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Forum: Fiction 09-02-2009, 06:31 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 790
Posted By Love2Write
Truly. Lol. Thanks.

Truly. Lol. Thanks.
Forum: Fiction 09-01-2009, 04:03 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 790
Posted By Love2Write
A bit heavy on the capitals? Lol. Sorry about...

A bit heavy on the capitals? Lol. Sorry about that. I figured that the form of leukemia would need to be capitalized.

Anyways, thanks.
Forum: Fiction 09-01-2009, 04:01 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 790
Posted By Love2Write
Thanks Shadowpen, and yes, it's a prologue, not...

Thanks Shadowpen, and yes, it's a prologue, not an epilogue. Sorry about the confusion.
Forum: Fiction 09-01-2009, 03:29 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 790
Posted By Love2Write
Untitled Novel - Prologue

If someone could edit this epilogue for me and maybe offer an opinion or some suggestions, I'd really appreciate it.

Prologue

In the spring of 2006, I was diagnosed with acute...
Forum: Poetry 06-13-2007, 03:12 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 535
Posted By Love2Write
Hey Skhull. Interesting poem! I really liked...

Hey Skhull.
Interesting poem! I really liked it.
I love the imagry and wording that you used.
Good job!
Forum: Poetry 06-13-2007, 01:36 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 561
Posted By Love2Write
Hey poemgirl. This poem was very nicely...

Hey poemgirl.
This poem was very nicely written! I agree that the italics make the poem more delicate and add a little something to it but some people have trouble reading italics and may say that...
Forum: Poetry 06-13-2007, 01:17 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 669
Posted By Love2Write
Thank you very much Skhull! It wasn't really...

Thank you very much Skhull!
It wasn't really ment to be anything special, but sweet, as you said.
Forum: Poetry 06-13-2007, 11:28 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 783
Posted By Love2Write
Hello Simply_Toxic. Interesting poem! I found...

Hello Simply_Toxic.
Interesting poem! I found it to be fresh; something I've never read before! I like the whole idea about cyber love; it's really interesting, the way you expressed it in this...
Forum: Poetry 06-13-2007, 11:18 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 503
Posted By Love2Write
Ok, now it makes sence to me! Thank you for...

Ok, now it makes sence to me! Thank you for explaining. Sometimes I'm a little slow, thus resulting in my misunderstanding/not understanding things!
Well, you may also wish to add a little to the...
Forum: Introductions 06-13-2007, 11:12 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 494
Posted By Love2Write
Welcome to the forums Brian!

Welcome to the forums Brian!
Forum: Introductions 06-13-2007, 11:12 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 567
Posted By Love2Write
Welcome to the forums Serena! What writing do...

Welcome to the forums Serena!
What writing do you specialize in?
Forum: Poetry 06-13-2007, 11:08 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 669
Posted By Love2Write
You're All I've Ever Needed

You’re all I’ve ever needed-
for I know,
when I fall,
you’ll help me up.

Tomorrow if you aren’t here,
and I fall-
I’ll drown,
in a puddle of tears.
Forum: Poetry 06-13-2007, 10:49 AM
Replies: 2
War
Views: 556
Posted By Love2Write
Hey allapoet. Nice poem! I think it was well...

Hey allapoet.
Nice poem! I think it was well written and unique.
I have a few suggested changes though...
Here's your poem rewritten with the suggested changes...

You write about war-
I have...
Forum: Poetry 06-13-2007, 10:39 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 594
Posted By Love2Write
Hey Enilorc. I like this poem! It's unique and...

Hey Enilorc.
I like this poem! It's unique and well written!
Good job! :)
Forum: Poetry 06-13-2007, 10:38 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 503
Posted By Love2Write
Hi Enilorac. I like the way the poem is written...

Hi Enilorac.
I like the way the poem is written but I'm afraid that I don't really understand the idea behind it. Could you explain the poem a little? Why was 'Dirty Mouth' chosen as the tittle? I'm...
Forum: Poetry 06-13-2007, 10:32 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,099
Posted By Love2Write
Thank you. Thank you ver much! No, I...

Thank you.


Thank you ver much!
No, I do not/never have had cancer. I have lost family and friends to it though, so I've seen the effects of it, frist hand.



Thank you.
I'm sorry to...
Forum: Poetry 05-11-2007, 07:37 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 712
Posted By Love2Write
Hey Saint! I love the way you wrote this poem!...

Hey Saint!
I love the way you wrote this poem! Honestly, I have a strange interest in dark poetry and I thought this was fit my interest perfectly -not sure if you intended it to be a dark poem. ...
Forum: Poetry 05-11-2007, 07:29 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 905
Posted By Love2Write
Glad I could help Saint! I personaly hate...

Glad I could help Saint!
I personaly hate punctuation, but in school they nit pick so I'm use to having to add all the commas and periods.
Forum: Introductions 05-11-2007, 07:13 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 996
Posted By Love2Write
Welcome to the forums Robert! Wow, I must say...

Welcome to the forums Robert!
Wow, I must say that you've wrote the best introduction to this site that I've ever read. You seem like a very interesting person.
Sorry to hear about your novel...
Forum: Introductions 05-11-2007, 07:05 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 756
Posted By Love2Write
Welcome to the forums Godssoulja! I'm glad you...

Welcome to the forums Godssoulja!
I'm glad you took the time to introduce yourself, it's nice meeting the new members of the site! What types of writing do you specialize in? I'm a poetry finatic....
Forum: Introductions 05-11-2007, 07:01 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 703
Posted By Love2Write
Welcome to the forums taliesin! Your a poet?...

Welcome to the forums taliesin!
Your a poet? Interesting. Plan on posting any poems? I love reading and writing poetry -It's my favorite form of writing!
Well, I look forward to maybe reading some...
Forum: Poetry 05-10-2007, 04:32 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,343
Posted By Love2Write
Great job everyone and congradulations Gary! ...

Great job everyone and congradulations Gary!
Thanks to all the judges for the great comments.
:)
Forum: Introductions 05-10-2007, 03:21 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 734
Posted By Love2Write
Welcome to the forums Erin! You just finished...

Welcome to the forums Erin!
You just finished your first novel? Wow, I've been working on my first novel forever -I sure hope I can say "I finished my first nove" soon. Will you post any snippets of...
Forum: Introductions 05-10-2007, 03:17 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 913
Posted By Love2Write
Welcome to the forums HauntedShirley! Well I...

Welcome to the forums HauntedShirley!
Well I think you may have found that laid back, friendly forum you were looking for.
I hope you enjoy yourself here and I look forward to reading some of your...
Forum: Introductions 05-10-2007, 03:14 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 786
Posted By Love2Write
Welcome to the forums JohnG. I look forward to...

Welcome to the forums JohnG.
I look forward to reading some of your work!
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