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Forum: Tips & Advice 12-18-2014, 02:33 AM
Replies: 22
Views: 5,157
Posted By Fkegs
i think for me a good writer is someone who...

i think for me a good writer is someone who captivates his/her audience, the story could be inspirational or people are compelled to read.
Forum: Tips & Advice 12-18-2014, 02:31 AM
Replies: 22
Views: 5,157
Posted By Fkegs
yeah that's true, there are a few books i have...

yeah that's true, there are a few books i have read that are terrible but somehow i remember them lol
Forum: Fiction 09-28-2014, 06:42 AM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,464
Posted By Fkegs
is the mc sick, she gives me a crazy kind of...

is the mc sick, she gives me a crazy kind of vibe. I felt like this story was too straight to the point, the dialogue short and snappy but i liked it, i think it's interesting that she has more than...
Forum: Fiction 09-07-2014, 04:31 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 538
Posted By Fkegs
double space the dialogue and set paragraphs so...

double space the dialogue and set paragraphs so it would look better to read
Forum: Fiction 09-01-2014, 12:46 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 764
Posted By Fkegs
I love how you began this chapter with "Dear god...

I love how you began this chapter with "Dear god i just want out of this place", to me that was humorous your character seems humorous. I would love for you to add more so i can discover more about...
Forum: Fiction 09-01-2014, 07:14 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 869
Posted By Fkegs
thanks

Thanks very much for checking it out, you feedback means a lot
Forum: Fiction 09-01-2014, 05:02 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 783
Posted By Fkegs
Hi mip, I feel there should be more dialogue in...

Hi mip, I feel there should be more dialogue in your story to make it interesting. Daniel is a very relate-able character who seems to be the highly gifted geek that succeeded in life. He reminds me...
Forum: Fiction 09-01-2014, 04:46 AM
Replies: 24
Views: 1,385
Posted By Fkegs
The story was very simple, i didn't know this is...

The story was very simple, i didn't know this is fashion fiction. Keep postingxxx
Forum: Fiction 08-31-2014, 03:34 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 869
Posted By Fkegs
Thanks very much max, i am very grateful

Thanks very much max, i am very grateful
Forum: Fiction 08-31-2014, 07:16 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,128
Posted By Fkegs
dialogue

I would say that you should add more dialogue and cut down the lines so it would be more appealing to read.
Hope we can connect on here, r u on twitter?
Forum: Introductions 08-29-2014, 02:12 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 550
Posted By Fkegs
hi

Hi how r u, welcome to this forum i have not been here for long. I like writing too, hope we can connect on herexx
Forum: Fiction 08-22-2014, 09:11 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 869
Posted By Fkegs
Satan 7 re-edited sample 1

please give me your honest feedback and if you can like, share, comment.
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Forum: Writers' Cafe 08-22-2014, 07:45 AM
Replies: 32
Views: 2,268
Posted By Fkegs
I think her writing is a ok. I don't like it when...

I think her writing is a ok. I don't like it when people say it's YA, that's just an excuse. If she want to write well then she should. People may not like the twilight series and will use it as a...
Forum: Fiction 08-22-2014, 07:39 AM
Replies: 33
Views: 1,601
Posted By Fkegs
true

definitely but it was a great effort.
Forum: Introductions 08-18-2014, 04:50 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 863
Posted By Fkegs
hi connory hope to connect with u on here

hi connory hope to connect with u on here
Forum: Introductions 08-18-2014, 04:36 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 346
Posted By Fkegs
hi glenna

hi glenna
Forum: Introductions 08-18-2014, 04:19 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,138
Posted By Fkegs
hi fail writer hope u enjoy the forum

hi fail writer hope u enjoy the forum
Forum: Introductions 08-18-2014, 04:06 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 638
Posted By Fkegs
hi ilae welcome to writers beat, I've not been...

hi ilae welcome to writers beat, I've not been here long too. Hope u enjoy it and we can connect on herexxx
Forum: Fiction 08-17-2014, 01:14 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 682
Posted By Fkegs
nice try, I love how you made this story sexy,...

nice try, I love how you made this story sexy, i'm sure this genre falls in erotica. I love it, hope we can connect on here.
Forum: Writing Help & Issues 08-17-2014, 12:31 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,473
Posted By Fkegs
Hi Jack I think u should just give it a go and...

Hi Jack I think u should just give it a go and like the person above me said, try wiring a short story first. See what happens after that.
Forum: Writers' Cafe 08-17-2014, 12:26 PM
Replies: 31
Views: 1,960
Posted By Fkegs
it changes for me, sometimes I am morning and...

it changes for me, sometimes I am morning and sometimes I'm evening. wbu
Forum: Writers' Cafe 07-27-2014, 08:18 AM
Replies: 23
Views: 2,495
Posted By Fkegs
I agree

I will do research later rather than do it during my writing time, I just want to write and not focus on the researching part lol
Forum: Research Section 07-27-2014, 08:10 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 3,928
Posted By Fkegs
Your plot sound interesting have read a few...

Your plot sound interesting have read a few stories based on this. I personally think your victims should be insecure people who are desperately broken or going through something. Hope this helps
Forum: Writers' Cafe 07-26-2014, 10:29 AM
Replies: 20
Views: 1,511
Posted By Fkegs
Icon7 True

I agree. I think if you are not visualizing when reading then the words off the page aren't going in your head which means you aren't really reading u r just scanning
Forum: Non-Fiction 07-26-2014, 10:25 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 806
Posted By Fkegs
Icon7 Amazing

AMAZING! I totally agree. I like to write because I enjoy it and love to be creative. I think I could see this as a career lol. What stores have you written
FEY
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