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Forum: Fiction 01-13-2014, 11:24 PM
Replies: 13
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Posted By Lyn05
Ah, I see I've gotten it wrong. This is very...

Ah, I see I've gotten it wrong. This is very intriguing; hope to see more!:)
Forum: Fiction 01-11-2014, 02:11 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,645
Posted By Lyn05
I like how you portrayed the change in Bobby, and...

I like how you portrayed the change in Bobby, and his self-consciousness and low self-esteem comes through clearly in the second part of the story. I also feel like there's more to the story; do you...
Forum: Scripts 01-10-2014, 08:06 AM
Replies: 18
Views: 10,609
Posted By Lyn05
Overall I found the plot interesting, except for...

Overall I found the plot interesting, except for the part on drug-testing.

Since Danielle had tested the drugs on four men before (I'm assuming through similar means like marriage/cohabitation),...
Forum: Fiction 01-09-2014, 06:59 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 521
Posted By Lyn05
I enjoyed the humour in this piece. I tried...

I enjoyed the humour in this piece. I tried literature before and unfortunately, poetry more or lessed seemed like that to me.

But just a minor error, if I may? The apostrophe is missing in 'its'.
Forum: Introductions 01-09-2014, 06:31 PM
Replies: 3
Hi
Views: 459
Posted By Lyn05
Hi

Hi everyone, I'm new to this forum. I hope to learn a lot from you guys and hopefully I'll be able to contribute as much as well!

-Lyn
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