments, whether sincere or not heh
Forum: Fiction 08-26-2018, 09:35 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 278
Posted By daes13
Give us a bit more. Its interesting so far,...

Give us a bit more.

Its interesting so far, but mostly because I want to see if the narration and description will pull through or need to be flushed.

Like the use of untrustworthy narrator....
Forum: Fiction 08-22-2018, 06:56 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 308
Posted By daes13
Read all three to make sure I was not missing...

Read all three to make sure I was not missing anything:

They each come off as outlines as opposed to chapters, which is fine for when you rewrite later. Just make sure the info dumps are conveyed...
Forum: Fiction 08-19-2018, 12:50 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 512
Posted By daes13
Agree with Blue, the conversation is stilted and...

Agree with Blue, the conversation is stilted and seems like an outline if where you want it to go as opposed to what they would really say.

I think theres a story in here, but there's an utter...
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