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Forum: Poetry 08-19-2017, 05:50 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 681
Posted By vladimus
I am the farthest thing from a new member, I...

I am the farthest thing from a new member, I assure you...as I stated before, this piece was thrown together. Raw and uncensored if you will. If you're looking for something with more structure I'd...
Forum: Poetry 08-18-2017, 12:22 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 681
Posted By vladimus
Admittedly, yes...this wasn't my best piece or...

Admittedly, yes...this wasn't my best piece or even close to it. Fact is I never intended for it to be, it was something I saw in the back of my mind that I let spill out onto the page. I wasn't...
Forum: Poetry 08-18-2017, 01:08 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 681
Posted By vladimus
Inner Demons

I can feel him now...
Yes, he's so close but how?
No...I locked him away
I threw away the key
For a second, for just a second
He could not get to me.
He's on the rise now,
An unquenchable...
Forum: Poetry 04-26-2016, 06:45 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 692
Posted By vladimus
You Again...

The room was cold and damp,
A looming smell of rust surrounded me.
It looked at me with a frigid set of azure eyes,
Grinning with those jagged, razor teeth.
It's ivory skin pulled taut against...
Forum: Poetry 12-31-2015, 10:35 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 613
Posted By vladimus
Thanks for the read. Had to dust off the keyboard...

Thanks for the read. Had to dust off the keyboard as I haven't written in a while. If I was halfway decent at writing songs I might work it into one. Either way, thanks for the read.
Forum: Poetry 12-30-2015, 08:40 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 613
Posted By vladimus
When it Rains

I can't begin to describe it,
But I suppose I could try...
It's...pure ecstasy.
I like to think of it as;
The moment just before you get goosebumps.
That tantalising chill,
You know the one.
...
Forum: Poetry 11-07-2015, 05:42 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 713
Posted By vladimus
I rather like this peice of work. It's soothing...

I rather like this peice of work. It's soothing but in a haunting kind of way. Wouldn't change a thing, well done.
Forum: Poetry 11-05-2015, 08:35 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 489
Posted By vladimus
It's My Stapler

I've had it with these people,
I've had it with this place.
Surrounded by a million souls,
When I just want some space.
I'm under paid and over worked,
I think I've reached my peak.
So,...
Forum: Poetry 11-04-2015, 11:41 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 468
Posted By vladimus
It's Over

A cold chill hits the nape of my neck,
It runs down to my spine.
My greatest fear has taken form...
Dear Lord, it's come alive.
This isn't what I'd pictured,
This isn't what I'd had in mind....
Forum: Poetry 01-04-2015, 06:16 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 458
Posted By vladimus
Into the Black

Once there was a cabin,
Now empty as can be.
It sits upon a dark hill,
Covered in debris.
It was in this very cabin,
That good souls were laid to rest
By a man who dressed in black.
Something...
Forum: Poetry 01-04-2015, 06:09 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 974
Posted By vladimus
Thank you, I thought it might touch home for a...

Thank you, I thought it might touch home for a few because I'm sure every one of us has wanted to let go at one point or another. Thanks again for the read KBR!
Forum: Poetry 12-18-2014, 08:01 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 974
Posted By vladimus
Why thank you, glad you enjoyed it!

Why thank you, glad you enjoyed it!
Forum: Poetry 12-18-2014, 05:41 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 974
Posted By vladimus
He snapped.

He snapped.
Forum: Poetry 12-18-2014, 08:49 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 974
Posted By vladimus
Exhale

I take a deep breath, close my eyes and exhale.
I can hear them whisper.
Hushed giggles fill the room.
They glance at me,
I glare back as they turn to snicker.

I take a deep breath, close my...
Forum: Fiction 12-18-2014, 08:04 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 820
Posted By vladimus
I rather intended to have it end with his...

I rather intended to have it end with his removing of the eyes, I didn't however intend for it to be comical in the least, more so intense, hence the drawn out set up. I redirected another commenter...
Forum: Fiction 12-18-2014, 07:54 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 820
Posted By vladimus
Usually my works are broken up so they are...

Usually my works are broken up so they are legible at the least, only difference this time was I actually used my phone to type this story up. I know when I looked at it all bunched together it was a...
Forum: Fiction 12-17-2014, 05:00 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 820
Posted By vladimus
Thanks for the veiw, I actually got the idea from...

Thanks for the veiw, I actually got the idea from a piece of literature called noises. Not sure who wrote it but was very well constructed. If you liked this you should check it out, go to YouTube...
Forum: Fiction 12-16-2014, 09:09 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 820
Posted By vladimus
What a Sight

I stepped in, closing the door behind me. The keys clunk together as I threw them onto the counter. I plopped into one of the wooden chairs at the table and slapped the stack of bills down onto the...
Forum: Poetry 04-21-2014, 06:38 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 451
Posted By vladimus
You Don't Know...

You don't know...
I pray you never have to know.
That's a hell I wouldn't wish upon my greatest enemy.

Consider yourself lucky,
Because you don't know what fear is...
I pray you don't.
Losing...
Forum: Poetry 02-18-2014, 12:17 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 533
Posted By vladimus
Thank you very much Pandora, comments like this...

Thank you very much Pandora, comments like this get me through days like the one described in this poem. I can't write some of the things I think or feel on places like Facebook so I come here and I...
Forum: Poetry 02-16-2014, 08:52 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 533
Posted By vladimus
Can't say I have, but this has been my basic...

Can't say I have, but this has been my basic living situation for quite some time, hoping to get my own place soon.
Forum: Poetry 02-16-2014, 07:53 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 533
Posted By vladimus
Full Circle

Yep,
Saw this coming...
They're raising their voices.
About what exactly?
Flawed choices.
Soon will be the noises...
Of box packing,
And item wrapping.
Then off we go,
Yep!
Forum: Poetry 02-11-2014, 10:49 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 515
Posted By vladimus
Thank you, honestly I hesitated with it because I...

Thank you, honestly I hesitated with it because I thought it might be in bad taste.
Forum: Poetry 02-11-2014, 06:05 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 515
Posted By vladimus
Consider the previous grammatical and punctual...

Consider the previous grammatical and punctual errors fixed.
Forum: Poetry 02-10-2014, 08:29 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 515
Posted By vladimus
Director's Cut

As the razor digs deep within,
I feel like I can feel again.

Emotionless...
Drawn to the blade,
Expressionless...
Drawn by the rage.
Effortlessly,
Drawing blood.
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